MAALIK DAATAA (Ghazal-e-Prastish)

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MAALIK DAATAA

Eh merey maalik daataa mujhey gyaan aisaa tu de
Bhatkun naa jaa.bijah mujhey dhayaan aisaa tu de

Kisee ko koi kami naa rahe kuchh aisaa sabar tu de
Har koi hanse khush rahe koi aisii hee khabar tu de

Rahe har koi ik doojey ke ishq mein aisii chah tu de
Koi dushmani naa rahe jahan mein aisii nigah tu de

Bashar bashar pasand kare kuchh aisii shakal tu de
Insan galation kaa putlaa to naa rahe aisii akal tu de

Koi jhoothaa naa rahe sachhaaii kee aisii rah tu de
Makaari naa bachhey sabko saafaaii kee chah tu de

Bashar ko jazbaa de deen dyaaltaa kaa ek dar tu de
Jo bhi aaye khaali naa jaaye,   aisaa ussey ghar tu de

MohaN achhaa kahe aur sune aisii nadar chah tu de
Mar ke paas jo aaye terey apni hee dagar jagah tu de

Surindar. N                            "MohaN"

Jaa.bijah = har jagah; Jazbaa = passion;
Dagar = path; raastaa;
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«Reply #1 on: June 14, 2016, 02:34:12 AM »
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MAALIK DAATAA

Eh merey maalik daataa mujhey gyaan aisaa tu de
Bhatkun naa jaa.bijah mujhey dhayaan aisaa tu de

Kisee ko koi kami naa rahe kuchh aisaa sabar tu de
Har koi hanse khush rahe koi aisii hee khabar tu de

Rahe har koi ik doojey ke ishq mein aisii chah tu de
Koi dushmani naa rahe jahan mein aisii nigah tu de

Bashar bashar pasand kare kuchh aisii shakal tu de
Insan galation kaa putlaa to naa rahe aisii akal tu de

Koi jhoothaa naa rahe sachhaaii kee aisii rah tu de
Makaari naa bachhey sabko saafaaii kee chah tu de

Bashar ko jazbaa de deen dyaaltaa kaa ek dar tu de
Jo bhi aaye khaali naa jaaye,   aisaa ussey ghar tu de

MohaN achhaa kahe aur sune aisii nadar chah tu de
Mar ke paas jo aaye terey apni hee dagar jagah tu de

Surindar. N                            "MohaN"

Jaa.bijah = jagah jagah; Jazbaa = passion;
Dagar = path; raastaa;

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«Reply #2 on: June 14, 2016, 05:53:14 AM »
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Sir ji aapki is khoobsurat dua par Aameen kahne ke baad, Rau ka nazrana hazir karta hoon...
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Jaa.bijah = galat rastaa; (Ja'baja = everywhere/har jaga)
Jazbaa = mohabbat; passion; (Jazba = passion; jazba'e'ishq = passion of love)
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Sir ji aapki is khoobsurat dua par Aameen kahne ke baad, Rau ka nazrana hazir karta hoon...
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Jaa.bijah = galat rastaa; (Ja'baja = everywhere/har jaga)
Jazbaa = mohabbat; passion; (Jazba = passion; jazba'e'ishq = passion of love)
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«Reply #6 on: June 16, 2016, 04:06:52 AM »
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MAALIK DAATAA

Eh merey maalik daataa mujhey gyaan aisaa tu de
Bhatkun naa jaa.bijah mujhey dhayaan aisaa tu de

Kisee ko koi kami naa rahe kuchh aisaa sabar tu de
Har koi hanse khush rahe koi aisii hee khabar tu de

Rahe har koi ik doojey ke ishq mein aisii chah tu de
Koi dushmani naa rahe jahan mein aisii nigah tu de

Bashar bashar pasand kare kuchh aisii shakal tu de
Insan galation kaa putlaa to naa rahe aisii akal tu de

Koi jhoothaa naa rahe sachhaaii kee aisii rah tu de
Makaari naa bachhey sabko saafaaii kee chah tu de

Bashar ko jazbaa de deen dyaaltaa kaa ek dar tu de
Jo bhi aaye khaali naa jaaye,   aisaa ussey ghar tu de

MohaN achhaa kahe aur sune aisii nadar chah tu de
Mar ke paas jo aaye terey apni hee dagar jagah tu de

Surindar. N                            "MohaN"

Jaa.bijah = har jagah; Jazbaa = passion;
Dagar = path; raastaa;

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