Main Jo Bhi Hoon, Jaisa Bhi Hoon "Khwaish"

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Naam Waffa Ka Iss Dil ke,
Dar-o-deewar par Sajaye Rakhna

Zindagi mein Laakh Mushkile Hi Sahi!!
Har kadam Par Apni Himmat Banaye Rakhna

Aandhiyon Ka Kaam Hai Jalti shama Ko Hawa Dena!!
Par Umeed Ki Shama Dil Mein Apne Jalaye Rakhna

Hum Woh Phool Hai Jisse paal-Pos Kar Seencha Buzurgo Ne!!
Apne maa-Baap Ka Naam Humesha Uncha Banaye Rakhna

Apni Daulat-Shohrat Par Kabhi Zara Sa Bhi Naa Ghamand kar!!
Zindagi Ki Unchaiyon Par Bhi Sar Apna Jhukaye Rakhna

Main Jo bhi Hoon, Akhir Hoon Ek Hissa Mitti Ka!!!
Mere Baad Mujhe Yaad Kare Log!!!
Sab Ke Dilon mein Ghar Apna Banaye Rakhna

"Khwaish" Ki Bas Itni Si Dua hai!!!
Main Jo bhi Hoon, Jaisa Bhi Hoon!!
Eh Khuda!!! Mujhe Humesha Apna Banaye Rakhna...

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: February 24, 2011, 03:13:22 PM »
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bht khoob khwaish ji.....
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«Reply #2 on: February 24, 2011, 03:15:26 PM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on February 24, 2011, 03:13:22 PM
bht khoob khwaish ji.....

Thankyou Sooooooooooo Much Priya Ji Par Aaj Aapne Apna Pasandida Sher Nahi Chuuna???  icon_flower
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«Reply #3 on: February 24, 2011, 03:19:02 PM »
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kyuki is poem me se koi ek sher chunna munasib nahi laga......
itna accha topic utahaya hai aapne.....
puri ki puri poem hi bht khoobsurat hai ji...
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«Reply #4 on: February 24, 2011, 03:20:22 PM »
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khwiash ji maja aa gaya ji.........

ye bahot touchy he .........dil me ghar banati poetry......
bahot hi umda he dost.........congrats and thx for sharing...

few lines....

zindagi char din ki, ehsaas he hazaro
me gar ruth bhi jau to tum manaye rakhna

nadan hu me anjaan hu me duniya ke chalan se
tanha chlna he mushkil ye khuda tu saya banaye rakhna
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«Reply #5 on: February 24, 2011, 03:27:52 PM »
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Quote from: Matrix Guy on February 24, 2011, 03:20:22 PM
khwiash ji maja aa gaya ji.........

ye bahot touchy he .........dil me ghar banati poetry......
bahot hi umda he dost.........congrats and thx for sharing...

few lines....

zindagi char din ki, ehsaas he hazaro
me gar ruth bhi jau to tum manaye rakhna

nadan hu me anjaan hu me duniya ke chalan se
tanha chlna he mushkil ye khuda tu saya banaye rakhna




Aapka Bahut bahut Shukriya Uthkarshji..Aur Sach Mein Aapne bahut Khooooooooob likha..Apaka Likha Padhkar Kuch Aur Likhne Ko Jee Ho Aaya Hai

Waqt To chalta Rehta Hai APni Raftaar mein
Mere Kadam Ladkada Jaaye To Tum Haath Apna Badaye Rakhna...

Main Har Muskhil Ka Saamna Karna Seekh Jaaunga!!!
Bas!!! Khuda APni Mehar wali nazar Mujh Gareeb Par banaye Rakhna...
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«Reply #6 on: February 24, 2011, 03:39:08 PM »
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hay.............

fir maar dala...........

khwaish ji ek nayi theme mix kar raha hu isme .........aaj kuch purana likha yaad dila diya apne..........maaf kijiyega post se kuch alag he theme but raha na ja raha so pesh kar raha hu..likhne me maja aa raha he...ek request he ise gungunane ki koshish karna .umidd karta hu apko pasad ayega.....

Ee Khuda
Mohhabat Ki Shamma Jalaye Rakhna
Shama Ka Ye Noor Mere Mahbub Se Hi He
Sanam Ka Husn  Tu Qayamt Tak Banaye Rakhna

Sari Raat
Ye Mahfil U Hi Sajaye Rakhna
Hum Hi Nahi Kuch Aur Bhi He Unhe Chahne Wale
Kuch Karam Un Diwano Par Bhi Banaye Rakhna

Na Aa Jaye Nind
Tu Hume Jagaye Rakhna
Jo Ho Jau Jaha Se Rukhsat Unhe Dekhte Huey
Meri Kabrr Par Bhi Mohhabat Ki Shamma Jalaye Rakhna
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«Reply #7 on: February 24, 2011, 04:01:37 PM »
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Bahut Khub Khwaish Ji Bahut Hi Lajwab Aur Behtrin
Peshkash Ki Hai Apne Excellent Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: February 24, 2011, 04:12:57 PM »
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Quote from: Matrix Guy on February 24, 2011, 03:39:08 PM
hay.............

fir maar dala...........

khwaish ji ek nayi theme mix kar raha hu isme .........aaj kuch purana likha yaad dila diya apne..........maaf kijiyega post se kuch alag he theme but raha na ja raha so pesh kar raha hu..likhne me maja aa raha he...ek request he ise gungunane ki koshish karna .umidd karta hu apko pasad ayega.....

Ee Khuda
Mohhabat Ki Shamma Jalaye Rakhna
Shama Ka Ye Noor Mere Mahbub Se Hi He
Sanam Ka Husn  Tu Qayamt Tak Banaye Rakhna

Sari Raat
Ye Mahfil U Hi Sajaye Rakhna
Hum Hi Nahi Kuch Aur Bhi He Unhe Chahne Wale
Kuch Karam Un Diwano Par Bhi Banaye Rakhna

Na Aa Jaye Nind
Tu Hume Jagaye Rakhna
Jo Ho Jau Jaha Se Rukhsat Unhe Dekhte Huey
Meri Kabrr Par Bhi Mohhabat Ki Shamma Jalaye Rakhna


Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Khoooooob Dost!!!! Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ehsaas...Vaakai Dil se Likhi gayi Baatein hai..Kuch Meri taraf Se Bhi..

Teri Hi Justujoo Hai,Teri Hi Aarzoo Hai
Apne Dil mein Meri Bhi Ek choti Si Jagah Banaye Rakhna..

Laakh Tufaan Uthe, Laakh Aaye Aandhiyan!!!
Haar Raah Mein humsafar Bankar Apna Saath Banaye Rakhna

Yuh To Aaj Rishto Mein Woh Mehak Zinda Nahi lekin!!!
 Dil Se Dil Ka Ek Rishta Banaye Rakhna

"Khwaish" Tujhe Dekhkar Muskurana Zaroor Seekh lega!!!
Bas! Guzaarish Itni Si Hai Zindagi bhar Aap Muskuraye Rakhna
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«Reply #9 on: February 24, 2011, 04:41:52 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 24, 2011, 02:56:08 PM
Naam Waffa Ka Iss Dil ke,
Dar-o-deewar par Sajaye Rakhna

Zindagi mein Laakh Mushkile Hi Sahi!!
Har kadam Par Apni Himmat Banaye Rakhna

Aandhiyon Ka Kaam Hai Jalti shama Ko Hawa Dena!!
Par Umeed Ki Shama Dil Mein Apne Jalaye Rakhna

Hum Woh Phool Hai Jisse paal-Pos Kar Seencha Buzurgo Ne!!
Apne maa-Baap Ka Naam Humesha Uncha Banaye Rakhna

Apni Daulat-Shohrat Par Kabhi Zara Sa Bhi Naa Ghamand kar!!
Zindagi Ki Unchaiyon Par Bhi Sar Apna Jhukaye Rakhna

"Khwaish" Main Jo bhi Hoon, Akhir Hoon Ek Hissa Mitti Ka!!!
Mere Baad Mujhe Yaad Kare Log!!!!
Sab Ke Dilon mein Ghar Apna Banaye Rakhna

"Khwaish" Ki Bas Itni Si Dua hai!!!
Main Jo bhi Hoon, Jaisa Bhi Hoon!!
Eh Khuda!!! Mujhe Humesha Apna Banaye Rakhna...

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Ki gal hai too gud ji...awesome es tou zyada lafz nhi mil rahe hor ki kawa ji..khubsurat likheya hai...too gud...
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«Reply #10 on: February 24, 2011, 07:58:11 PM »
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Khwaish dost aur Utkarsh bhai..

Aap dono ne kamal ka lika hai..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: February 25, 2011, 09:41:26 AM »
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SCINTILLATING CREATION... KHUWAISH JI...
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«Reply #12 on: February 25, 2011, 10:05:01 AM »
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wah bahut hi kamaal ka post hai.
ummedo se bhara ek seekh deti hui peshkash.
daad dil se
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«Reply #13 on: February 25, 2011, 01:15:06 PM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on February 24, 2011, 03:19:02 PM
kyuki is poem me se koi ek sher chunna munasib nahi laga......
itna accha topic utahaya hai aapne.....
puri ki puri poem hi bht khoobsurat hai ji...

Aapka Phir Se Teh Dil se Shukriya priyaji.Yuhi Saath banaye Rakhiyega icon_flower
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«Reply #14 on: February 25, 2011, 02:22:33 PM »
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no words what i can say only Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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