Main Jo Bhi Hoon, Jaisa Bhi Hoon "Khwaish"

by khwaish on February 24, 2011, 02:56:08 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 25, 2011, 07:23:07 PM »
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Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Khwaish Ji.. Bahoot Kamaal ka likha hai

Matrix ji aapka ka bhi jawab nahi

bahoot Khoob!!!
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«Reply #16 on: February 26, 2011, 08:34:02 AM »
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on February 24, 2011, 04:01:37 PM
Bahut Khub Khwaish Ji Bahut Hi Lajwab Aur Behtrin
Peshkash Ki Hai Apne Excellent Applause Applause

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«Reply #17 on: February 28, 2011, 08:53:34 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 24, 2011, 04:41:52 PM
Ki gal hai too gud ji...awesome es tou zyada lafz nhi mil rahe hor ki kawa ji..khubsurat likheya hai...too gud...

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«Reply #18 on: February 28, 2011, 03:19:03 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on February 24, 2011, 07:58:11 PM
Khwaish dost aur Utkarsh bhai..

Aap dono ne kamal ka lika hai..
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Khush rahiye..!

Aapka Tehhhhhhh Dilll Se shukriya Mere Dost!!! icon_flower
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«Reply #19 on: February 28, 2011, 05:15:46 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 24, 2011, 02:56:08 PM
Naam Waffa Ka Iss Dil ke,
Dar-o-deewar par Sajaye Rakhna

Zindagi mein Laakh Mushkile Hi Sahi!!
Har kadam Par Apni Himmat Banaye Rakhna

Aandhiyon Ka Kaam Hai Jalti shama Ko Hawa Dena!!
Par Umeed Ki Shama Dil Mein Apne Jalaye Rakhna

Hum Woh Phool Hai Jisse paal-Pos Kar Seencha Buzurgo Ne!!
Apne maa-Baap Ka Naam Humesha Uncha Banaye Rakhna

Apni Daulat-Shohrat Par Kabhi Zara Sa Bhi Naa Ghamand kar!!
Zindagi Ki Unchaiyon Par Bhi Sar Apna Jhukaye Rakhna

"Khwaish" Main Jo bhi Hoon, Akhir Hoon Ek Hissa Mitti Ka!!!
Mere Baad Mujhe Yaad Kare Log!!!!
Sab Ke Dilon mein Ghar Apna Banaye Rakhna

"Khwaish" Ki Bas Itni Si Dua hai!!!
Main Jo bhi Hoon, Jaisa Bhi Hoon!!
Eh Khuda!!! Mujhe Humesha Apna Banaye Rakhna...

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
mastam mast likha hai khwaish ji..ye thread padhkar to maza aagaya....superb 1

aankhon me sunhara khawaab sajaye rakhna
apne dil me kuch paane ka junuun banaye rakhna

zindagi bht chhoti hai isme na ladna jhgadna
jab bhi milo mujhe apna dost yunhi banaye rakhna

ghar samaaj aur bhrastachaar ko na badal pao bhale
khud ko tum ek achcha aur sachcha insaan banaye rakhna..!!!
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«Reply #20 on: February 28, 2011, 05:20:16 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 24, 2011, 04:12:57 PM
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Bahut Khoooooob Dost!!!! Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ehsaas...Vaakai Dil se Likhi gayi Baatein hai..Kuch Meri taraf Se Bhi..

Teri Hi Justujoo Hai,Teri Hi Aarzoo Hai
Apne Dil mein Meri Bhi Ek choti Si Jagah Banaye Rakhna..

Laakh Tufaan Uthe, Laakh Aaye Aandhiyan!!!
Haar Raah Mein humsafar Bankar Apna Saath Banaye Rakhna

Yuh To Aaj Rishto Mein Woh Mehak Zinda Nahi lekin!!!
 Dil Se Dil Ka Ek Rishta Banaye Rakhna

"Khwaish" Tujhe Dekhkar Muskurana Zaroor Seekh lega!!!
Bas! Guzaarish Itni Si Hai Zindagi bhar Aap Muskuraye Rakhna

bhtttttttttttttt mast likha hai khwaish ji........maza aagaya

yunhi hamesha likhte aur likhate rehna
sab k man ko yunhi hamesha lubhate rehna
hum to aapko padhkar bas kho se jate hain
hume yunhi apne ehsason se milwate rehna...!!!
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«Reply #21 on: February 28, 2011, 05:24:16 PM »
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Quote from: Matrix Guy on February 24, 2011, 03:20:22 PM
khwiash ji maja aa gaya ji.........

ye bahot touchy he .........dil me ghar banati poetry......
bahot hi umda he dost.........congrats and thx for sharing...

few lines....

zindagi char din ki, ehsaas he hazaro
me gar ruth bhi jau to tum manaye rakhna

nadan hu me anjaan hu me duniya ke chalan se
tanha chlna he mushkil ye khuda tu saya banaye rakhna


Quote from: Matrix Guy on February 24, 2011, 03:39:08 PM
hay.............

fir maar dala...........

khwaish ji ek nayi theme mix kar raha hu isme .........aaj kuch purana likha yaad dila diya apne..........maaf kijiyega post se kuch alag he theme but raha na ja raha so pesh kar raha hu..likhne me maja aa raha he...ek request he ise gungunane ki koshish karna .umidd karta hu apko pasad ayega.....

Ee Khuda
Mohhabat Ki Shamma Jalaye Rakhna
Shama Ka Ye Noor Mere Mahbub Se Hi He
Sanam Ka Husn  Tu Qayamt Tak Banaye Rakhna

Sari Raat
Ye Mahfil U Hi Sajaye Rakhna
Hum Hi Nahi Kuch Aur Bhi He Unhe Chahne Wale
Kuch Karam Un Diwano Par Bhi Banaye Rakhna

Na Aa Jaye Nind
Tu Hume Jagaye Rakhna
Jo Ho Jau Jaha Se Rukhsat Unhe Dekhte Huey
Meri Kabrr Par Bhi Mohhabat Ki Shamma Jalaye Rakhna


rajaji....excellent 1s ji...1st reply bht bht mast hai ji
and 2nd reply.. ur post..u knw ..so uske liye kuch nahin kahungi.......
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«Reply #22 on: March 01, 2011, 06:45:36 AM »
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«Reply #23 on: March 01, 2011, 07:58:54 AM »
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GUD WORK KHWAHISH & MATRIX GUY
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«Reply #24 on: March 01, 2011, 10:21:58 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on February 24, 2011, 07:58:11 PM
Khwaish dost aur Utkarsh bhai..

Aap dono ne kamal ka lika hai..
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Khush rahiye..!

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«Reply #25 on: March 03, 2011, 12:27:32 PM »
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Quote from: mrkotians on February 25, 2011, 09:41:26 AM
SCINTILLATING CREATION... KHUWAISH JI...

Aapka Teh Dilll Se Shukriya Mrkortians ji.. icon_flower
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«Reply #26 on: March 03, 2011, 12:57:38 PM »
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Bohat Achche Khwaaish Ji,.
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«Reply #27 on: March 05, 2011, 02:36:23 PM »
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Quote from: killbill on February 25, 2011, 10:05:01 AM
wah bahut hi kamaal ka post hai.
ummedo se bhara ek seekh deti hui peshkash.
daad dil se

Aapka Bahut bahut Shukriya Killbill Ji..

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«Reply #28 on: March 13, 2011, 10:06:28 AM »
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Wow bahut baddiya Khwaish ji,ape ehsaaso ko bahut khoobsurti se bayan kiya,bahut achi soch hai aapke,Matrix ji ne bhi bahut acha saath diya.lovely creation,hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #29 on: March 16, 2011, 02:09:35 PM »
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Quote from: kamal aggarwal on February 25, 2011, 02:22:33 PM
no words what i can say only Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Thankyou Soooooooooooo Much Kamal Ji.. icon_flower
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