Mere gunah

by Ricky on August 08, 2004, 03:15:29 PM
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Mere gunah zyada hain ya teri rehmatein,
....Kareem tuhi bata de hisaab karke ..!!

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«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2004, 03:16:59 PM »
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this is good
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«Reply #2 on: August 09, 2004, 04:59:04 AM »
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nice one Ricky

kar rahi hu gunah mai teri duniya mai
gunah mere, aor mai teri E Khuda
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«Reply #3 on: August 09, 2004, 07:30:31 AM »
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Pooja. very nice...
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«Reply #4 on: August 09, 2004, 10:31:48 PM »
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Khud ka yakin nahi, ab kis per yakin karu
Dekh kar teri Duniya, bas ab to yahi dua karu
Na ho jiska Tu, to uski kaya khata hai
hai jiske pass tu, Uski koi khata kaise
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«Reply #5 on: August 10, 2004, 04:48:49 PM »
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hai jiske pass tu, Uski koi khata kaise

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«Reply #6 on: August 10, 2004, 09:19:50 PM »
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jiske pass khuda hai, wo khuda ke sahare hi sab kar raha hai, to isme insaan ki kaya khatta hai, karane wala to khuda hai Usual Smile. Sanju "MIYAN" Ab aai apki samaj mai <<<
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«Reply #7 on: August 12, 2004, 05:40:34 AM »
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jiske pass khuda hai, wo khuda ke sahare hi sab kar raha hai, to isme insaan ki kaya khatta hai, karane wala to khuda hai Usual Smile. Sanju "MIYAN" Ab aai apki samaj mai <<<


jiska koi nahi uska khuda hai yaaron
main nahi kahta, kitabon me likha hai yaaron
   its not mine, gulam ali ka gaya ek gazal me se hai
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«Reply #8 on: August 15, 2004, 06:32:23 AM »
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its not mine, gulam ali ka gaya ek gazal me se hai


I like it  !! Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: August 18, 2004, 03:32:49 PM »
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good work all
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«Reply #10 on: August 23, 2004, 09:37:58 PM »
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mere gunaho ki muje aise saja mili
dil lagane ke bad na  muje koi dawa mili
jab bhi liya khuda ka naam maine
kayun uski hi tasweer muje bar bar dikhi
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«Reply #11 on: August 24, 2004, 02:43:58 AM »
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I wrote a poem here on my idea that God does not add all our good and bad deeds but just keeps the pluses as such and the minuses as such and gives us the same equally because others are affected by our actions too. Who removed it. Some others have been removed from this forum I have noticed. I also came to know that while this forum was moving to a different server some items were lost. Maybe it would be a good idea for next time to just close the forum while it is in the process of renovation.
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«Reply #12 on: August 24, 2004, 06:32:36 AM »
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Umm.

I think it is some bug or mistake .. Just post this in Forum suggestions and new section with link to this thread !
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«Reply #13 on: August 24, 2004, 03:43:50 PM »
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Sorry! I had to edit this entry 'cause I decided to come back to this beautiful forum.
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«Reply #14 on: August 24, 2004, 05:17:36 PM »
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Cool down !

No one wants to delete anybody's poem !! All know that how bad it is. Just think !!
Steal ? Who is going to use your poem ? or only yours ?

well !!

Naa gussa ho , naa dhao yun kayamat
Hum toh saham gaye, dekhi jo tumhari himmat
Aaane jaane ki kya baat kehto ho, vaqt ko toh samjho
Yeh toh sirf ek mod hai jahan tum khado ho
Ab tumhi ko samajhna hai ke raasta kaun sa chuno

JUST COOOL DOWN !
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