PYAS KAM NA HO

by SARVESH RASTOGI on March 24, 2009, 11:19:34 AM
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«Reply #30 on: June 20, 2009, 07:31:16 PM »
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Rastogi ji aaj aap ke ashar dobara padhe or ise frame karne se khud ko rok nahi paya, Beshak ye lajawab ash'ar hain...aap ne bohot hi umda likha he.

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«Reply #31 on: June 21, 2009, 05:36:00 AM »
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Bahut bahut Shukriya Sayyid Ji
Great, beautiful presentation in the frame
Beshaq ye rachna life ko bada inspire karti hai aur aapki tarif ne ise aur bhi shining di hai, thanks a lot.
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #32 on: June 21, 2009, 05:47:24 AM »
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Really Very Beautiful creation Sarvesh Ji.. Bahoot Khoob Likha hai
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«Reply #33 on: June 21, 2009, 02:46:27 PM »
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Really Very Beautiful creation Sarvesh Ji.. Bahoot Khoob Likha hai

Thanks a lot Sophi Ji
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«Reply #34 on: June 29, 2009, 03:53:33 PM »
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Toooo good

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«Reply #35 on: July 07, 2009, 05:55:27 AM »
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TERI KRIPA MILE NA MILE PYAS KAM NA HO
JAB TAK CHALE YE SAANS KABHI AAS KAM NA HO

JAB TERE DWAAR TAK YAHAN AA HI CHUKA HUN MAIN
FARIYAAD BHI KARUNGA BHALE AANKH NAM NA HO

TERE DARAS KE VASTE SAB KUCHH BHULA DIYA
TU MUJHKO BHOOL JAYE KABHI WOH SITAM NA HO

JAB AAYEN TEZ AANDHIAN KUCHH IMTIHAN KI
SHRADDHA BANI RAHE KABHI VISHVAS KAM NA HO


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Behad Achchi Prathna Hai Bhai,.
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«Reply #36 on: July 08, 2009, 09:13:41 AM »
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Shukriya Azeem Bhai
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«Reply #37 on: February 24, 2010, 11:34:34 AM »
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Toooo good

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Thanks a lot
So nice of you
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«Reply #38 on: February 24, 2010, 11:50:54 AM »
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Wah wah Rastogi ji bahut he shandaar ghazal likhi hai aapne. Ek ek sher apne aap mein mukammal aur behtreen hai.
तेरी कृपा मिले न मिले प्यास कम न हो
जब तक चले ये सांस कभी आस कम न हो

जब तेरे द्वार तक यहाँ आ ही चुका हूँ मैं
फरियाद भी करूँगा भले आँख नम न हो

तेरे दरस के वास्ते सब कुछ भुला दिया
तू मुझको भूल जाये कभी वो सितम न हो

जब आयें तेज आंधियां कुछ इम्तिहान की
श्रद्धा बनी रहे कभी विश्वास कम न हो

सर्वेश रस्तोगी

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«Reply #39 on: February 25, 2010, 07:52:56 AM »
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Wah wah Rastogi ji bahut he shandaar ghazal likhi hai aapne. Ek ek sher apne aap mein mukammal aur behtreen hai.

Bahut bahut shukriya Riyaz bhai
aapne bada hausla badhaya, thanks
SARVESH RASTOGI
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