Raskhaan ke kanahaiya

by dolly on March 03, 2012, 08:20:06 PM
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Paan ki dukaan par khade Raskhaan,
Tasveer dekh poocha ye kaun meharbaan..

Mor mukut,mtiyan ki maala,lgta hai koi dhanwaan
Awaz aayi ye hai nandlaala,vaas hai jiska vrindavan dhaam

Ankhiyan nihaarti,mand mand muskaaye raskhan
Bin joote ke pavon ko dekha,hue te bade hi hairaan

Ratno k joote  banaane lage te tb Raskhaan,
Pehnaunga main to joote,jaunga vrindavan dham..

Teen din tak yu hi pade rahe Raskhaan,
Aaye na fir bi kripa nidhaan..

Saamay jo beeta,hataash hue te Raskhaan,
Bole oh nishtuhur,kyu tujko itna abhimaan

Rok naa paaye apne ko,daudpade  the ghan shyam,
Bahon se pakda Govind ne ,bole utho mere Raskhaan

Aankhon seAshru  behte te,rom rom krta pranaam
Devtaaon ne kiya jai gaan,
Raskhan k Kanhaiya,kanhaiya ke Raskhan...Usual Smile
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«Reply #1 on: March 03, 2012, 08:24:27 PM »
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bohut sundAr rachna doly ji
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«Reply #2 on: March 03, 2012, 08:27:42 PM »
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bohut sundAr rachna doly ji

Thank u sahiil ji!!shukriya:)
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«Reply #3 on: March 04, 2012, 04:33:14 AM »
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ati sunder prastootee dolly ease hee ishwar aaraadhnaa men man lagaa rahe
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«Reply #4 on: March 04, 2012, 01:47:31 PM »
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Bolo murli vaale krishna kanhaiya laal ki jay.

bahut sundar likha hai..
bahut aanand ke saath..

gwaalo ki tolee kanhaiye ko ghere
muraliya ki dhun jo kaano me taire
kanha magan hai dekh dekh unko
chahat hai unki nayee taan chedey
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«Reply #5 on: March 04, 2012, 05:33:04 PM »
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Dolly Ji,

Bahut sunder...Raskhan ke vichar aapki zuaan se..

Lord Krishna ke oopar ek she'r khaaksaar ne kuchh
yoon kaha tha aapki nazr hai..

"tamaam gopiyaaN kartee theeN pyaar natkhat se
 jo raadika ka naheeN tha to shyaam kiska tha"

                                     "Raqeeb"
Keep it up...all the best.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
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«Reply #6 on: March 05, 2012, 09:06:05 AM »
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ati sunder prastootee dolly ease hee ishwar aaraadhnaa men man lagaa rahe

Baut baut shukriya sk ji...:)ji apki blesings hain to badegi hi bhakti:)
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«Reply #7 on: March 05, 2012, 09:08:03 AM »
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Bolo murli vaale krishna kanhaiya laal ki jay.

bahut sundar likha hai..
bahut aanand ke saath..

gwaalo ki tolee kanhaiye ko ghere
muraliya ki dhun jo kaano me taire
kanha magan hai dekh dekh unko
chahat hai unki nayee taan chedey


Wah wah ati sundar mkv ji....apki lines ne to chaar chand lga diye...Usual Smile...shukriya Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: March 05, 2012, 09:10:12 AM »
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Dolly Ji,

Bahut sunder...Raskhan ke vichar aapki zuaan se..

Lord Krishna ke oopar ek she'r khaaksaar ne kuchh
yoon kaha tha aapki nazr hai..

"tamaam gopiyaaN kartee theeN pyaar natkhat se
 jo raadika ka naheeN tha to shyaam kiska tha"

                                     "Raqeeb"
Keep it up...all the best.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 

Bahut khoob satish ji...yahi rahasya haikanha ki leela ka:)....shukriya haunsala badaane k liy:)
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