Shikwa, Khuda se.....!!!!!

by Talat on February 18, 2007, 02:38:50 PM
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Tere banaye hue hain bande, to phir ye aapas main jung kyun
Teri hi taqleeq hai yeh dunya, to is pe phaila yeh laal rang kyun

Ae Parwardigar Tu hi hai jisne banaya ye zameen aur aasmaan
Daata Teri hi dunya ne diye hain Tujhe phir itne saare naam kyun

Basta hai Tu har insaan ke dil main, insaan ka dil hi hai Tera ghar
Tere ghar ke waaste phir insaan aapas main lad padhe hain kyun

Tujhe to pyaara hai har ek insaan, ameer ho ya wo ghareeb koi
To phir ye daulatwaale ghareebon ko kamtar samajhte hain kyun

Kahan gayin wo muskurahatain kahan kho gayi hai labon ki hansi
Har ek chehre pe ranj-o-ghum ka chaaya hua hai yeh saaya kyun

Khudaya Teri is zameen pe aaj khushiyan kyun khoti ja rahi hain
Aankhon se aansuon ke saailab chale aa rahe hain umadh ke kyun

Bhatak gaye hain sahi raaste se, chal rahe hain jaane kis aor hum
Tu hai raasta dikhaane waala, to phir hum bhatak rahe hain kyun

Gunahgaar hoon main bohot lekin Tu hi to hai ek maaf karne wala
Meri sab duaain Tere aasman se laut kar khaali aa rahi hain kyun !!!
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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2007, 02:48:08 PM »
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Wah Wah!!!!!! Kya baat hai TALAT JI..

A1 hai...... Great Lines... Great Work..
Behad khubsoorat aur Lajawab...........Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: February 18, 2007, 03:04:22 PM »
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Bohot bohot shukriya Vicky, hausla afzai ke liye :D
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«Reply #3 on: February 20, 2007, 10:59:22 PM »
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good job Talat
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«Reply #4 on: February 20, 2007, 11:05:54 PM »
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Thank You Pooja Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: February 26, 2007, 06:16:49 AM »
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behtarin likha hai aapne talat ji ......excellent indeed...............aapki saare sawal bilkul sahi hai ,per( meri gustakhi ke liye mujhe maaf farmaiyega)

maine to chahi thi aisi zamee jisme nekiyat ka main sabab du
har bande ko du zindagi aur zindagi ko naye naye khawab du

per badla hai dhue mai aasma aur khoon mai hai sani zamee
insaan ne hi kiye hai yeh sitam jinse main bhi kuch betaab hun

tera dil na kabhi ho kahaf bande hai koshish yahi meri bhi magar
hai lahoo se jyada sawal tujhme kis-kiska phir main jawab du.

.........................@fahi@..........................
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«Reply #6 on: February 26, 2007, 08:20:36 AM »
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Nice words everyone.
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«Reply #7 on: February 26, 2007, 11:25:58 AM »
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Thank You Fahi, and Ricky....and thats a nice one from you...really nice !
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«Reply #8 on: February 26, 2007, 01:46:54 PM »
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very  nice  Talat..........Fahi......
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«Reply #9 on: February 27, 2007, 02:52:38 PM »
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Thanks a lot Waheed  !!
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«Reply #10 on: February 27, 2007, 03:24:06 PM »
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honsla afjayi ke liye aap dono ka sukriya...........

 
 hatke hai teri baate maula  teri kuch juda fitrat hai
teri hi khudayi pe yahan fida ye saari kudrat hai
sochta hun karu tujhse kaise bhala sikwa main
ye zindgnaai bhi to khudaya teri hi ek neymat hai

....................@fahi@.......................
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«Reply #11 on: February 27, 2007, 05:12:32 PM »
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Fahi..

Nice.. keep it up !
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«Reply #12 on: February 28, 2007, 01:08:13 AM »
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Very nice Fahi !
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«Reply #13 on: March 03, 2007, 09:01:06 PM »
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amazing Talat!
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«Reply #14 on: March 23, 2007, 02:33:18 PM »
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Thank you Saani Usual Smile
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