Shikwa, Khuda se.....!!!!!

by Talat on February 18, 2007, 02:38:50 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 09, 2008, 02:26:31 AM »
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Ae Khuda ! dilon main kaisa yeh dard hai,
Pu-nam hain aankhain, har chehra zard hai

Lachaar, toota hua, har shakhs majboor hai,
Duaaon ki pahunch se kya aasman ab door hai

Kho gaye hain raaste, ya har aankh band hai,
Apne bandon ke  ab kyun nahin Tu sang hai

Gunahgar hain, par tere hi bande hain hum
Bhula kar khatayen, karde ab hum pe reham !
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«Reply #16 on: March 09, 2008, 09:54:22 AM »
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bohot khoob talat!
ye misra to Aasman se bhi uncha he:-
Duaaon ki pahunch se kya aasman ab door hai

or is me samandar se zyada gehrai he, bade raaz chhupe he:-
Daata Teri hi dunya ne diye hain Tujhe phir itne saare naam kyun
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«Reply #17 on: March 09, 2008, 10:03:05 AM »
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Quote from: Talat on March 09, 2008, 02:26:31 AM
Ae Khuda ! dilon main kaisa yeh dard hai,
Pu-nam hain aankhain, har chehra zard hai

Lachaar, toota hua, har shakhs majboor hai,
Duaaon ki pahunch se kya aasman ab door hai

Kho gaye hain raaste, ya har aankh band hai,
Apne bandon ke  ab kyun nahin Tu sang hai

Gunahgar hain, par tere hi bande hain hum
Bhula kar khatayen, karde ab hum pe reham !

bahut khoob talat sis
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Talat
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«Reply #18 on: March 09, 2008, 11:52:57 AM »
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Thank You Roja sis Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: March 09, 2008, 11:55:29 AM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on March 09, 2008, 09:54:22 AM
bohot khoob talat!
ye misra to Aasman se bhi uncha he:-
Duaaon ki pahunch se kya aasman ab door hai

or is me samandar se zyada gehrai he, bade raaz chhupe he:-
Daata Teri hi dunya ne diye hain Tujhe phir itne saare naam kyun

Bohot bohot shukriya Sayyid aapki zarranawazi ka Usual Smile
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«Reply #20 on: March 09, 2008, 04:42:27 PM »
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Waah Talat ji waah....dil de daad kaboolFarmaiyega....itni lambi behr maiN aapne ek ek lafz ko jo jama pehnaya hai kaabil-e-tariif hai....ye halaat-etasara gar koi samjhe toh yakeenan kutchh seekh hi le payega....bahut khoob Talat ji .....aapkee Ye tehreer hameiN bahoot pasand aayee....aise hee achchhe-achchhe kalaam se iss bazm kee raunaq barhaate rahiye...

allaah kare zauq-e-qalam aour


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«Reply #21 on: March 09, 2008, 05:44:37 PM »
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Bohot bohot Shukriya Harash....aapke in lafzon ke liye...yaqinan ye  hauslaafzai aur achcha likhne ki koshish paida karti hai qalam main. Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: March 18, 2008, 03:06:38 PM »
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wah bahoot khoob Talat!!
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«Reply #23 on: March 19, 2008, 04:04:18 PM »
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Thanks Pooja...
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«Reply #24 on: March 21, 2008, 01:55:29 PM »
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Nice One,.
Magar Shikwa Khuda Se Nahi Karte,.
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«Reply #25 on: March 21, 2008, 01:59:44 PM »
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Shikwa Khuda Se Kiyaa Nahi Karte,.
Jab Hum Khuda Ke Farzon Par Chalaa Nahi Karte,.

Khudaa Bhi Bakhshta Hai Unhi Bandon KO "Azeem",.
Jo Sabar Karte Hain, Aur Gilaa Nahi Karte,.

Khudaa Ne Insaano Ke Saath Paighambaron KO Aazmaaya Hai,.
Khudaa Par Jinhe Yakheen Hai, Wo Kabhi Ghabraaya Nahi Karte,.

___________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #26 on: May 30, 2008, 04:49:20 PM »
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Nice Azeem....Hum to usse shikwa karte hain jise hum apne sabse qareeb maante hain, jiska apne upar haq samajhte hain...aur Khuda se badhkar qareeb koi nahin....!!!
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«Reply #27 on: May 30, 2008, 05:20:41 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on March 21, 2008, 01:59:44 PM
Shikwa Khuda Se Kiyaa Nahi Karte,.
Jab Hum Khuda Ke Farzon Par Chalaa Nahi Karte,.

Khudaa Bhi Bakhshta Hai Unhi Bandon KO "Azeem",.
Jo Sabar Karte Hain, Aur Gilaa Nahi Karte,.

Khudaa Ne Insaano Ke Saath Paighambaron KO Aazmaaya Hai,.
Khudaa Par Jinhe Yakheen Hai, Wo Kabhi Ghabraaya Nahi Karte,.

___________________________________-Jaanasheen-

Accha likha hai aapne Jaanasheen jee.. ( I disagree..)
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«Reply #28 on: June 01, 2008, 10:56:45 AM »
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Quote from: Sonia01 on May 30, 2008, 05:20:41 PM
Accha likha hai aapne Jaanasheen jee.. ( I disagree..)

Iska Matlab Hum Kya Samjhe,.
Kya Aap Is Se Sehmit Nahi Hain,.
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«Reply #29 on: June 01, 2008, 11:40:55 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 30, 2008, 04:49:20 PM
Nice Azeem....Hum to usse shikwa karte hain jise hum apne sabse qareeb maante hain, jiska apne upar haq samajhte hain...aur Khuda se badhkar qareeb koi nahin....!!!

Sach kaha aapne jisse jitni zyada ummid hoti he shikwa bhi utna hi hota he, or shikwa apno se kiya jaata he geron se nahi goya khuda se apna-pan zahir karna huwa, {wallah-u-aalam} magar aehtiyat zaruri he or ye bhi sach he ke jo shikwa nahi karte wo hamse zyada unche maqaam par hen.

Jese azeem bhaai....  tongue3
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