Tassuvar mein to bahut sajde kiye hai hamne

by justmusafir on August 23, 2009, 05:54:32 AM
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Hello Everybody.

This first post of mine (Dastur hai saheb, mine or not mine kahne ka isliye kah raha hoon mine varna personally speaking I have a different view on it) is dedicated to Madhuwesh Saheb:

तस्सुवर में तो बहुत सज़दे किए हैं हमने
कभी रूबरु करके भी पूजा करें तो कुछ बात बने

तुम एक मुकददस साये की तरह हर दम मेरे साथ हो, ये एहसास है मुझको
बाहों में बाहें डालकर चन्द कदम ही सही, चलो तो कुछ बात बने

मुद्द्त से किसी ने आगोश में नहीं लिया है मुझे,
ये कर्म भी तुम ही मुझ पर फरमाओ तो कुछ बात बने

जुर्रत देखो, बारश का मोसम, भीगी ह्ववा
ऐसे में कभी खुदा से हमप्याला हों तो कुछ बात बने


Tassuvar mein to bahut sazde kiye hai hamne
Kabhi rubru karke bhi puja Karen to kuchh baat bane

Tum ek muqaddas1 saye ki tarah har dam mere saath ho ye ahsas hai mujhko
Bahon mein bahen daal kar chand kadam hi sahi chalo to kuchh baat bane

Muddat se kisi ne aagosh mein nahin liya hai mujhe
Ye karam bhi tumhi mujh par farmao to kuchh baat bane

Jurrat dekho, baarsish ka mausam bhigi hawa,
Aise mein kabhi khuda se hampyala ho to kuchh baat bane.
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«Reply #1 on: August 23, 2009, 06:32:04 AM »
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Wah wah Musafir ji,minblowing creation.than
x for the beautiful dedication.bahut khoob. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:excellent
aise hi likhte rahena aap.dil ko chu gayee aapke kavita. wave
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«Reply #2 on: August 23, 2009, 10:39:07 AM »
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waqai... very nice creation
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«Reply #3 on: August 23, 2009, 11:16:42 AM »
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wah wah wah........ Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
BAHUT KHOOOOOB MUSAFIR G....ANDAJ-E-BYAAN KAFI LAJVAAB HAI.. Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: August 25, 2009, 06:27:52 AM »
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Wah wah Musafir ji,minblowing creation.than
x for the beautiful dedication.bahut khoob. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:excellent
aise hi likhte rahena aap.dil ko chu gayee aapke kavita. wave


Shukriya Saheb. Aap abhi tak dil ko apne paas rakhe baithe hain, kisi ko dekar uska aur apna bhala kijiye....
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«Reply #5 on: August 25, 2009, 06:44:44 AM »
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waqai... very nice creation

Ji shukriya, hausla badane ke liye
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«Reply #6 on: August 26, 2009, 04:22:45 AM »
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wah wah wah........ Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
BAHUT KHOOOOOB MUSAFIR G....ANDAJ-E-BYAAN KAFI LAJVAAB HAI.. Clapping Smiley

Ji Shukriya is lajvaab daad ke liye
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«Reply #7 on: August 28, 2009, 12:30:02 PM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Musafir ji
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«Reply #8 on: August 28, 2009, 01:24:27 PM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Musafir ji
Itne senior shayar jo is mehfil ki jaan hain unhonhe mera hausal badaya, tahe dil se shukriya
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«Reply #9 on: August 28, 2009, 09:19:37 PM »
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Hello Everybody.

This first post of mine (Dastur hai saheb, mine or not mine kahne ka isliye kah raha hoon mine varna personally speaking I have a different view on it) is dedicated to Madhuwesh Saheb:

तस्सुवर में तो बहुत सज़दे किए हैं हमने
कभी रूबरु करके भी पूजा करें तो कुछ बात बने

तुम एक मुकददस साये की तरह हर दम मेरे साथ हो, ये एहसास है मुझको
बाहों में बाहें डालकर चन्द कदम ही सही, चलो तो कुछ बात बने

मुद्द्त से किसी ने आगोश में नहीं लिया है मुझे,
ये कर्म भी तुम ही मुझ पर फरमाओ तो कुछ बात बने

जुर्रत देखो, बारश का मोसम, भीगी ह्ववा
ऐसे में कभी खुदा से हमप्याला हों तो कुछ बात बने


Tassuvar mein to bahut sazde kiye hai hamne
Kabhi rubru karke bhi puja Karen to kuchh baat bane

Tum ek muqaddas1 saye ki tarah har dam mere saath ho ye ahsas hai mujhko
Bahon mein bahen daal kar chand kadam hi sahi chalo to kuchh baat bane

Muddat se kisi ne aagosh mein nahin liya hai mujhe
Ye karam bhi tumhi mujh par farmao to kuchh baat bane

Jurrat dekho, baarsish ka mausam bhigi hawa,
Aise mein kabhi khuda se hampyala ho to kuchh baat bane.
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bahoot khoob justmusafir  ji!!
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«Reply #10 on: August 29, 2009, 05:22:08 AM »
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bahoot khoob justmusafir  ji!!
ek aur "khair khwah" ka aashirwad mila, Shukriya Ma'm
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