Tujhse shikayat hai mujhe maula

by Ricky on February 25, 2007, 06:44:44 PM
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Mujhe shikwa hai tujhse, tujhse shikayat hai !!
Kyun aisi hai yeh duniya, kyun yeh rawayat hai !!

Maula, yun toh tujhpe hue sajde hazaar hain ...
Lekin kyun yeh insaan jhooti kashti pe sawaar hain ....
Kahan hai woh ibadat sacchi, kyun dikhawat ka hissar hai ...
Makhaul hai yeh ilm ka, Khudai per waar hai ...

Kyun hai insaan ab itna kamzor, kyun banawat ki darkaar hai..
Kyun nahin kaifiyat mahaul mein, zarurat jiski har bar hai..
Yeh kaisa dhoka uss banane wale sae iss insaan ka..
Kaisi yeh parastish, kyun adhuri si har aayat bar bar hai.... !!

Mujhe shikwa hai tujhse, tujhse shikayat hai !!
Kyun aisi hai yeh duniya, kyun yeh rawayat hai !!

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«Reply #1 on: February 25, 2007, 06:47:42 PM »
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Bohot khoob Ricky !!! Very nice poem...and as usual, different !!!
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«Reply #2 on: February 26, 2007, 06:08:22 AM »
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really touching ricky ji ............apka yogdaan dekhkar accha laga........bus yu hi likhte rahiyega......aapse bahut kuch sikhne ko milta hai.....so keep writing.........
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«Reply #3 on: February 26, 2007, 08:14:33 AM »
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really touching ricky ji ............apka yogdaan dekhkar accha laga........bus yu hi likhte rahiyega......aapse bahut kuch sikhne ko milta hai.....so keep writing.........


Thankyou for the appreciation, that is really nice of you.
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«Reply #4 on: February 26, 2007, 02:03:48 PM »
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bahot  khoob   Ricky........aap  ne  bahot acchi poem  likha......
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«Reply #5 on: February 27, 2007, 06:37:47 PM »
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bahoot khoob Ricky!! bahoot hi acha likha hai!!
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«Reply #6 on: March 24, 2007, 09:31:02 PM »
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Thankyou..
BTW, I never realized untill now that I made a mistake in last para.. ie. missed typing two words thus poem was loosing some charm in end !
Corrected it now!
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«Reply #7 on: April 09, 2007, 06:57:44 AM »
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Ricky Bhai.. Bahut-Bahut khoooooob.. very Touching.... !!!!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: April 09, 2007, 11:05:40 AM »
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Thanx vicky!
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«Reply #9 on: April 09, 2007, 11:02:53 PM »
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nice one Ricky, i love the words uve used, and the flow is great.. keep writing!!
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«Reply #10 on: July 25, 2007, 03:18:52 AM »
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Nicely expressed your feelings in words...
I liked it..... Dont stop...Keep flowing....
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«Reply #11 on: July 25, 2007, 10:23:22 AM »
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Thankyou Sanya !!

Roja thank you too for digging it out & appreciating it.
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«Reply #12 on: June 01, 2008, 08:53:05 AM »
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Mujhe shikwa hai tujhse, tujhse shikayat hai !!
Kyun aisi hai yeh duniya, kyun yeh rawayat hai !!

Maula, yun toh tujhpe hue sajde hazaar hain ...
Lekin kyun yeh insaan jhooti kashti pe sawaar hain ....
Kahan hai woh ibadat sacchi, kyun dikhawat ka hissar hai ...
Makhaul hai yeh ilm ka, Khudai per waar hai ...

Wah wah Ricky bahut accha likha hai aapne.  Applause Applause
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