wo nazara aur tha

by salaam2all on May 14, 2009, 07:01:30 PM
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sir jhuka doo patthron ko, ye kabhi mumkin nahi
jo gira sajdey may terey, wo nazara aur tha

maangna kya in buthon(idols) say, ye meri fitrat nahi
haath utthey jo dua may, wo nazara aur tha

aazmaatey hay humey jukh ker buthon k saamney
hum chaley rehmat say teri, wo nazara aur tha

sir kalam ker k wo hastein hay maidaan-e-jung may
hum shaheedon may jo aaye, wo nazara aur tha
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«Reply #1 on: May 14, 2009, 07:19:19 PM »
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Bahaut acha likha hai dear...Keep writing.. Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 15, 2009, 03:54:45 AM »
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Bohat khoob..
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«Reply #3 on: May 15, 2009, 06:24:08 AM »
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Bahoot khoob! salaam2all ji

Keep writing...........
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«Reply #4 on: May 15, 2009, 10:07:25 AM »
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Kya khoob likha hai Salaam Sb
Very very nice
Ghazal meri sabse pasandida form of poetry hai
Fursat mile to Ghazal section me hamari bhi ghazalen dekhiye
Aur isi tarah se likhte rahiye
All the best
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #5 on: May 15, 2009, 10:27:52 AM »
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sir jhuka doo patthron ko, ye kabhi mumkin nahi
jo gira sajdey may terey, wo nazara aur tha

maangna kya in buthon(idols) say, ye meri fitrat nahi
haath utthey jo dua may, wo nazara aur tha

aazmaatey hay humey jukh ker buthon k saamney
hum chaley rehmat say teri, wo nazara aur tha

sir kalam ker k wo hastein hay maidaan-e-jung may
hum shaheedon may jo aaye, wo nazara aur tha

bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause
kamaal likha hai aapne
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«Reply #6 on: May 16, 2009, 05:12:39 AM »
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shukriya dead heart,sophi,sajid,sarvesh and diya g may Allah have peace and mercy on all of us aameen...
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«Reply #7 on: May 16, 2009, 05:13:34 AM »
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sir jhuka doo patthron ko, ye kabhi mumkin nahi
jo gira sajdey may terey, wo nazara aur tha

maangna kya in buthon(idols) say, ye meri fitrat nahi
haath utthey jo dua may, wo nazara aur tha

aazmaatey hay humey jukh ker buthon k saamney
hum chaley rehmat say teri, wo nazara aur tha

sir kalam ker k wo hastein hay maidaan-e-jung may
hum shaheedon may jo aaye, wo nazara aur tha



GUD WORK SALAAM JEE..
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