yayawar

by bekarar on November 26, 2008, 08:06:26 PM
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jeetne ki koshisho me, har baazi haara,
kashtiyon ki chah me, choota kinara,
us aseem ki, anant ki talash me
mai yayawar sa firta hun mara mara,


deep jale antarman me door kare jo andhiyaara
mai yayawar sa firta hun mara mara,

budhatv ka chand khile, banu mai dhruv tara
mai yayawar sa firta hun mara mara
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«Reply #1 on: November 26, 2008, 08:12:07 PM »
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yayawar ka kaya arth hota hai DOH DOH

Kavita bahoot marmik shabdo ke sath likhi apne, bahoot achi lagi... magar poori tarah se samjh nahi saki..     
yayawar ka arth pata chal jaaye tab samjhati hu
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«Reply #2 on: November 26, 2008, 08:15:08 PM »
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Sanjeev bro

Too good Thumbs UP

@Pooja

yayawar according to my search on google means "wanderer" or "nomad" or "gypsy"
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«Reply #3 on: November 26, 2008, 08:17:05 PM »
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yayawar yani..khanabadosh,.....yani banjaare

Shukriya raj bro.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: November 26, 2008, 08:22:55 PM »
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Sanjeev ji apne apni post Edit kar di...aor section bhi change kar dia...

itana acha likha tha aPne...

yah bhi bahoot acha laga mujhe... magar wo jayada acha tha....
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«Reply #5 on: November 27, 2008, 08:48:49 AM »
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Beautiful Sanjeev Very Good........ Clapping Smiley

Lagta hain majnu ki hawa lag gayee hai tumhe
Chalo yeh to hona hi tha tumhari laila jo mil gayee hame
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«Reply #6 on: November 27, 2008, 09:11:08 AM »
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Bahoot Khub Applause Applause Applause
Bahoot Khub Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: November 27, 2008, 09:49:37 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on November 26, 2008, 08:06:26 PM
jeetne ki koshisho me, har baazi haara,
kashtiyon ki chah me, choota kinara,
us aseem ki, anant ki talash me
mai yayawar sa firta hun mara mara,


deep jale antarman me door kare jo andhiyaara
mai yayawar sa firta hun mara mara,

budhatv ka chand khile, banu mai dhruv tara
mai yayawar sa firta hun mara mara


 Applause Applause bahut khhob likha he bekarar ji,aapne sadev ki tarah. ek chota sa prayas mera bhee hein...nazar daaliyega:

kyon Zindgi ko baaziyon sa khelto ho
toofano mein utar kur kashtiyon ko khojte ho
mook betho,muskurao, dekho tamaasha,
kyon yayavaro sa joojhte ho!

kya hey saadhutva,aur kya budhtava
kya jaantey hum sub nahi hein?
zindgi ke sangharsh jo muskuraakar paar karte
unsey bade koi nahi hein!

tyaagney aur chhodney mein
ub bhala mushkil kisey hein?
jo nibhaana jaante hein
wo hi dhruv taare bane hein!

ye aseem aur anant ki jo talaash hein
maan lena, kyonki yeh nahi sirf baat hein..
main lauta hu inkey bahut nazdeek aa kur
wahaan sirf chalaawon ki barsaat hein!

Prateek
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«Reply #8 on: November 27, 2008, 01:01:52 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on November 27, 2008, 09:49:37 AM
Applause Applause bahut khhob likha he bekarar ji,aapne sadev ki tarah. ek chota sa prayas mera bhee hein...nazar daaliyega:

kyon Zindgi ko baaziyon sa khelto ho
toofano mein utar kur kashtiyon ko khojte ho
mook betho,muskurao, dekho tamaasha,
kyon yayavaro sa joojhte ho!

kya hey saadhutva,aur kya budhtava
kya jaantey hum sub nahi hein?
zindgi ke sangharsh jo muskuraakar paar karte
unsey bade koi nahi hein!

tyaagney aur chhodney mein
ub bhala mushkil kisey hein?
jo nibhaana jaante hein
wo hi dhruv taare bane hein!

ye aseem aur anant ki jo talaash hein
maan lena, kyonki yeh nahi sirf baat hein..
main lauta hu inkey bahut nazdeek aa kur
wahaan sirf chalaawon ki barsaat hein!

Prateek





bahoot khoob prateek ji......achcha najriya hai..lekin...

anubhavon kee baat hai ye,
pothi likh-padh jag haara,
palayan nahi is bahy jagat se,
mai antarman ke beehad me firta hun mara mara,

khoj me param santosh ke anjaane path pe,
mai yayawar sa firta hun mara mara
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«Reply #9 on: November 27, 2008, 01:03:06 PM »
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bahoot bahoot shukriya sajid aur panks.....
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«Reply #10 on: November 28, 2008, 08:13:37 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahut aacha likha hai sabhi ne.

khanabadosh kaisa hai tu,pata nahi kanha gayab rehta hai?




Baadal
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«Reply #11 on: November 29, 2008, 06:45:19 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB SANJEEV BROTHER,

 Applause  Applause  Applause
BAHUT KAMM SHABDO ME KAYI INSANO KI
HAALAT BAYAAN KAR DI AAPNE..
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #12 on: November 29, 2008, 11:39:29 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on November 27, 2008, 01:01:52 PM
bahoot khoob prateek ji......achcha najriya hai..lekin...
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shukria janaab.
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«Reply #13 on: November 29, 2008, 04:21:25 PM »
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Very nice sanjeev ji bohat umda likha hai aapne... Applause
Prateek ji aapne bhi khoob umda likha hai... Applause
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«Reply #14 on: November 30, 2008, 08:19:05 AM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on November 29, 2008, 04:21:25 PM
Very nice sanjeev ji bohat umda likha hai aapne... Applause
Prateek ji aapne bhi khoob umda likha hai... Applause

bahut dhnyawaad, honeyrose ji.
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