yayawar -Panna 2:Shayari-e-Parastish

Shikha12

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«Reply #15 on: December 02, 2008, 11:17:28 AM »

Quote from: bekarar on November 26, 2008, 08:06:26 PM

jeetne ki koshisho me, har baazi haara,
kashtiyon ki chah me, choota kinara,
us aseem ki, anant ki talash me
mai yayawar sa firta hun mara mara,

deep jale antarman me door kare jo andhiyaara
mai yayawar sa firta hun mara mara,

budhatv ka chand khile, banu mai dhruv tara
mai yayawar sa firta hun mara mara

Waah Waah... Bahut hi khoobsurat..
Achhe shabdon aur naye andaaz ke saath kahi gayi bahut hi neik baat..

Excellent Work.. Sanjeev Ji.. Applause


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Shikha12

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Re: yayawar

«Reply #16 on: December 02, 2008, 11:23:26 AM »

Quote from: Prateek Mardia on November 27, 2008, 09:49:37 AM

bahut khhob likha he bekarar ji,aapne sadev ki tarah. ek chota sa prayas mera bhee hein...nazar daaliyega:

kyon Zindgi ko baaziyon sa khelto ho
toofano mein utar kur kashtiyon ko khojte ho
mook betho,muskurao, dekho tamaasha,
kyon yayavaro sa joojhte ho!

kya hey saadhutva,aur kya budhtava
kya jaantey hum sub nahi hein?
zindgi ke sangharsh jo muskuraakar paar karte
unsey bade koi nahi hein!

tyaagney aur chhodney mein
ub bhala mushkil kisey hein?
jo nibhaana jaante hein
wo hi dhruv taare bane hein!

ye aseem aur anant ki jo talaash hein
maan lena, kyonki yeh nahi sirf baat hein..
main lauta hu inkey bahut nazdeek aa kur
wahaan sirf chalaawon ki barsaat hein!

Prateek

Aapka nazariya bhi bahut sahi hai.. Prateek Ji..
Aisa ki.. Kisi ko bhi aap ki kahi baat par sochne ko majboor kar de..
In short, Aasaan shabd mein kahi gayi zindagi ki bhaari sachhai..

Bahut bahut khoob... Applause


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Prateek Mardia

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Re: yayawar

«Reply #17 on: December 03, 2008, 03:02:42 PM »

Quote from: Mahiya on December 02, 2008, 11:23:26 AM

Saraahna ka shukria Mahiya ji.AApka saath hi hausla hein!


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«Reply #18 on: December 03, 2008, 05:33:52 PM »

Quote from: honeyrose on November 29, 2008, 04:21:25 PM

Very nice sanjeev ji bohat umda likha hai aapne...
Prateek ji aapne bhi khoob umda likha hai...

shukriya honey ji.. Usual Smile

Quote from: Mahiya on December 02, 2008, 11:17:28 AM

Waah Waah... Bahut hi khoobsurat..
Achhe shabdon aur naye andaaz ke saath kahi gayi bahut hi neik baat..

Excellent Work.. Sanjeev Ji.. Applause

thank u shikha ji..


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Re: yayawar

«Reply #19 on: December 03, 2008, 05:59:19 PM »

Good one Bekarar Ji


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Re: yayawar

«Reply #20 on: December 03, 2008, 06:03:17 PM »

bahoot shukriya rajesh ji


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