थाम लिया होता Beqrar

by bekarar on August 10, 2011, 06:54:41 PM
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जो गिरने से पहले ही मुझे थाम लिया होता.
मैने भी कहाँ अब तक तेरा नाम लिया होता,

मेरे गिरने की संभलने की मिसालें नही बनती,
जो तूने भी मोहब्बत से अगर काम लिया होता,


Jo Girne se pahle hi mujhe tham liya hota.
Maine bhi kahan ab tak tera naam liya hota,

Mere girne ki sambhlne ki misaalen nahi banti,
Jo tune bhi mohabbat se agar kaam liya hota,
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«Reply #1 on: August 10, 2011, 07:42:04 PM »
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Aadaab Bekaraar Sahaab !

Kia baat hai lagta hai aajkal YO ki aabo hawaa meiN
khumaar e ishq ki hawaa chal rahi hai Usual Smile

Bahut khoob janab daad Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         

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«Reply #2 on: August 11, 2011, 12:17:00 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoob....... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: August 12, 2011, 06:53:00 PM »
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Aadaab Bekaraar Sahaab !

Kia baat hai lagta hai aajkal YO ki aabo hawaa meiN
khumaar e ishq ki hawaa chal rahi hai Usual Smile

Bahut khoob janab daad Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         



ji Parwaaz ji par ye khumar kuch alag hai.......aksar log bhagwan ko achche dino me yaad nahi karte aur jab bure din aate hain tab....wo uska naam lene lagte hain ya ki unhe khuda ki yaad hai.....

bas yahi ek khyal hai jo in char line me sameta hai......agar girne se pahle hi tham liya hota to mai use yaad na karta.....achcha hua jo mujhe girne diya.....apni aukaat ka guman hote hi ahnkaar toot gaya...aur fir jo sambhla to duniya ke liye misaal ban gaya..... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: August 12, 2011, 06:55:09 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoob....... Usual Smile


bahoot bahoot shukriya touhid ji  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: July 14, 2012, 07:31:41 AM »
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Applause Applause
bahut umda khayaal.
Vaaah
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