aahat

by kaushikbhawna008 on May 13, 2008, 05:42:03 AM
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Zakhm muskurate hai ab bhi teri aahat par,
Dard bhool jaate hai ab bhi teri aahat par,


Shabnami sitaron par phool khilne lagte hai,
Chaand muskurate hai ab bhi teri aahat par,


Umar kaat di lekin bachpana nahi jaata,
Hum diye jalate hai ab bhi teri aahat par,


Ghantiya si bajti hai raqs hone lagta hai,
Dard jagmagate hai ab bhi teri aahat par,


Teri yaad aaye to neend jaati rehti hai,
Chaand muskurata hai ab bhi teri aahat par,


Ab bhi teri aahat par aas lout aati hai,
Ashk hum bahate hai ab bhi teri aahat par..!!!
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«Reply #1 on: May 13, 2008, 06:03:37 AM »
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NICE LINES,KAUSHIK JI.... Applause
KEEP IT UP.... Applause
BY. K.SHAEL

UNKI AAHAT AUR DIL KI DADKAN KA
AAJEEB RISHTA HAI....
UNKI AAHAT PATE HI YEH DIL MACHAL
UTHTA HAI....
AA JATA HAI KARAR UNKI AAWAJ PAKAR
KI AAB TO YE JANAM - JANAM KA RISHTA HAI....

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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #2 on: May 13, 2008, 06:13:33 AM »
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shukriya k.shael ji


waqt bewaqt dil udas sa ho jaata hai
bin uske din dhundhla sa najar aata hai
hai kashmakash mei meri zindgi ki unko kuch kahe ya na kahein
kyu ki jise b chahte hain ham wo milne se pehle bichad jaata hai
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diya_barsat
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«Reply #3 on: May 13, 2008, 09:00:46 AM »
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I love your poem aahat, its amazing.
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #4 on: May 15, 2008, 09:36:59 AM »
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thnx diya ji
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: May 15, 2008, 09:48:00 AM »
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Zakhm muskurate hai ab bhi teri aahat par,
Dard bhool jaate hai ab bhi teri aahat par,


Shabnami sitaron par phool khilne lagte hai,
Chaand muskurate hai ab bhi teri aahat par,


Umar kaat di lekin bachpana nahi jaata,
Hum diye jalate hai ab bhi teri aahat par,


Ghantiya si bajti hai raqs hone lagta hai,
Dard jagmagate hai ab bhi teri aahat par,


Teri yaad aaye to neend jaati rehti hai,
Chaand muskurata hai ab bhi teri aahat par,


Ab bhi teri aahat par aas lout aati hai,
Ashk hum bahate hai ab bhi teri aahat par..!!!

Its a nice sharing....but I request you, yet again, to write either the poet's name or NOT MINE if you dont know the name. At YOIndia we always appreciate the original work and try to give credit to original poets...its a small way of giving due respect to them. Hope you will follow this in future.
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