aaj achanak

by thegrimreaper on August 04, 2011, 06:54:21 AM
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Aaj achanak unki yaad si kaundh gayi

socha tha bhool chuke honge unhe

na jaane kis kone se ek awaaz si guzar gai

zakhm to jaise bhara hi tha,

na jaane kisne hara kar diya

laut aayegi yaad is anjaane mein socha na tha

lekin kisi ko kuch aur hi manzoor tha, shayad

farishte nasib mein nahi hote jaanta hun mein

kyon ek jhalak dikhakar , mujhse cheen liya

ab shayad himmat nahi kuch aur likh sakun....

shayad ab kabhi na lad sakun

ek anjaani bhool ka mein haqdar tha

lekin is anjaam ka haqdar nahi...


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«Reply #1 on: August 04, 2011, 10:02:16 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai.
sachhi baat hai.
dil se likha gaya hai.
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«Reply #2 on: August 04, 2011, 10:30:16 AM »
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dil ko chu gayee aapki ye line!!!!!!11 bahut acha love9 love9 love9 love9 love9 love4 love9
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«Reply #3 on: August 04, 2011, 02:36:25 PM »
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yaar kaisa goodbye!!!!

itna sacha post dekar kahan chale?

bht dil se likha hua post hai ji bht bht bht khubb--

yun na jaiye chhod kar hame
ki aapki raaho me na kho jaye hum
manzil to mil jayegi aapko ik din
ki aapki unhi raahon me na SO jayen hum

sukriya ji
khus rahiye aabaad rahiye
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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2011, 04:56:27 PM »
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Tumari yaad aane n aane ka prashna kya,
Prashna to yeh hei ki tume bhool pata nahi hoon.
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«Reply #5 on: August 18, 2011, 07:48:25 AM »
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@Dr. Ashok Maitreya, killbill,vipinjh,suresh sangwan

shukriya aapne saraaha,  notworthy
bahut mushkil se likha tha yeh
par ye sach hai ab aur koi shayari nahi
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«Reply #6 on: August 18, 2011, 07:57:45 AM »
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Aaj achanak unki yaad si kaundh gayi

socha tha bhool chuke honge unhe

na jaane kis kone se ek awaaz si guzar gai

zakhm to jaise bhara hi tha,

na jaane kisne hara kar diya

laut aayegi yaad is anjaane mein socha na tha

lekin kisi ko kuch aur hi manzoor tha, shayad

farishte nasib mein nahi hote jaanta hun mein

kyon ek jhalak dikhakar , mujhse cheen liya

ab shayad himmat nahi kuch aur likh sakun....

shayad ab kabhi na lad sakun

ek anjaani bhool ka mein haqdar tha

lekin is anjaam ka haqdar nahi...


goodbye
Grim Reaper
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