aaj rone do

by killbill on November 23, 2010, 11:08:21 AM
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tere wadon pr kurbaan ye dil-o-jaan tha,
khamosh labon ki pehchaan ise bana diya..
ro lene de aaj ki badi tamanna hai,
jeene ki saari tamannao ko tune bhula diya..
chor gaya tu tod gya sare wadon ko,
ro lene de aaj ki tune sb bhula diya..
itna beqabu na tha ye dil mera,
ro lene de aaj beh jaane de ashkon ko
kaisi mohabbat thi teri jo iss tarah daga kiya..
ro lene de aaj ki dil me pale armano ka,
kaise tune qatal kiya..
ilzam jo lgaya tmne,
dil ko bahut tadpaya tmne,
ro lene do aaj ki bich rahon me chor gaya
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«Reply #1 on: November 23, 2010, 12:23:42 PM »
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bht mast likha hai KB tumne.......
maza aaya padhke tumhare rone ki daastaannnn
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«Reply #2 on: November 23, 2010, 04:55:08 PM »
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hahaha Mere rone ki daastaan nhi thi ye:)
Thanx Kasak ..dil ki:)
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«Reply #3 on: November 23, 2010, 05:49:00 PM »
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dastaan apke rone ki ho na ho, par likha badi intensity ke saath hai kilbill ji.

ghalib ka ek sher yaad aayaa ...

rone se aur ishq mein bebaak ho gaye
dhoye gaye aise ki bas paak ho gaye
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«Reply #4 on: November 23, 2010, 06:07:35 PM »
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wah zara ji...kya khub kaha aapne:)
zara ji intencity typ baate mujhe samjh nhi aati bas jab kuch nhi sujhta dimaag ko tb cell me hi kuch b likh ke post kr deta hu mai bina padhe hi...
Thanx:)
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«Reply #5 on: December 28, 2012, 09:58:37 AM »
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tere wadon pr kurbaan ye dil-o-jaan tha,
khamosh labon ki pehchaan ise bana diya..
ro lene de aaj ki badi tamanna hai,
jeene ki saari tamannao ko tune bhula diya..
chor gaya tu tod gya sare wadon ko,
ro lene de aaj ki tune sb bhula diya..
itna beqabu na tha ye dil mera,
ro lene de aaj beh jaane de ashkon ko
kaisi mohabbat thi teri jo iss tarah daga kiya..
ro lene de aaj ki dil me pale armano ka,
kaise tune qatal kiya..
ilzam jo lgaya tmne,
dil ko bahut tadpaya tmne,
ro lene do aaj ki bich rahon me chor gaya

bahut badiya likha hai aapne  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: December 30, 2012, 02:51:18 PM »
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bahut badiya likha hai aapne  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
thanx Suman ji--
aapne mujhe 2 saal pehle ke samay ki yaad dila di Usual Smile

khus rahie
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