aajmaye baithe hain.......

by manjum on February 03, 2011, 11:58:10 AM
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Jane kya huaa hamko sar jhukaye baithe hain.
Dil ke zakhm bharte nahin chot khaye baithe hain.

   Unke aage khol diya unke kaarnamon ko,
   Aaiina dhikhaya to tilmilaye baithe hain.

Mushkura rahe hain ham bas dard ko dabane ko,
Zakhm apne seene ke sab chhupaye baithe hain.

   Teri yaden deemak hain jan chate jatin hain,
   Marz jane kaisa ham khud ko lagaye baithe hain.

Hamko kya batate ho tum wafa nibhaoge,
Ham to tumko pahle bhi aajmaye baithe hain.


manju "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: February 03, 2011, 12:11:01 PM »
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Jane kya huaa hamko sar jhukaye baithe hain.
Dil ke zakhm bharte nahin chot khaye baithe hain.

   Unke aage khol diya unke kaarnamon ko,
   Aaiina dhikhaya to tilmilaye baithe hain.

Mushkura rahe hain ham bas dard ko dabane ko,
Zakhm apne seene ke sab chhupaye baithe hain.

   Teri yaden deemak hain jan chate jatin hain,
   Marz jane kaisa ham khud ko lagaye baithe hain.

Hamko kya batate ho tum wafa nibhaoge,
Ham to tumko pahle bhi aajmaye baithe hain.


manju "mann"

bhut khub manju jiiiiiiiii

ekdam mast likha hai


na sikha sakta hu tumko mohhabbat me wafa
ham to khud mohhabat me dhoka khaye baithe hai

bhala ye ishq kya dega? kya khudai hai isme?
ham to khuda se bhi chhot khaye baithe hai

ab kya ummiden karen kisi se kya aas lagayen
mere apne jab mujhko dhoka dilaye baithe hai
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«Reply #2 on: February 03, 2011, 01:45:44 PM »
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Jane kya huaa hamko sar jhukaye baithe hain.
Dil ke zakhm bharte nahin chot khaye baithe hain.

   Unke aage khol diya unke kaarnamon ko,
   Aaiina dhikhaya to tilmilaye baithe hain.

Mushkura rahe hain ham bas dard ko dabane ko,
Zakhm apne seene ke sab chhupaye baithe hain.

   Teri yaden deemak hain jan chate jatin hain,
   Marz jane kaisa ham khud ko lagaye baithe hain.

Hamko kya batate ho tum wafa nibhaoge,
Ham to tumko pahle bhi aajmaye baithe hain.


manju "mann"

Very Impressive ... manjum ji !

Good Expression .... dil se daad !
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«Reply #3 on: February 04, 2011, 06:46:32 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya RAhiji....

daad dete rahie....

aap ne bhi khub aage badaya hai is rachna ko...
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«Reply #4 on: February 04, 2011, 06:47:53 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya anshuji... duaye dete rahen...

sath rahen..
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«Reply #5 on: February 04, 2011, 07:26:21 AM »
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aye haye toote dil aur bewfai ke baare me aapke paas nagmo ka bhandaar hai.
bahut khub ji bahut khub.
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kaise nibhate waada ham wafa e mohabbat ke
    zaalim duniya ki ek hi aawaz se jab wo khud ko chupaye bethe hain
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tumhari iss achhi rachna ko Nirala jaada nahi bigaadna chahta--bas 2 line bahut hain re
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thanx
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«Reply #6 on: February 04, 2011, 08:19:18 AM »
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bahut khoob Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: February 05, 2011, 04:54:48 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya niralaji... aapne pada aur pasand kiya..

are nahin niralaji aap bigad nahin rahe aap apne vichar vyakt kar rahe hain... jo bahut khub hain... aur yahi to batata hai ki aapne pada aur socha bhi...

shukriya..
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«Reply #8 on: February 05, 2011, 04:56:43 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya kishanji....

yun hi sath rahie...
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«Reply #9 on: February 05, 2011, 05:01:18 AM »
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haan ji padhne ke baad hi to sochta hun mai--
warna mera khaali dimaag kuch likhe hi nahi
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«Reply #10 on: February 05, 2011, 05:06:29 AM »
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par acha hai na khali dimag..... jo chahe likh lo ham jaison ke dimag main kuchh aata hi nahin.....
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«Reply #11 on: February 05, 2011, 05:13:52 AM »
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aye haye kitta bada wala Safed jhooth bolte ho.
itna achha achha likhte ho aur kuch nahi aata kahte ho!!
kamaal hai.
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dimaag se durust wo lagte hai
fir pata nahi kyun chupp rahte hain----:)
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hahaha
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«Reply #12 on: February 05, 2011, 05:25:56 AM »
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kya kahen.... hahahaha.....
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«Reply #13 on: February 05, 2011, 05:31:15 AM »
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aapko kahna kuch nahi hai bas haste rahiye aur dard bhara likhte rahiye Usual Smile
haha
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«Reply #14 on: February 05, 2011, 05:33:09 AM »
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aji hanste to hain ham bhi....

dard ke sath hi sahi....
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