Aakhir kyu ??

by charu on April 16, 2008, 05:14:59 PM
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charu
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Meri zindagi se tamaam ujaale chura kar...
Siyaah raaton main jugnoo sa jagmagaata kyu hai ?
Jalla kar khaakh kar de wo sabhi khat mere...
Kagaz ki kashti bana baarishon main bahaata kyu hai ?
Ab to yadon ki bandhishon se azaad kar de...
Aakhir kabr main bhi mujhe yaad aata kyu hai ?
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«Reply #1 on: April 16, 2008, 06:23:52 PM »
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gud one charu.........
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charu
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«Reply #2 on: April 18, 2008, 12:52:24 PM »
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Thanks for ur appreciation Pandit ji
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Sonia01
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«Reply #3 on: April 18, 2008, 03:05:03 PM »
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Meri zindagi se tamaam ujaale chura kar...
Siyaah raaton main jugnoo sa jagmagaata kyu hai ?
Jalla kar khaakh kar de wo sabhi khat mere...
Kagaz ki kashti bana baarishon main bahaata kyu hai ?
Ab to yadon ki bandhishon se azaad kar de...
Aakhir kabr main bhi mujhe yaad aata kyu hai ?

accha likha hai aapne
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charu
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«Reply #4 on: April 20, 2008, 02:47:53 PM »
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Thnx soniya...
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #5 on: April 21, 2008, 02:59:59 AM »
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Jalla kar khaakh kar de wo sabhi khat mere...
Kagaz ki kashti bana baarishon main bahaata kyu hai ?

charu ji,

behatareen.aap dard ko bakhoobi samajhti he.

Prateek
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charu
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«Reply #6 on: April 22, 2008, 02:24:57 PM »
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Prateek ji,

Jab dard badh jaata hai to kaagaz par utar aata hai.
Aanshu ka ek ek katra, meri nazm ko bhigo jaata hai.

-Charu.
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #7 on: May 21, 2008, 08:24:09 PM »
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Prateek ji,

Jab dard badh jaata hai to kaagaz par utar aata hai.
Aanshu ka ek ek katra, meri nazm ko bhigo jaata hai.

-Charu.

jo utar jaata he woh fir dard kahan kehlaata he
dard to uska naam he jo badhta he jaata he
kabhi kagaz ki syaahi bun betha
kabhi aansu mein baha diya
dard ki sacchi saathi ho to
kyon usko youn juda kiya
dil ko kuch kar aur bada
aur auron ka bhee dard utha
dard tera bhee hus dega fir
dua milegi sabki sada
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