aakhiri jaam

by salil2002 on January 10, 2009, 07:17:17 AM
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nasha raha jab talak main khamosh raha
hosh main aate hi jaam badaya tune
haan tu chahti thi kii main kuch na kahoon
mere labon par rakh k oongli ye jataya tune

peeta raha sharaab main aur raat bhar muskuraata raha
tera gair kii baahon main beithna mujhe reh reh k yaad aata raha
chaha kii bhool jaun tujhe par yeh bhi mumkin na tha
woh barsaat kii raat ka kissa mujhe rulaata raha

hosh na aaya mujhe ,na aana tha mujhe yeh maloom tha
tera apne haathon se zeher pilana mujhe bhata raha
bas ek kasak le kar main vida hua apne dil main
aakhiri baar jab chume tere lab tu oonhe mere labon se hatata raha
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«Reply #1 on: January 10, 2009, 10:30:51 AM »
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Wah salil bro kitna dard bhara hai aapke shayari mein...
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«Reply #2 on: January 10, 2009, 02:10:35 PM »
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kya baat hai  salilji...bahut hi dardila hai,

khud hi bewafa bankar,bewafai bulane ka, khud hi jaam pilaye jaarahi hai,
zakham bhi khud deti hai, aur mahram bhi khud hi lagaye jaarahi hai.
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«Reply #3 on: January 10, 2009, 02:18:33 PM »
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Boaht khoo salil...

Tera andaz-e-bayaan GHAYEL ko bohat bhaya hain
Waise us raat tu kis mehfil se uth ke aaya hain
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«Reply #4 on: January 10, 2009, 02:44:14 PM »
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Quote from: salil2002 on January 10, 2009, 07:17:17 AM
nasha raha jab talak main khamosh raha
hosh main aate hi jaam badaya tune
haan tu chahti thi kii main kuch na kahoon
mere labon par rakh k oongli ye jataya tune

peeta raha sharaab main aur raat bhar muskuraata raha
tera gair kii baahon main beithna mujhe reh reh k yaad aata raha
chaha kii bhool jaun tujhe par yeh bhi mumkin na tha
woh barsaat kii raat ka kissa mujhe rulaata raha

hosh na aaya mujhe ,na aana tha mujhe yeh maloom tha
tera apne haathon se zeher pilana mujhe bhata raha
bas ek kasak le kar main vida hua apne dil main
aakhiri baar jab chume tere lab tu oonhe mere labon se hatata raha


Bahut khoob Salil ji
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«Reply #5 on: January 11, 2009, 02:38:05 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on January 10, 2009, 10:30:51 AM
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Wah salil bro kitna dard bhara hai aapke shayari mein...


thanks jaya di
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«Reply #6 on: January 11, 2009, 02:40:25 PM »
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Quote from: cara on January 10, 2009, 02:10:35 PM
kya baat hai  salilji...bahut hi dardila hai,

khud hi bewafa bankar,bewafai bulane ka, khud hi jaam pilaye jaarahi hai,
zakham bhi khud deti hai, aur mahram bhi khud hi lagaye jaarahi hai.
thanks cara well written by u too, thanks sajid bhai

na kaho oose bewafa shayad kucch khata meri ho hogi
dil hai toota mera toh kya hua woh bhi meri yaad mein roti hi hogi
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«Reply #7 on: February 11, 2009, 05:58:51 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 10, 2009, 02:18:33 PM
Boaht khoo salil...

Tera andaz-e-bayaan GHAYEL ko bohat bhaya hain
Waise us raat tu kis mehfil se uth ke aaya hain
shukriya bhai jaan
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«Reply #8 on: February 11, 2009, 06:06:01 AM »
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Bahoth qoob sajid , salil , cara ji, maza agya !!

Aaj tere maiqane me itni sharaab  nahi saqi !!
ajj phir hosh me rahonga teri yaad rahegi baaqi !!

....................Qadeer Toopchi ..................
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«Reply #9 on: February 11, 2009, 06:51:21 AM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 11, 2009, 06:06:01 AM
Bahoth qoob sajid , salil , cara ji, maza agya !!

Aaj tere maiqane me itni sharaab  nahi saqi !!
ajj phir hosh me rahonga teri yaad rahegi baaqi !!

....................Qadeer Toopchi ..................

Wah meri jan yeh kya likh diya kaleja cheer ke nikal gaya yeh sher... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: February 11, 2009, 06:53:45 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 11, 2009, 06:51:21 AM
Wah meri jan yeh kya likh diya kaleja cheer ke nikal gaya yeh sher... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukriya meri jaan aur apni kalakari bhi dekha dete to hame khuch sikhne ko milta mere dost!!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #11 on: February 11, 2009, 07:22:52 AM »
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Quote from: salil2002 on January 10, 2009, 07:17:17 AM
nasha raha jab talak main khamosh raha
hosh main aate hi jaam badaya tune
haan tu chahti thi kii main kuch na kahoon
mere labon par rakh k oongli ye jataya tune

peeta raha sharaab main aur raat bhar muskuraata raha
tera gair kii baahon main beithna mujhe reh reh k yaad aata raha
chaha kii bhool jaun tujhe par yeh bhi mumkin na tha
woh barsaat kii raat ka kissa mujhe rulaata raha

hosh na aaya mujhe ,na aana tha mujhe yeh maloom tha
tera apne haathon se zeher pilana mujhe bhata raha
bas ek kasak le kar main vida hua apne dil main
aakhiri baar jab chume tere lab tu oonhe mere labon se hatata raha


salil ji kya baat hai bahut khoob magar main wah wah nahin kahunga. kyonki dard hota hai yaar.



dooba raha har pal jaam mein teri ek yaad mein
tu na rahi ab saath mere, hai toh bas teri aas
jeeta raha uss din se ab talak pee kar ashko gam
jaam jab bhi utha teri yaad ke saath

hua phir kashmkash ka daur yun aaya
ki botal ne bhi mujhko tera aks dhikhaya.
laakh gam uthaaye pfirta raha sunee rahon par
aur har raah par ek naya saaki maine paaya.
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«Reply #12 on: February 11, 2009, 07:24:11 AM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 11, 2009, 06:53:45 AM
Shukriya meri jaan aur apni kalakari bhi dekha dete to hame khuch sikhne ko milta mere dost!!

Qadeer Toopchi

Yaar ki guzarish mere liye hukum hain....

Baati gayee sharab meri mayyat pe dosto
Namaz-e-janaza meri Sakhi ne padayee dosto
Kandha diya Rindo ne janaze ko jhoomte hue
Aur dafn hua GHAYEL maikhane me dosto

                         -Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #13 on: February 11, 2009, 07:26:08 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 11, 2009, 07:24:11 AM
Yaar ki guzarish mere liye hukum hain....

Baati gayee sharab meri mayyat pe dosto
Namaz-e-janaza meri Sakhi ne padayee dosto
Kandha diya Rindo ne janaze ko jhoomte hue
Aur dafn hua GHAYEL maikhane me dosto

                         -Sajid Ghayel-


Wah Wah Wah mere dost kasam khuda ki kasam yaar bahoth umda likha tone mai aur maiqane ko kya jod ke rakha hai yaar !! "Rindon ne kandha diya " Wah Wah Wah !! kya baath ghayel !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #14 on: February 11, 2009, 07:51:23 AM »
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 wah wah ghayal ji kyo khoob hai
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