aakhiri jaam

by salil2002 on January 10, 2009, 07:17:17 AM
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«Reply #15 on: February 11, 2009, 09:49:53 AM »
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Bahoth qoob sajid , salil , cara ji, maza agya !!

Aaj tere maiqane me itni sharaab  nahi saqi !!
ajj phir hosh me rahonga teri yaad rahegi baaqi !!

....................Qadeer Toopchi ..................
salil ji kya baat hai bahut khoob magar main wah wah nahin kahunga. kyonki dard hota hai yaar.



dooba raha har pal jaam mein teri ek yaad mein
tu na rahi ab saath mere, hai toh bas teri aas
jeeta raha uss din se ab talak pee kar ashko gam
jaam jab bhi utha teri yaad ke saath

hua phir kashmkash ka daur yun aaya
ki botal ne bhi mujhko tera aks dhikhaya.
laakh gam uthaaye pfirta raha sunee rahon par
aur har raah par ek naya saaki maine paaya.

Yaar ki guzarish mere liye hukum hain....

Baati gayee sharab meri mayyat pe dosto
Namaz-e-janaza meri Sakhi ne padayee dosto
Kandha diya Rindo ne janaze ko jhoomte hue
Aur dafn hua GHAYEL maikhane me dosto

                         -Sajid Ghayel-

kasam khuda kii mazaa aa gaya qadeer bhai, sajid bhai aur rawat ji aapko pad kar ..................bahut hi behtareen koshish hai


kii mitti pe rakhte hi kadam jab jhoomne lage
  hawa mein gunje jab mohabbat ka tarana
samajh jaana yeh kabra hai saahil kii
  aur saaf niyat se do ghoont pila jaana
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«Reply #16 on: February 11, 2009, 10:24:12 AM »
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kasam khuda kii mazaa aa gaya qadeer bhai, sajid bhai aur rawat ji aapko pad kar ..................bahut hi behtareen koshish hai


kii mitti pe rakhte hi kadam jab jhoomne lage
  hawa mein gunje jab mohabbat ka tarana
samajh jaana yeh kabra hai saahil kii
  aur saaf niyat se do ghoont pila jaana

Wah Wah Salil bahoth qoob itna tassavurana mizaj rakhte ho janab !! aur umid bhi kafi rakhte ho saqi se !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #17 on: February 11, 2009, 10:54:24 AM »
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Bahoth qoob sajid "rindo ne kandha diya "

Pilade saqi eak jaam aisa is jaam ke baad !!
Maiqana bhool jaye "Qadeer" is qayaam ke baad !!
   
……………Qadeer Toopchi …………….
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salil2002
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«Reply #18 on: February 11, 2009, 11:10:10 AM »
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Bahoth qoob sajid "rindo ne kandha diya "

Pilade saqi eak jaam aisa is jaam ke baad !!
Maiqana bhool jaye "Qadeer" is qayaam ke baad !!
   
……………Qadeer Toopchi …………….
bhai jaan shukriya ...itna behtareen kalaam likhne k liye

yeh arzoo hai kafan ho maye se bheega hua
mujhe zami pe na dafnana dosto
jalana bhi toh lakdiyon par nahin
botlon k dher par litana dosto

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abdulqadeer
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«Reply #19 on: February 11, 2009, 11:18:10 AM »
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bhai jaan shukriya ...itna behtareen kalaam likhne k liye

yeh arzoo hai kafan ho maye se bheega hua
mujhe zami pe na dafnana dosto
jalana bhi toh lakdiyon par nahin
botlon k dher par litana dosto



Good salil !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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rawattanha
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«Reply #20 on: February 11, 2009, 12:35:53 PM »
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kasam khuda kii mazaa aa gaya qadeer bhai, sajid bhai aur rawat ji aapko pad kar ..................bahut hi behtareen koshish hai


kii mitti pe rakhte hi kadam jab jhoomne lage
  hawa mein gunje jab mohabbat ka tarana
samajh jaana yeh kabra hai saahil kii
  aur saaf niyat se do ghoont pila jaana


jab sunayee de door kahin tarana mohabbat ka
toh samjhna doston ye dard hai ek Ashiq ka
joh barson so raha hai kadmon tale tumhaare
pyaasa hai jara do jaam raham nazar kar jana.

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qayda
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«Reply #21 on: May 25, 2009, 01:33:38 PM »
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kya bat hai salil jee
apne to dard ko ek naya mukam de dala

ye dard sach mein bahoot dardili hoti hai....

apna khyal rakhiyega....
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salil2002
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«Reply #22 on: May 25, 2009, 02:24:39 PM »
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jab sunayee de door kahin tarana mohabbat ka
toh samjhna doston ye dard hai ek Ashiq ka
joh barson so raha hai kadmon tale tumhaare
pyaasa hai jara do jaam raham nazar kar jana.


kya bat hai salil jee
apne to dard ko ek naya mukam de dala

ye dard sach mein bahoot dardili hoti hai....

apna khyal rakhiyega....
thnks qayda and rawat bhai............

hai aashiq ka dil toota hua
saaqi ka daaman bhi bheega hai
maut naseeb nahin hoti hai ishq mein
dard ko mitaane ka maye ek tareeka hai
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