Aankhein nam ho gai.........

by gumnam on June 11, 2006, 03:11:32 PM
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Ashko ko humne kai baar roka,
       Fir bhi na jaane kyon aankhein dhokha de gai.
       Bharosha to tha hume apne aap par magar,
       Unka jikr aaate hi na jaane kyon aankhein nam ho gai.
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«Reply #1 on: June 13, 2006, 07:35:08 AM »
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Bahoot Khoob Gumnaam Bhai,..

Roke Nahi Rukte Hain Ashq Aankhon Se,..
Dard Bhi Rukne Ka Naam Nahi Leta Aansoon Bhi Behte Rehte Hain,..
Sab Apne Haal Mein Khush Hai Yahan "Jaanasheen"
Koi Hota Nahi Apna Yahan Ye Baat Aksar Mujhe Ye Ashq Kehte Hain,..

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«Reply #2 on: June 14, 2006, 02:22:05 PM »
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thanks jaanasheen..........aapne bhi bahut achha likha hai.....

Waqt ki bojhil palko se,tapka hu main aansu bankar,
Mit gaya dard ki mehfil mein,unke adharo ka moti bankar...
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«Reply #3 on: June 14, 2006, 02:33:50 PM »
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gumnam ji ,jansheen ..........both of u very nice............

jehan ne aaj phir mere uski jafa ka parda hata diya
 uski yaadon ki sez per phir dil ne mujhko lita diya
palko per surkh andhera tha jo uski bewafayi ka kabhi
 mere aankhon ne  ashk-e-lahoo se aaj usko mita diya

 ..........@fahi@...............
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«Reply #4 on: June 15, 2006, 12:51:01 PM »
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thanks jaanasheen..........aapne bhi bahut achha likha hai.....

Waqt ki bojhil palko se,tapka hu main aansu bankar,
Mit gaya dard ki mehfil mein,unke adharo ka moti bankar...


Ashq Tumhare Moti Bankar Aankhon Se Geer Pade,..
Humare To Aansoon Ko Aansoon Bhi Na Samajhaa Gaya,..

_________________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2006, 12:52:40 PM »
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gumnam ji ,jansheen ..........both of you very nice............

jehan ne aaj phir mere uski jafa ka parda hata diya
 uski yaadon ki sez per phir dil ne mujhko lita diya
palko per surkh andhera tha jo uski bewafayi ka kabhi
 mere aankhon ne  ashk-e-lahoo se aaj usko mita diya

 ..........@fahi@...............


Waah Bahoot Khoob LIkha Hai PJAG,..
Lage Raho,..
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«Reply #6 on: June 17, 2006, 02:47:29 PM »
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thanks jaanasheen..........aapne bhi bahut achha likha hai.....

Waqt ki bojhil palko se,tapka hu main aansu bankar,
Mit gaya dard ki mehfil mein,unke adharo ka moti bankar...


Ashq Tumhare Moti Bankar Aankhon Se Geer Pade,..
Humare To Aansoon Ko Aansoon Bhi Na Samajhaa Gaya,..

_________________________________________-Jaanasheen-
BAHUT KHUB....

APNE AANSUO KI KIMAT TUMNE NA PEHCHANI,
AASHIQ KA AANSU HAI,GIREGA TO JAL-JALA MACHA DEGA
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«Reply #7 on: June 17, 2006, 02:48:32 PM »
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gumnam ji ,jansheen ..........both of you very nice............

jehan ne aaj phir mere uski jafa ka parda hata diya
 uski yaadon ki sez per phir dil ne mujhko lita diya
palko per surkh andhera tha jo uski bewafayi ka kabhi
 mere aankhon ne  ashk-e-lahoo se aaj usko mita diya

 ..........@fahi@...............
THANKS AUR AAPNE BHI BAHUT ACHHA LIKHA HAI......
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«Reply #8 on: June 18, 2006, 10:33:18 AM »
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thanks jaanasheen..........aapne bhi bahut achha likha hai.....

Waqt ki bojhil palko se,tapka hu main aansu bankar,
Mit gaya dard ki mehfil mein,unke adharo ka moti bankar...


Ashq Tumhare Moti Bankar Aankhon Se Geer Pade,..
Humare To Aansoon Ko Aansoon Bhi Na Samajhaa Gaya,..

_________________________________________-Jaanasheen-
BAHUT KHUB....

APNE AANSUO KI KIMAT TUMNE NA PEHCHANI,
AASHIQ KA AANSU HAI,GIREGA TO JAL-JALA MACHA DEGA
Nice One Gumnam Bhai,..

Khair Hai Ki Hume Rone Ki Adat Nahi,..
Warna Saara Sheher Aansoon Se Doob Jata,..

_________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #9 on: June 23, 2006, 02:53:53 PM »
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thanks jaanasheen..........aapne bhi bahut achha likha hai.....

Waqt ki bojhil palko se,tapka hu main aansu bankar,
Mit gaya dard ki mehfil mein,unke adharo ka moti bankar...


Ashq Tumhare Moti Bankar Aankhon Se Geer Pade,..
Humare To Aansoon Ko Aansoon Bhi Na Samajhaa Gaya,..

_________________________________________-Jaanasheen-
BAHUT KHUB....

APNE AANSUO KI KIMAT TUMNE NA PEHCHANI,
AASHIQ KA AANSU HAI,GIREGA TO JAL-JALA MACHA DEGA
Nice One Gumnam Bhai,..

Khair Hai Ki Hume Rone Ki Adat Nahi,..
Warna Saara Sheher Aansoon Se Doob Jata,..

_________________________-Jaanasheen-
BAHUT KHUB...


Teri surkh aankho se anjaan nahi main,
fir bhi aansu ka ek katra to gira tha us bewafa ke naam par......
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«Reply #10 on: June 29, 2006, 07:20:09 AM »
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Bahoot Khoob Gumnam Bhai,..

Aansoon Bhi Ab Behne Ka Naam Nahi Lete "Gumnam",..
Jab Kaha Usne Hume Muskuraane Ko Apne Saare Gham Dekar,..

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«Reply #11 on: June 29, 2006, 02:08:47 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Gumnam Bhai,..

Aansoon Bhi Ab Behne Ka Naam Nahi Lete "Gumnam",..
Jab Kaha Usne Hume Muskuraane Ko Apne Saare Gham Dekar,..

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BAHUT KHUB JAANASHEEN BHAI...........

BHAR AATI HAI AAJ BHI AANKHEIN,
JO LETA HAI KOI NAAM US HARZAI KA.
BAHUT ROYE HAI JINDAGI BHAR YAARO,
SAMBHALA GAYA NA DARD JUDAI KA.
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«Reply #12 on: June 30, 2006, 06:00:23 AM »
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Shukriya Gumnam Bhai,..
And Nice One,..

Sehkar Bhi Gham Judaai Ka Main Muskuraata Raha,..
Jab Kaha Usne Ke Aayegi Mujhse Milne Ek Din,...
Magar Khabar Na Thi Ki Inhi Dino Mein,.
Wo Mujhse Bewafaai kar Jaayegi,..

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«Reply #13 on: July 02, 2006, 01:11:21 PM »
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Shukriya Gumnam Bhai,..
And Nice One,..

Sehkar Bhi Gham Judaai Ka Main Muskuraata Raha,..
Jab Kaha Usne Ke Aayegi Mujhse Milne Ek Din,...
Magar Khabar Na Thi Ki Inhi Dino Mein,.
Wo Mujhse Bewafaai kar Jaayegi,..

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THANKS AND NICE ONE
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«Reply #14 on: July 03, 2006, 10:17:07 AM »
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Shukriya Gumnam Bhai,..
Kuch Likha Nahi,..Apne,.
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