Aankhein nam ho gai.........

by gumnam on June 11, 2006, 03:11:32 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 05, 2006, 01:40:37 PM »
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Shukriya Gumnam Bhai,..
Kuch Likha Nahi,..Apne,.
kya karu yaar,lafz nahi mil rahe.......tumhara naam best poet ke liye approve hona chahiye.......main peechhle 12 saalo se likh raha hu....pehli baar lafzo ki kami hai....fir bhi tumhare liye kuchh likhta hu.........

Ye kafas hi mujhko ajeej hai,
Yaha jee to luga karaar se.
Mujhe ab chaman mein na le chalo,
Main dara hua hu bahar se.....
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«Reply #16 on: July 06, 2006, 12:20:45 PM »
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Shukriya Gumnam Bhai,..
Kuch Likha Nahi,..Apne,.
kya karu yaar,lafz nahi mil rahe.......tumhara naam best poet ke liye approve hona chahiye.......main peechhle 12 saalo se likh raha hu....pehli baar lafzo ki kami hai....fir bhi tumhare liye kuchh likhta hu.........

Ye kafas hi mujhko ajeej hai,
Yaha jee to luga karaar se.
Mujhe ab chaman mein na le chalo,
Main dara hua hu bahar se.....


Bahoot Khoob Hoon Bhai,..

Phool Hume Na Do Hume Inke Murjhaane Ka Darr Hai,..
Kantein Hi Likhdo Naseeb Mein Meri Ye Kahan Murjhaa Jaate hain,...
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«Reply #17 on: July 06, 2006, 12:22:55 PM »
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Darne Laga Bahaar Se Main Ab "Jaanasheen",..
Jab Dekha Kalion Ko Kaanton Se Judaa Hote Hue,..
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«Reply #18 on: July 09, 2006, 01:59:26 PM »
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Darne Laga Bahaar Se Main Ab "Jaanasheen",..
Jab Dekha Kalion Ko Kaanton Se Judaa Hote Hue,..
bahut khub.....

CHAMAN SE GAR JAATI HAI BAHAAR TO KAANTEIN KYO RAHE,
BAHAAREIN SAATH LAAYEE THI,BAHAAREIN SAATH LE JAAYE.
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«Reply #19 on: July 11, 2006, 09:30:28 AM »
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Darne Laga Bahaar Se Main Ab "Jaanasheen",..
Jab Dekha Kalion Ko Kaanton Se Judaa Hote Hue,..
bahut khub.....

CHAMAN SE GAR JAATI HAI BAHAAR TO KAANTEIN KYO RAHE,
BAHAAREIN SAATH LAAYEE THI,BAHAAREIN SAATH LE JAAYE.
Bahoot Khoob Gumnam Bhai,..

Bahaarein Hume Kahan Saath Le Jaayengi,..
Cheen Kar Kali Ko Hume Kanton Mein Chord Jaayegi,..
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«Reply #20 on: July 12, 2006, 01:51:50 PM »
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Darne Laga Bahaar Se Main Ab "Jaanasheen",..
Jab Dekha Kalion Ko Kaanton Se Judaa Hote Hue,..
bahut khub.....

CHAMAN SE GAR JAATI HAI BAHAAR TO KAANTEIN KYO RAHE,
BAHAAREIN SAATH LAAYEE THI,BAHAAREIN SAATH LE JAAYE.
Bahoot Khoob Gumnam Bhai,..

Bahaarein Hume Kahan Saath Le Jaayengi,..
Cheen Kar Kali Ko Hume Kanton Mein Chord Jaayegi,..
BAHUT KHUB.....

YU GUJRI HAI HUM PAR BAHAARO MEIN,
NAJAR JO DAALI GULO PAR,CHHUBHE KAANTE KALEJE MEIN....
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«Reply #21 on: July 12, 2006, 01:54:46 PM »
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Waah Bhai,..

Phool Se Mohabbat Kya Karte Ho,..
Wo To Murjhaa Jaata Hai...
Karo To Kaanton Se Karo,..
Jo Chubne Ke Baad Bhi Yaad Aata Hai,..
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«Reply #22 on: July 12, 2006, 02:10:13 PM »
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Waah Bhai,..

Phool Se Mohabbat Kya Karte Ho,..
Wo To Murjhaa Jaata Hai...
Karo To Kaanton Se Karo,..
Jo Chubne Ke Baad Bhi Yaad Aata Hai,..
BAHUT KHUB....


KAANTE TO APNI AADAT KE ANUSAAR NUKEELE HOTE HAI,
KUCHH PHOOL MAGAR KAANTO SE BHI JAYDA JEHREELE HOTE HAI..
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«Reply #23 on: July 12, 2006, 02:15:46 PM »
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Har Phool Ka Aitbaar Nahi Karte,..
Miljaaye Khushi To Inkaar Nahi Karte,..
De Jaate Hain Kabhi Phool Bhi Zakham Gehre,..
Isliye Phoolon Se Hum Pyaar Nahi Karte,..

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«Reply #24 on: July 12, 2006, 02:51:41 PM »
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Har Phool Ka Aitbaar Nahi Karte,..
Miljaaye Khushi To Inkaar Nahi Karte,..
De Jaate Hain Kabhi Phool Bhi Zakham Gehre,..
Isliye Phoolon Se Hum Pyaar Nahi Karte,..

___________________________-Jaanasheen-
BAHUT KHUB


KHUD TU HI MERE DIL KA DARD SAMAJH LE,
YE HASTA HUA CHEHRA TO JAMAANE KE LIYE HAI..
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«Reply #25 on: July 12, 2006, 05:26:58 PM »
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its superb azeem bhai and gumnam ji.....bahut hi aacha likha hai
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«Reply #26 on: July 14, 2006, 02:03:22 PM »
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its superb azeem bhai and gumnam ji.....bahut hi aacha likha hai
SHUKRIYA RANJANA JI........


MUJHE BHULANA CHAHO TO BHI NA BHULA SAKOGE KABHI,
MAIN TO PALKO PE THAHAR JAAUNGA ASKO KI TARAH..
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«Reply #27 on: July 14, 2006, 02:56:18 PM »
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its superb azeem bhai and gumnam ji.....bahut hi aacha likha hai


Shukriya Ranjana Sis,..
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«Reply #28 on: July 14, 2006, 03:03:08 PM »
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Har Phool Ka Aitbaar Nahi Karte,..
Miljaaye Khushi To Inkaar Nahi Karte,..
De Jaate Hain Kabhi Phool Bhi Zakham Gehre,..
Isliye Phoolon Se Hum Pyaar Nahi Karte,..

___________________________-Jaanasheen-
BAHUT KHUB


KHUD TU HI MERE DIL KA DARD SAMAJH LE,
YE HASTA HUA CHEHRA TO JAMAANE KE LIYE HAI..


Bahoot Khoob,..

Aaya Hoon Teri Mehfil Mein Main Ye Soch Kar,..
Ke Dil Ki Taah Samjhe Ga Tu Mere Ashq Dekh Kar,..

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«Reply #29 on: July 14, 2006, 03:05:45 PM »
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its superb azeem bhai and gumnam ji.....bahut hi aacha likha hai
SHUKRIYA RANJANA JI........


MUJHE BHULANA CHAHO TO BHI NA BHULA SAKOGE KABHI,
MAIN TO PALKO PE THAHAR JAAUNGA ASKO KI TARAH..


Nice One Bhai,..

Ro Sake Hum Teri Yaad Mein Ye Bhi Tujhe Gawara Nahi,..
Isliye Dekh Aaj Apni Bebasi Par Bhi Muskuraa Rahe Hain,..

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