Aasra de ke dil tod te hain mera!

by lost_soul on February 08, 2005, 02:57:09 PM
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Bhoolne waale se koyi keh de zara
is tarah yaad aane se kya faaida,
Jab mere dil ki duniya basaati nahin
phir khayaalon mein aane se kya faaida
Kya kahoon aapse kitni umeeden thi
Aap kya badle duniya badal si gayi,
Aasra de ke dil tod te hain mera
Is tarah sataane se kya faaida,
Chaar tinke jala ke kya mil gaya
Mit sakana zamane se mera nishaan,
Mujhpe bijli girao to jaanu sahi
Aashiaan par girane se kya faaida
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«Reply #1 on: February 09, 2005, 05:42:30 PM »
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nicee!!! lekin kahi aur pe bhi post hua hai yeh i think

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«Reply #2 on: February 10, 2005, 02:23:15 PM »
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nicee!!! lekin kahi aur pe bhi post hua hai yeh i think

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thanx meena..jee ur rite kahin aur  se hee liya hai....par i jus thought its xactly hw im feelin nw..suits me fine...so bus likh diya  im sorry if i dint giv credit 2 d rite prsn... ne wy...aap bus itna hee likha meenaji...i ws lukin 4wrd 2 ur reply...i thnk u giv d best javabs!!!
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«Reply #3 on: February 10, 2005, 04:54:44 PM »
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:D  arre if its not urs na to just mention NM (not mine)! :D

thanx for the compliment ji, mai to bas nacheez hoon, i think mujshe bhi ache shayar hai yaha to!  :D  but thanx

jawab nahin dete hum bas kehte hai baat dil ki,
jo shayari ched jati hai humare taar dil ki!

 :D
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«Reply #4 on: February 11, 2005, 02:24:53 PM »
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:D  arre if its not urs na to just mention NM (not mine)! :D

thanx for the compliment ji, mai to bas nacheez hoon, i think mujshe bhi ache shayar hai yaha to!  :D  but thanx

jawab nahin dete hum bas kehte hai baat dil ki,
jo shayari ched jati hai humare taar dil ki!

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jee....
jawab to sab dete hai, shayri to sb padte hai,
bus dil ko chooh leni wali baat to sirf aap kehte hai...
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«Reply #5 on: February 11, 2005, 03:19:20 PM »
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shukriya ji shukriya!!! :D

dil se nikli baat us dil ko chu hi leti hai,
jiske chehre pe gum me bhi hasi aa hi jati hai!

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«Reply #6 on: February 11, 2005, 03:24:36 PM »
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shukriya ji shukriya!!! :D

dil se nikli baat us dil ko chu hi leti hai,
jiske chehre pe gum me bhi hasi aa hi jati hai!

 :D


Dua mangi thi aashiyane ki...
Chal padi andhiya zamane ki...
mera gam koi na samaj paya...
kyoki meri adat thi muskarane ki...
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«Reply #7 on: February 11, 2005, 03:37:39 PM »
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duayen humne bih mangi hai bohot,
har dua kabool ho yeh zarori to nahin,
tabasum hum bhi rakhte hai chehre me magar,
har hasi me gum ho yeh zaroori to nahin!
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«Reply #8 on: February 12, 2005, 09:03:15 AM »
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duayen humne bih mangi hai bohot,
har dua kabool ho yeh zarori to nahin,
tabasum hum bhi rakhte hai chehre me magar,
har hasi me gum ho yeh zaroori to nahin!


bohot khub meenaji.....

har dua kabool hoti, to fr koi nhi mangta
bus soch leta mann me aur haasil kr leta,
gum me bhi aati hai hasi humko,
aap saat dete to, gum chod ke bus huss leta!
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«Reply #9 on: February 12, 2005, 09:12:41 AM »
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wah!!!!!!!
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«Reply #10 on: February 12, 2005, 09:19:20 AM »
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wah!!!!!!!

jee shukriya...par aap kuch likh dete to mazaa aa jata
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«Reply #11 on: February 12, 2005, 09:41:58 AM »
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:D
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«Reply #12 on: February 12, 2005, 09:42:14 AM »
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:D
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«Reply #13 on: February 12, 2005, 01:56:44 PM »
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apki khamoshi hy bohot kuch keh deti hai...
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«Reply #14 on: February 12, 2005, 05:06:26 PM »
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hmmm

meri kamoshi ki dastan tum mat pado aye dost,
isme to abih mai khud ulji hui hoon!
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