Ab bas rehne do..1

by nishita on November 13, 2004, 05:31:56 PM
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«Reply #15 on: November 15, 2004, 06:22:50 PM »
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Thanks Immi n Nishi..n Good one Immi!!!
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«Reply #16 on: November 16, 2004, 02:24:11 PM »
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NISHI WROTE,
 Aansu jo beh rahey hein inhein behney do
Yeh keh rahey hein dil ki baat, kehney do

Buhat bawafa ho tum, yeh ham ko hai maloom
Tum apni wafa ki baat, apney tak hi rehney do

Mila to kia mila tumhein chahney kay baad
Bas dukh hi seh rahein hein, hamein sehney do

Tum ney to keh dala sab haal-e-dil apna
Ab mujh ko apni daastaan bhi kehney do

Mar hi gaye auroon kay liye hum
Tum apni khatir hum ko Zinda rehney do (NM)


VERY NICE WROTE NISHI
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«Reply #17 on: November 16, 2004, 04:52:56 PM »
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thanks all

Quote from: "immi"
Nishita yeh aapke liye.... hope you'll like it. !!!!!!

Yeh aansu hai anmol, inhey na bahawo
kiya khata hai hamari, hume to batawo,

hume kasam hai, wafa ki humari
shikayat nahi koi, tumse humari,

jo paya hai tumne, woh anmol dukh hai,
esi mein humari, mohabbat choopi hai,

jo haal-e-dil ki daastaan suni aapki humne
mahak apni mohabbat ki humne usme paaye

aansa hai marna, auroon ke liye meri jaa.n
tum apna jeewan, humari khatir ji ke dikhao.


too good immi....  yeh hai mera jawaab..

Ye jaane bhi kya jaana hai, jo jaate ho khafaa hokar
main to tab jaanu mere dil se chale jaao judaa hokar

Qayaamat tak udegi dil se uthkar khaak aankho tak
isi raaste gayaa hai hasraton ka kaafilaa hokar

Tumhi ab dard-e-dil ke naam se ghabraaye jaate ho
tumhi to dil mein shaayad aaye the dard-e-aashiyaan hokar... (NM)
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«Reply #18 on: November 16, 2004, 05:11:42 PM »
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Very NIce Nishita !!!!!    Bahot Khub !!!

yeh khafa bhi kiya khafa hona hai, jo huve sirf muttasar ke liye
Dil se judaa ho jaaye ge, par rooh se judaa na ho paaye ge

yeh dil bhi kiya dil hai, jisme armaan the judai ke,
phir kyun rah gaye is dil mein, mohabbat ke dastaan katra kar

yeh shaq bhi kiya shaq hai, unhe aaj bhi hum par
jo kehte hai ki shayad hum hi aaye the dard-e-aashiyaan hokar
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nishita
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«Reply #19 on: November 16, 2004, 05:17:10 PM »
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Quote from: "immi"
Very NIce Nishita !!!!!    Bahot Khub !!!

yeh khafa bhi kiya khafa hona hai, jo huve sirf muttasar ke liye
Dil se judaa ho jaaye ge, par rooh se judaa na ho paaye ge

yeh dil bhi kiya dil hai, jisme armaan the judai ke,
phir kyun rah gaye is dil mein, mohabbat ke dastaan katra kar

yeh shaq bhi kiya shaq hai, unhe aaj bhi hum par
jo kehte hai ki shayad hum hi aaye the dard-e-aashiyaan hokar


very nice immi

jaane wale teri ek adaa se wakif hai hum
kisne kisko dhoka diya sab jaante hai hum
tum karlo beshak inkaar apni bewafai se magar
Teri wafa ko mere yaar khoob pehchante hai hum
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immi
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«Reply #20 on: November 16, 2004, 05:25:33 PM »
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Bahot khub Nishita !!!

kiya pehchana, mere yaar tune mujko
hum to wafa karke bhi, bewafa mein shamil hai

"Jaane wale lot ke nahi aate,
Jaane walo ki yaad aati hai " (NM)
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«Reply #21 on: November 16, 2004, 05:39:55 PM »
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thanks immi... and bohat sahi likha aapne...

Tamannaon ke bahlaave mein aksar aa hi jaate hai
kabhi hum chot khaate hai kabhi hum muskuraate hai
Kisi ke saath jab beete hue lamhon ki yaad ayi
thaki aankhon me ashkon ke sitaare jhil-milate hai... (NM)
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immi
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«Reply #22 on: November 16, 2004, 05:53:28 PM »
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Bahot Khub Nishita !!!!

"Jab tujhe dil se bhulane ki kasam khayee hai
pehle se bhi jyada teri yaad aayee hai,  ....."
(NM)
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«Reply #23 on: November 16, 2004, 05:58:33 PM »
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wah wah kya baat hai..!!

dil-e-arzoo ne hume deewana bana diya,
roye na the par tune rula diya,
tumhe humari yaad na aayi hogi kabhi,
par humne teri yaad mein zamaana bhula diya (NM)
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«Reply #24 on: November 16, 2004, 06:12:16 PM »
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Thanks n Very nice Nishita !!

Aye mere Maalik, yeh kiya ghazab kiya maine,
hasaane ki bajay, unhe rula diya maine,

hume unki yaad na aayi, yeh shikayat hai unhe,
aur humari yaad mei zamaane ko bhulne ka guroor hai unhe
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nishita
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«Reply #25 on: November 16, 2004, 06:16:55 PM »
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waah immi i liked the first two lines.. Usual Smile

Apne dil ko tere khayalon se kaise saaf kar doon
tujhe badnaam kar doon ya tujhe main maaf kar doon
tujhe cheen loon duniya se ya apne jazbaat karo main qaid
main kis tarah aakhir apni zindagi se insaaf kar loon... (NM)
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immi
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«Reply #26 on: November 16, 2004, 06:23:00 PM »
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wah, bahot khub, excellent !!! very nice !!!

Few lines from one of my favourite ghazal :

"woh parde ke pichey, mein pardey ke aage,
na woh aaye aage, na mein javu pichey,
woh aage badege to kuch bhi na hoga
mein pichey hathuga to duniya hassegi"
(NM)
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«Reply #27 on: November 16, 2004, 08:06:28 PM »
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Wah!!! bahoot khoob Nishita and immi!!! bahoot khoob!!!!
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akela
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«Reply #28 on: November 16, 2004, 08:26:03 PM »
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bahoot khoob dosto
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immi
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«Reply #29 on: November 16, 2004, 09:21:16 PM »
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Thanks Pooja n Akela !!!!
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