Ab kyu laut aye ho!

by salma786 on April 21, 2012, 06:03:06 PM
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Awaaz di hai tumne mujhe,
Phir se yaad aane ko,
Jo hath thama tha tumne mera,
Kabhi na chor jane ko,
Kiye the waade kayi, khaaye the kayi kasme,
Ab aye ho saalo baad un kasmon ko nibhane ko!

Chaha tha tumne mujhe,
Bas pal bhar dil behlane ko,
Un palo ke bhawar me reh gayi mai,
Bikhar kar tut jaane ko,
Toot kar jud saka hai kaun,
Jo aye ho wapas mujhse jud jane ko!

Hai asaan tumhare liye jana,
Phir jakar wapas aana,
Par Ye to batao Tum aye ho wapas,
Ek laash se ab kya paane ko!
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«Reply #1 on: April 21, 2012, 06:43:59 PM »
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Salmaa Sahibaa Aadaab!


WaaH jee waaH kia kahne jee waaH behad khoob ahsaas O khayal
aur behad umdaa lafzoN meiN khayaaloN ki adaaygi ki hai aapne... Usual Smile

Aik dilfareb aur umdaa kalaam par humari dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile   
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«Reply #2 on: April 21, 2012, 06:53:37 PM »
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Quote from: salma786 on April 21, 2012, 06:03:06 PM
Awaaz di hai tumne mujhe,
Phir se yaad aane ko,
Jo hath thama tha tumne mera,
Kabhi na chor jane ko,
Kiye the waade kayi, khaaye the kayi kasme,
Ab aye ho saalo baad un kasmon ko nibhane ko!

Chaha tha tumne mujhe,
Bas pal bhar dil behlane ko,
Un palo ke bhawar me reh gayi mai,
Bikhar kar tut jaane ko,
Toot kar jud saka hai kaun,
Jo aye ho wapas mujhse jud jane ko!

Hai asaan tumhare liye jana,
Phir jakar wapas aana,
Par Ye to batao Tum aye ho wapas,
Ek laash se ab kya paane ko!
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«Reply #3 on: April 21, 2012, 07:55:14 PM »
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bahut hi umda, Salma Ji, mubaarak ho
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«Reply #4 on: April 22, 2012, 03:46:17 AM »
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 icon_flower Applause icon_flower
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«Reply #5 on: April 22, 2012, 07:24:15 AM »
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bht dard bhra aur bht umdaa post--
dil ke ehsaaso ko bht khoob alfaaz die h aapne
daad daad daaad
khus rahen
muskurate rahen
aate rahen
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«Reply #6 on: April 22, 2012, 01:16:09 PM »
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waaaaaah bahut khoob salmaajjii....bahut sundar
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«Reply #7 on: April 22, 2012, 04:56:18 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on April 21, 2012, 06:43:59 PM
Salmaa Sahibaa Aadaab!


WaaH jee waaH kia kahne jee waaH behad khoob ahsaas O khayal
aur behad umdaa lafzoN meiN khayaaloN ki adaaygi ki hai aapne... Usual Smile

Aik dilfareb aur umdaa kalaam par humari dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile   


Shukriya Parwaaz Ji , Jitni izzat apni bakshi is ke kaabil to mai nahi, Par inshallah koshish zarur garungi is kaabil banne ko!
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«Reply #8 on: April 22, 2012, 04:59:17 PM »
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Shukriya Manoj ji, Saini ji, Sarfira ji, Dolly Ji!
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«Reply #9 on: April 23, 2012, 03:30:58 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut bahut khoob Salma ji.... bahut hi khoobsurat se shabdon me aapne dard ko bayaan kiya hai....!!!
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«Reply #10 on: April 25, 2012, 03:48:33 PM »
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Very nice.
Es post se bahut gahra dard jhalak rha h.
Ummid ye dard reality me nhi hoga.
Es saandar post ke liye hmari daad kabool kare.
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«Reply #11 on: May 11, 2012, 05:38:10 PM »
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Shukriya Hriday ji!
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«Reply #12 on: May 11, 2012, 05:49:01 PM »
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dard se bhari is rachna ke liye meri ore se mubaraq baad kubool keejiye salma ji ummeed hai yeh sirf kalpna mein ho aur vastvik jeevan mein aap khush rahen aabaad rahen aur acche achhe kalaam pesh karti rahen,ek chhota sa rau meri ore se daad ke saath
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«Reply #13 on: May 11, 2012, 05:50:20 PM »
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Quote from: masoom shahjada on April 25, 2012, 03:48:33 PM
Very nice.
Es post se bahut gahra dard jhalak rha h.
Ummid ye dard reality me nhi hoga.
Es saandar post ke liye hmari daad kabool kare.

Shukriya shahjada ji...or befikr rahiye mai real life me kaafi khush hu Usual Smile...ye to bas meri kalpana thi!
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«Reply #14 on: May 11, 2012, 06:04:36 PM »
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bahut khoob peshkash Salma ji...

Intezar !
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