Ab to haaqikat se dar lgta hai.. by dilshad

by Rehan Rahman on June 04, 2016, 09:50:00 AM
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,Ab to haqqikat se dar lagta hai...
Khud ko dekhu kis nazar se...
Khud ko khud se dar lgta tha..
Acha vla tha... akela..
Wo aaae aur deewana kr gye..
Es deewangi se dar lgta...hai..
Jaise koi seesa toot kr jaami pe bikhar jata hai...
Waise toot na jae ye dil es baat se dar lgta hai...
U to beebashi ki aag ne mere dil ko jalaya hai...
Hr baar mar kr fir se zinda na haau.
Es baat se dar lgta hai...
En aankho ne... bhot gum chupae hai..
Khusi k lea koi jagah ho na ho es baat se dar lagta hai..
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«Reply #1 on: June 04, 2016, 07:43:54 PM »
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nkeep writing..good to see new works!
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«Reply #2 on: June 05, 2016, 01:36:23 AM »
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bahut umdah waah.
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«Reply #3 on: June 05, 2016, 08:58:45 AM »
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waah waah waah kyaa kehne, kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne... bahut achchaa lagaa padh ke....!!!
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«Reply #4 on: June 05, 2016, 06:12:57 PM »
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well tried and explained.... likhte rahiye ..
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«Reply #5 on: June 07, 2016, 12:33:29 PM »
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very nice
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