Adrishya Jeevan Disha:Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai

syednaami

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Jeevan mera bhi kuchh yun beeta hota
Dhan suvarna sampatti sab paya na hota

Jeevan mera bhi kuchh yun beeta hota
Dhan suvarna sampatti sab paya na hota

Darpana drishya main bhi nahin pahchaana
kaisi machlee antar main yeh avidyaa
drashti meri thi bhatki konsi audh

Jeevan mera bhi kuchh yun beeta hota
Dhan suvarna sampatti sab paya na hota

jeevan ko bitaya pragati ke virodh
aata kyun nahin mann men parinaam
chala ja raha hun vikshep maarg ki audh

Jeevan mera bhi kuchh yun beeta hota
Dhan suvarna sampatti sab paya na hota

(S Naami)

Samarpit:: Prateek Mardiya


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Sonia01

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Re: Adrishya Jeevan Disha

«Reply #1 on: April 17, 2008, 04:07:54 PM »

Ye aapne bahut accha likha hai Syednami jee. heading b kuch alagsa
accha laga padkar.


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syednaami

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Re: Adrishya Jeevan Disha

«Reply #2 on: April 19, 2008, 02:20:38 AM »

Pranaam
Shrimati Sonia, aapki prashansa ka hrday se dhanyavaad.

Chhoti si kavita ka prayatna kia hai, aasha hai sab ko meri Pehli Hindi kavita theek lagi hogi.

Aap ka dhanyavaad


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Sonia01

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Re: Adrishya Jeevan Disha

«Reply #3 on: April 19, 2008, 02:31:25 AM »

Quote from: syednaami on April 19, 2008, 02:20:38 AM

Pranaam
Shrimati Sonia, aapki prashansa ka hrday se dhanyavaad.

Chhoti si kavita ka prayatna kia hai, aasha hai sab ko meri Pehli Hindi kavita theek lagi hogi.

Aap ka dhanyavaad

Wah kya ada hai dhanyavaad ka. Hum prasanna huye baccha tongue3


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syednaami

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Re: Adrishya Jeevan Disha

«Reply #4 on: April 19, 2008, 12:02:38 PM »

Main aap se vinay karta hun, krpya aparihaasi (Serious, sanjeeda) rahen, yeh thread bhi dukhat kavitaon ka hai.
Har kshan har sthal thhathha achhi nahin hoti.

Dhanyavaad


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punam

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Re: Adrishya Jeevan Disha

«Reply #5 on: April 19, 2008, 12:37:21 PM »

Quote from: syednaami on April 16, 2008, 07:45:40 PM

Jeevan mera bhi kuchh yun beeta hota
Dhan suvarna sampatti sab paya na hota

Jeevan mera bhi kuchh yun beeta hota
Dhan suvarna sampatti sab paya na hota

Darpana drishya main bhi nahin pahchaana
kaisi machlee antar main yeh avidyaa
drashti meri thi bhatki konsi audh

Jeevan mera bhi kuchh yun beeta hota
Dhan suvarna sampatti sab paya na hota

jeevan ko bitaya pragati ke virodh
aata kyun nahin mann men parinaam
chala ja rahun vikshep maarg ki audh

Jeevan mera bhi kuchh yun beeta hota
Dhan suvarna sampatti sab paya na hota

(S Naami)

Samarpit:: Prateek Mardiya

is sundar kavita ke liye meri haardik badhaai!


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Prateek Mardia

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Re: Adrishya Jeevan Disha

«Reply #6 on: April 21, 2008, 03:40:44 AM »

Syeednaami ji,

Bohut sundar bhaave he aapke.aapke nirantar prayas,aapka juzhharu vyaktitva ka aaiana he.meri shubhkanye sada aapke saath he.

Regards
Prateek


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syednaami

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Re: Adrishya Jeevan Disha

«Reply #7 on: April 22, 2008, 04:04:33 AM »

Quote from: punam on April 19, 2008, 12:37:21 PM

is sundar kavita ke liye meri haardik badhaai!

Quote from: Prateek Mardia on April 21, 2008, 03:40:44 AM

Syeednaami ji,

Bohut sundar bhaave he aapke.aapke nirantar prayas,aapka juzhharu vyaktitva ka aaiana he.meri shubhkanye sada aapke saath he.

Regards
Prateek

Punam ji anek dhanyavaad aap ne prashansa ki.

Prateek mitr :
Aap ke sambhaashit bhaavanaon ka men antaraatma se sweekaar karta hun.
Krpya aap bhi kuchh likh kar humen kuchh shiksha pradaan karen.

Keval

S Naami


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