~aisa kyun hota hai~

by Naya_Daur on January 26, 2006, 07:00:18 AM
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Jane kiu is jahan main aisa hota hai,
Khushi jise mile,wohi rota hai,

Umar bhar sath nibha na sake jo,
Jane kiu pyar usi se hota hai..
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«Reply #1 on: January 26, 2006, 06:07:38 PM »
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very nice buring ji...

rone ki adat hai hume aaj bahana hai bewafai ka,
kushiyan meri apni nahin, aaj waqt hai unki vidai ka,
kisse shikwa kare, kisse dosh de "Meena",
bas yehi ek saza milti hai sab kisi se dillagayi ka!
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«Reply #2 on: January 26, 2006, 08:49:08 PM »
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superbbb Burning n Meena sis....
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«Reply #3 on: January 27, 2006, 02:30:59 AM »
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thnks meena ji n nikki ji...

Kal raat phir ashkon ki barsat hui,
barse aaise mano puri unki muddaton ki pyas hui,

 dekhkar unko pathar bhi pighal jaata,
par isliye duniya dil ki viraan hui,

 JEET jeete ji tanha tanhaiyon k beech aaise jaise
 sansen hi sanson pe ehsan hui,

jab tutegee sanson ki dore ek din,
 tab lagega hum par bhi shayad zindagi meharban hui…
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«Reply #4 on: January 27, 2006, 05:41:33 PM »
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shukriya nikki and buring ji! acha likha hai!

 :D
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«Reply #5 on: January 28, 2006, 07:32:18 AM »
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Chahton ki saaza de gaye...

Aakhiri waqt pe daga  de gaye...

Humne dhunda tha unhe mushkilon se...

jate jate Haath mein phir diya de gaye.
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«Reply #6 on: February 18, 2006, 12:12:44 PM »
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Jane kiu is jahan main aisa hota hai,
Khushi jise mile,wohi rota hai,

Umar bhar sath nibha na sake jo,
Jane kiu pyar usi se hota hai..


umar bhar saath nibhana to door ki baat hain
bas ek pal ke liye hi sahi hamein sacha pyaar milein
unke yaad mein hum umar bhar kya saari janam guzaar lenge
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«Reply #7 on: March 27, 2006, 03:10:54 PM »
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thnks meena ji n nikki ji...

Kal raat phir ashkon ki barsat hui,
barse aaise mano puri unki muddaton ki pyas hui,

 dekhkar unko pathar bhi pighal jaata,
par isliye duniya dil ki viraan hui,

 JEET jeete ji tanha tanhaiyon k beech aaise jaise
 sansen hi sanson pe ehsan hui,

jab tutegee sanson ki dore ek din,
 tab lagega hum par bhi shayad zindagi meharban hui…



wah kaya lines hai:
jab tutegee sanson ki dore ek din,
tab lagega hum par bhi shayad zindagi meharban hui…

bahoot khoob Jeet!!
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«Reply #8 on: March 27, 2006, 03:14:16 PM »
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Chahton ki saaza de gaye...

Aakhiri waqt pe daga  de gaye...

Humne dhunda tha unhe mushkilon se...

jate jate Haath mein phir diya de gaye.


khushnaseeb hai sthi, jo diya to hath ayya
jo kar jaaye andhera her taraf, nahi milla wo saya
is duniya mai log sath sath chalty hai
kahne ko tumhare sath, magar sath kisi aor ke hi chalty hai
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«Reply #9 on: March 27, 2006, 03:26:43 PM »
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kya khoob likha hai burning ji,
aur meena ji, nikki ji aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai

na jaante hain zindagi agar hogi meherbaan humpe
hai reham qhuda ki, do pal hi sahi woh mila hai hume

na karna chaahti hoon shikayat, bichadne par unke pyaar se
par kya karein na dil ho raazi, usske yaad mein rhone se
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«Reply #10 on: March 27, 2006, 03:55:05 PM »
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shukriya anitha ji..and nice one!!

 :D
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«Reply #11 on: March 27, 2006, 04:27:08 PM »
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Good one Anitha
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«Reply #12 on: March 27, 2006, 04:33:59 PM »
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ji shukriya meena ji aur pooja ji

bahut hi khoob likha hai pooja ji....aapke isthemaal kiye gaye lines ki tho....wah kya baat hai...iske siva aur kya kahein
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