Aisa Maine Manzar Dekha,.

by Jaanasheen on February 05, 2009, 08:47:36 PM
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Bewafaai Ka Shehar Dekha,.
Har Haath Me Patthar Dekha,.

Roshni Ki Chahat Karke Dekho,.
Khud Apna Hi Jalta Ghar Dekha,.

Kaise Badal Jaate Hain Log Pal Mein,.
Aisa Maine Manzar Dekha,.

Dushman Sab Rone Lage "Azeem",
Doston Ke Haathon Mein Khanjar Dekha,.

Marte Hain Pal Pal Jab Log Yahaan,.
Maine Aise Lamhe Ko Jeekar Dekha,.

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«Reply #1 on: February 05, 2009, 08:50:28 PM »
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Yu to hamne bohat padha hain tujhe
Par aaj yu laga humne kuch naya dekha

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«Reply #2 on: February 05, 2009, 08:53:26 PM »
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14000 POst Hogaye Bhai, Socha, Aur Bhi Achcha Likhoon, Kuch Changes Laaoon,.

Shukriya,,
Meri Mehnat Rang Laai./

Thank U,.
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«Reply #3 on: February 06, 2009, 11:10:44 AM »
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Bahut khoob, bahut aacha likha hai Azeem,

Maine chah ki thi mohabbat ki aur
nafrat ka beintha sagar dekha...

Maine chah ki thi ek dildaar ki aur
Ek Bewafa ka andekha chehra dekha...

Maine chah ki thi ek ghar basane ki aur
Jalta hua apne dil me ek shamshaan dekha,

Maine chah ki thi khushiyoon ki aur,
Har tarf khamoshi ka dayra dekha...

Shally.
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«Reply #4 on: February 06, 2009, 11:11:36 AM »
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waah azeem ji.....bahut khoob...
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«Reply #5 on: February 06, 2009, 11:14:44 AM »
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Bahut khoob, bahut aacha likha hai Azeem,

Maine chah ki thi mohabbat ki aur
nafrat ka beintha sagar dekha...

Maine chah ki thi ek dildaar ki aur
Ek Bewafa ka andekha chehra dekha...

Maine chah ki thi ek ghar basane ki aur
Jalta hua apne dil me ek shamshaan dekha,

Maine chah ki thi khushiyoon ki aur,
Har tarf khamoshi ka dayra dekha...

Shally.



Waah Ji, Kya Khoob Likha Hai, Good Expression Yaar,.
Rab Ji, Tumhe Khushiyaan De,.

Shukriya Fairy Ji, May Allah Bless You,.
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«Reply #6 on: February 06, 2009, 11:21:15 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on February 06, 2009, 11:10:44 AM
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Bahut khoob, bahut aacha likha hai Azeem,

Maine chah ki thi mohabbat ki aur
nafrat ka beintha sagar dekha...

Maine chah ki thi ek dildaar ki aur
Ek Bewafa ka andekha chehra dekha...

Maine chah ki thi ek ghar basane ki aur
Jalta hua apne dil me ek shamshaan dekha,

Maine chah ki thi khushiyoon ki aur,
Har tarf khamoshi ka dayra dekha...

Shally.



waah shally bahut acche lines hai..keep going dear...
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«Reply #7 on: February 07, 2009, 05:42:54 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 06, 2009, 11:14:44 AM
Waah Ji, Kya Khoob Likha Hai, Good Expression Yaar,.
Rab Ji, Tumhe Khushiyaan De,.

Shukriya Fairy Ji, May Allah Bless You,.


Shukriya Azeem,

Shally.
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Quote from: fairy2633 on February 06, 2009, 11:21:15 AM
waah shally bahut acche lines hai..keep going dear...

Shukriya Fairy,

Shally.
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«Reply #9 on: February 15, 2009, 02:43:03 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on February 11, 2009, 08:18:22 AM
Wah Wah Wah Azeem Bhai
Kya Khoob Ghazal Kahin Hai
Aisa Laga Jaise Mujhse Bhi Judi Hui Hai
Bohat Hi Khoob Mere Bhai Keep It Up...


AAWAZON KA IK HAJOOM AAS PASS THA MAGAR
SANATTA MERE WAJOOD MEIN SADA BOLTA RAHA

WOH TO BICHAD K DUNIYA KI BHEEDH MEIN GUM HUYA
AUR YE MEIN HOON K UMER BHAR USSE SOCHTA RAHAN/M


Shukriya Majid Bhai,.
And Very Good Sharing Yaar, Bohat Achche,.
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Us Shehar Se Tere Liye Koi Baduaa Bhi Nahi Karta "Azeem,.
Bekaar Mein Kyun Tu Un Logon Se Duaa Ki Aas Rakhta Hai,.

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Very good janasheen ji
Shihab ji or shally ji Thumbs UP
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Very good janasheen ji
Shihab ji or shally ji Thumbs UP

Thank U Ji,.
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Applause Applause bahaut khoob Azeem bhai,Shihab saheb, Shally jee aur Sajid saheb....
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«Reply #14 on: February 15, 2009, 05:16:22 PM »
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 patharon kay sheher may piyar kernay walon pr
 phool kub berstay hain
 apni saadgi ka rona hay jaan hi nahi patay
 loag kub badeltay hain
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