Aisa Maine Manzar Dekha,.

by Jaanasheen on February 05, 2009, 08:47:36 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 15, 2009, 05:18:42 PM »
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Bewafaai Ka Shehar Dekha,.
Har Haath Me Patthar Dekha,.

Roshni Ki Chahat Karke Dekho,.
Khud Apna Hi Jalta Ghar Dekha,.

Kaise Badal Jaate Hain Log Pal Mein,.
Aisa Maine Manzar Dekha,.

Dushman Sab Rone Lage "Azeem",
Doston Ke Haathon Mein Khanjar Dekha,.

Marte Hain Pal Pal Jab Log Yahaan,.
Maine Aise Lamhe Ko Jeekar Dekha,.

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once again i wuld like to say well written Azeem bhai...


jab jhanka humne apne khidki ke bahar,
toh uss bewaffa ko kisi aur ki bahaon main dekha,
jab lavzon main uttarna chaha humne uss manzar ko,
toh humne apni kalam ko bhi ek bewaffa bante dekha...


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«Reply #16 on: February 21, 2009, 01:59:59 PM »
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Bewafaai Ka Shehar Dekha,.
Har Haath Me Patthar Dekha,.

Roshni Ki Chahat Karke Dekho,.
Khud Apna Hi Jalta Ghar Dekha,.

Kaise Badal Jaate Hain Log Pal Mein,.
Aisa Maine Manzar Dekha,.

Dushman Sab Rone Lage "Azeem",
Doston Ke Haathon Mein Khanjar Dekha,.

Marte Hain Pal Pal Jab Log Yahaan,.
Maine Aise Lamhe Ko Jeekar Dekha,.

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 Applause Applause

Bohat khoob BhaiJaan..
Bohat khoob doston...


Pyaar seh nahi ruswaai se darte hain
Tammana seh nahi tanhai se darte hain
Milne ki to bohat chahat hai humein
Par milne ke baad judaai se darte hain
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«Reply #17 on: February 21, 2009, 02:09:15 PM »
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Bewafaai Ka Shehar Dekha,.
Har Haath Me Patthar Dekha,.

Roshni Ki Chahat Karke Dekho,.
Khud Apna Hi Jalta Ghar Dekha,.

Kaise Badal Jaate Hain Log Pal Mein,.
Aisa Maine Manzar Dekha,.

Dushman Sab Rone Lage "Azeem",
Doston Ke Haathon Mein Khanjar Dekha,.

Marte Hain Pal Pal Jab Log Yahaan,.
Maine Aise Lamhe Ko Jeekar Dekha,.

__________________-Jaanasheen-


Nice one Chote Bhai
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«Reply #18 on: February 21, 2009, 02:17:46 PM »
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Bahoot khoob honey ji
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«Reply #19 on: February 21, 2009, 02:20:55 PM »
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Bahoot khoob heart ji
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«Reply #20 on: February 21, 2009, 08:15:10 PM »
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Shukriya Salma jee...
well written Honey jee...
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«Reply #21 on: February 22, 2009, 11:25:50 AM »
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Shukriya,.
Rahim Bhia,.
Jaya Didi,.
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Aur Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Aapne Rahim Bhia,.

Aur Jaya Sis, Baoht Khoob Har Baar Ki Tarah,.

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