Aisi Bewafaai,.

by Jaanasheen on December 01, 2008, 11:33:39 AM
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Us Waqt Mere Mukaddar Ki Barbaadi Hogi,.
Jis Roz Teri, Kisi Gair Se Shaadi Hogi,.

Mujhpar Us Waqt Aur Bhi Sitam Honge,.
Tere Ghar Khushiyaan, Mere Ghar Maatam Honge,.

Dekhkar Bhi Mera Haal, Tu Anjaan Rahegi,.
Us Waqt Meri "Jaan, Kisi Aur Ke Naam Rahegi,.

Mera Kya Hoga tere Jaane ke Baad, Maaloom Nahi,.
Karegi Ya Na Karegi Mujhe Tu Yaad, Maaloom Nahi,.

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«Reply #1 on: December 01, 2008, 11:51:37 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB AZEEM,

KHUDA KARE KI AISI MERI VIDAAYI HO,
HAR KISI KI AANKH BHAR AAYII HO,
CHOO LENE KO, LIPAT JAANE KO HAR KOI
TARSE, JAB MERE TAN KO AAG LAGAYII
HO...
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«Reply #2 on: December 01, 2008, 11:59:07 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB AZEEM,

KHUDA KARE KI AISI MERI VIDAAYI HO,
HAR KISI KI AANKH BHAR AAYII HO,
CHOO LENE KO, LIPAT JAANE KO HAR KOI
TARSE, JAB MERE TAN KO AAG LAGAYII
HO...

Aisi Hamaari Mohabbat Mein Sachchaai Ho,.
Dil Hamaare Saaf Rahe, Thodi Si Bhi Na Bewafaai Ho,.

Dekhoon Tujhe, Aur Dekhte Dekhte Marr Jaaoon Main,.
Kaash, Apni Mohabbat Mein Aisi Gehraai Ho,.

Teri Doli Mera Janaaza Uthe, Kya Samaan Hoga,.
Tujhe Khushiyaan Mile, Meri Jaan, Aisi Teri Vidaai Ho,.

_____________________________-Jaanasheen
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«Reply #3 on: December 01, 2008, 12:00:10 PM »
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Quote from: k.shael on December 01, 2008, 11:51:37 AM
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BAHUT KHOOB AZEEM,

KHUDA KARE KI AISI MERI VIDAAYI HO,
HAR KISI KI AANKH BHAR AAYII HO,
CHOO LENE KO, LIPAT JAANE KO HAR KOI
TARSE, JAB MERE TAN KO AAG LAGAYII
HO...

Dil KO Choo Gayi ye Lines,.
pehle waali,.
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«Reply #4 on: December 01, 2008, 05:55:55 PM »
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Quote from: k.shael on December 01, 2008, 11:51:37 AM
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BAHUT KHOOB AZEEM,

KHUDA KARE KI AISI MERI VIDAAYI HO,
HAR KISI KI AANKH BHAR AAYII HO,
CHOO LENE KO, LIPAT JAANE KO HAR KOI
TARSE, JAB MERE TAN KO AAG LAGAYII
HO...


dil ko chune wali lines thi....superb...

Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 01, 2008, 11:33:39 AM
Us Waqt Mere Mukaddar Ki Barbaadi Hogi,.
Jis Roz Teri, Kisi Gair Se Shaadi Hogi,.

Mujhpar Us Waqt Aur Bhi Sitam Honge,.
Tere Ghar Khushiyaan, Mere Ghar Maatam Honge,.

Dekhkar Bhi Mera Haal, Tu Anjaan Rahegi,.
Us Waqt Meri "Jaan, Kisi Aur Ke Naam Rahegi,.

Mera Kya Hoga tere Jaane ke Baad, Maaloom Nahi,.
Karegi Ya Na Karegi Mujhe Tu Yaad, Maaloom Nahi,.

_____________________________-Jaanasheen-
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 01, 2008, 11:59:07 AM
Aisi Hamaari Mohabbat Mein Sachchaai Ho,.
Dil Hamaare Saaf Rahe, Thodi Si Bhi Na Bewafaai Ho,.

Dekhoon Tujhe, Aur Dekhte Dekhte Marr Jaaoon Main,.
Kaash, Apni Mohabbat Mein Aisi Gehraai Ho,.

Teri Doli Mera Janaaza Uthe, Kya Samaan Hoga,.
Tujhe Khushiyaan Mile, Meri Jaan, Aisi Teri Vidaai Ho,.

_____________________________-Jaanasheen



bahaut acha likha hai apne bhai...keep writing
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«Reply #5 on: December 01, 2008, 06:13:15 PM »
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bahoot khoob Lil bro... ankhein bhar aai apki kavita parr kar.. shally kamal ka jawab likha hai apne.... Good work both of you!!!
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«Reply #6 on: December 01, 2008, 07:09:20 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai DH ji...

Bewafa hai wo yah zamana bhi maan chuka
dil ab bhi us per he ayye to bewafa kis ko kahu

wo torta raha sari hadein insaaniyat ki bhi
is dil ko koi aor insaan na bhaye to kaya karu

toot toot kar bhi juda na ho paya is rooh se wo
nas nas main wo he samaye to main kaya karu

hai bewafa kon ab yah kash-m-kash choro Pooja
koi bhi na wafa nibhaye, to main kaya karu
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«Reply #7 on: December 01, 2008, 07:13:08 PM »
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Bohat khoob Azeem bhai
 
Nice lines shally

Nice lines Pooja..


Kudha kare hum unke ho aur woh humare ho
Warna zamane ki saare khushiyan un par qurbaan ho

Zameen se aasman ki chahat humare paas ho
Woh meri muskurahat pe roz fida ho..

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«Reply #8 on: December 01, 2008, 07:15:04 PM »
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Thanks and Good one Honey
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«Reply #9 on: December 01, 2008, 08:10:40 PM »
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Nice  one Jaanasheen Ji
Equally good contribution from others

Yeh rahi meri or se

Jo kahte the hum saada rahenge tumhare
Le kar ghoomte the ki aur ke samne hamare

Humne bhi use jalane ke liye kisi ka sahare
Uski har adaa dil par chaah gaye hamare

Bus hum se yahi hui bhool to kahte bewafaa
Aur apni woh  bhool jo thi kya hai wafaa
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«Reply #10 on: December 01, 2008, 08:12:16 PM »
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Thanks and Good one Rajesh ji
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«Reply #11 on: December 01, 2008, 08:15:43 PM »
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Thanx Pooja JI
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«Reply #12 on: December 02, 2008, 10:47:15 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on December 01, 2008, 06:13:15 PM
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bahoot khoob Lil bro... ankhein bhar aai apki kavita parr kar.. shally kamal ka jawab likha hai apne.... Good work both of you!!!
Shukriya Didi jaan,.
Jo Aap Is Thread Pe aaye,.
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«Reply #13 on: December 02, 2008, 10:53:07 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on December 01, 2008, 07:09:20 PM
wah kaya baat hai DH ji...

Bewafa hai wo yah zamana bhi maan chuka
dil ab bhi us per he ayye to bewafa kis ko kahu

wo torta raha sari hadein insaaniyat ki bhi
is dil ko koi aor insaan na bhaye to kaya karu

toot toot kar bhi juda na ho paya is rooh se wo
nas nas main wo he samaye to main kaya karu

hai bewafa kon ab yah kash-m-kash choro Pooja
koi bhi na wafa nibhaye, to main kaya karu

wah Didi, Bohat Badhiya,.

Bewafaai Karna Mera Shauk Nahi Tha, Meri Beabasi Koi Jaan Na Saka,
Meri Jo Majboori Thi, Meri Aankhein Dekh Kar Koi Pehchaan Na Saka,.

Sab Tohmatein Lagaate Hain Mujhpar, Ke Maine Bewafaai Karli,.
Inke Kya Maaloom Kaise, Maine Khushiyon Ki Vidaai Karli,.

Jaan Paate Agar Mer Bewafaai Ki Wajaah, To Mujhpar Ilzaam Na Lagaate,.
Meri Taraah Gham Uthaakar Dekhte, To Beshaq Ye Bhi Aansoon Bahaate,.

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«Reply #14 on: December 02, 2008, 10:56:11 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 01, 2008, 08:10:40 PM
Nice  one Jaanasheen Ji
Equally good contribution from others

Yeh rahi meri or se

Jo kahte the hum saada rahenge tumhare
Le kar ghoomte the ki aur ke samne hamare

Humne bhi use jalane ke liye kisi ka sahare
Uski har adaa dil par chaah gaye hamare

Bus hum se yahi hui bhool to kahte bewafaa
Aur apni woh  bhool jo thi kya hai wafaa


Shukriya Rajesh Bhaijaan,.
And A Very Good Reply From Ur Side,.

Sachchi Mohabbat Jo Karte Hain, Wo Kisi Ko Jalaate Nahi,.
Bhale Seene Mein Laakh Dard Chupe Ho, Kisi Ko Bataate Nahi,.

Tumne Kaisi Galti Karli Mere Dost, Tumne Bhi To Sachchi Wafaa Ki Thi,.
Aur Sachcha Pyaar Karne Waale, Kabhi Apne Chahne Waale KO Rulaate Nahi,.

____________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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