!!Amanat!!

by amrita on September 10, 2005, 10:56:12 AM
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Kabhi kabhi ki Mulaqatein rehgayi
Aadhi adhoori Baatein rehgayi
Mashook thi jo kabhi Teri
 kisi aur ki Amanat ban kar rehgayi..
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Ghayal
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«Reply #1 on: September 11, 2005, 05:23:56 AM »
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Kabhi kabhi ki Mulaqatein rehgayi
Aadhi adhoori Baatein rehgayi
Mashook thi jo kabhi Teri
 kisi aur ki Amanat ban kar rehgayi..

Wah!!!!!!
Dil Chir Ke Rakh Diya.....Wah!!!!!!!!!!!

jamane me har koi bewafa nahi hota
wafa kar na sake par dhokha nahi diya
meri majburi ko tumne dhoka samaj liya
tumhari lachari ko humne apni kismat samaj liya
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«Reply #2 on: September 14, 2005, 05:06:51 PM »
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wah amrita aur ghayal ji!!!!

kisi aur ke ghar ja rahi hoon,
dulhan ke lifaz me yuh saj daj ke,
meri majboori thi, mai bewafa nahin,
ke kush nahin mai apne armano ka katal kar ke!!
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Ghayal
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«Reply #3 on: September 16, 2005, 02:54:44 PM »
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wah amrita aur ghayal ji!!!!

kisi aur ke ghar ja rahi hoon,
dulhan ke lifaz me yuh saj daj ke,
meri majboori thi, mai bewafa nahin,
ke kush nahin mai apne armano ka katal kar ke!!


Very Nice Meena Ji....Bahuty Khub Likha He....Magar Is Ghayal Ka dil Bhi Kuchh Kahana Chahata He......

Teri Doli Sazi....Meri Arthi Sazi....
Tere Nashib Me Likha Tha...Banana Dulhan....
Aur Mere Laash Pe Tha Sirf Do Gaz Kafan......

Teri Be-wfai Ko Mohabbat Samaj Ke Duniya Se Ja Rahe He....
Tu Khush Rahe Hamesha...Ye Khuda Se Ham Ne Fariyaad Ki....
Dekh Jaate Jaate Apani Wafa Nibhaye Chale Jaa Rahe He.......
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Meena
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«Reply #4 on: September 16, 2005, 03:29:02 PM »
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shukriya ghayal ji..apne bih acha likha par...

maut ko gale unone lagaya,
par mere pyar ki maut bhi hogayi,
janmo ka pyar hai ek din kaha tha usne,
jane uski kasam aab kaha kho gayi!!
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Ghayal
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«Reply #5 on: September 17, 2005, 11:30:16 AM »
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shukriya ghayal ji..apne bih acha likha par...

maut ko gale unone lagaya,
par mere pyar ki maut bhi hogayi,
janmo ka pyar hai ek din kaha tha usne,
jane uski kasam aab kaha kho gayi!!


Very Good.....
Bahut...Bahut...Bahut hi Achhi He......Aap Ki Shayri Ka Koi Javab Nahi...
Par Shayar Hu Is Liye Koshis Karata Hu.....


Bewafai ka darr tha to pyar kyon kiya ,
Tanhai ka darr tha to ikkrar kyoun kiya
Maut bhi Puchegi aane se pehle ki
jo nahi aane vali thi, uska intezzar kyoun kiya!!!
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Meena
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«Reply #6 on: September 19, 2005, 03:19:40 PM »
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shukriya ghayal ji..apka jawab bhi to bohot acha hai!

dil ke hato majboor te jo uska karte rahe intezaar,
zamane ka darr na tha, jab humne kiya tha ikrar,
kya jante te hum woh bewafa ho jayega ek pal me,
aur do dilon ke bich faslo ki kadi kar dega deewar!
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Ghayal
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«Reply #7 on: September 20, 2005, 02:03:15 PM »
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shukriya ghayal ji..apka jawab bhi to bohot acha hai!

dil ke hato majboor te jo uska karte rahe intezaar,
zamane ka darr na tha, jab humne kiya tha ikrar,
kya jante te hum woh bewafa ho jayega ek pal me,
aur do dilon ke bich faslo ki kadi kar dega deewar!


Wah! Meena Ji.....

Zaraa Un Raaho se Pooch Ke Dekho..
Tanha Kitni Kaati Hai Raatein..
Un Kankar Un Pathar se Pooch Ke Dekho..
Kaisi Kaisi Ki Hai Hamne Baatein..
Phir Bhi Tere Intzaar mein.. Hal Pal Yeh Duaa Nikli..
ke Zholi Phoolon se Bahri ho teri.. Aur ho Meri Raaho mein Kaatein
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Ghayal
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«Reply #8 on: September 20, 2005, 02:05:44 PM »
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Ke Wafaa Ka Aachal saath Ho Agar To Kya badi Baat Hai..
Mazaa To Tab hai..Bewaafi ka Chhaav Ho Aur
Mohababt ka Aalam ..to Koi Baat Hai

Ke Kabhi Phoolon Ko Chunna Tumne to Kya badi Baat hai
Mazaa to tab hai.. Ke Jab Kaaton se Jholi Bhari ho. aur
Muskurana Pade.. To Koi Baat hai...
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Meena
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«Reply #9 on: September 21, 2005, 04:26:05 PM »
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shukriya ghayal ji...again wonderful shayari!!  :D

khanton pe paun rakh ke hi humne chalna sikha,
kisi aur ka sahara na tha jab humne sambalna sikha!
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«Reply #10 on: September 22, 2005, 06:18:28 AM »
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wah kya baat hai...ghayal ji our meena ji...bahoot hi badia poematic tree hai aapka....lovely..


seekhne sikhaane se, ab sab kutchh hone laga
waqt yuin hi sahaaron ke beej bone laga
kaanton ne apni jagaah is taraah banaayee hai
shaq apni wafa pe, be-wafaayee ka hone laga.
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«Reply #11 on: October 08, 2005, 06:16:45 PM »
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Wah Meena Ji....
Bahut Hi Achha Likha He Aap Ne...
Aap Ke Haath Kaha He???
Chumane Ko Jee Chata He..... :lol:

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shukriya ghayal ji...again wonderful shayari!!  :D

khanton pe paun rakh ke hi humne chalna sikha,
kisi aur ka sahara na tha jab humne sambalna sikha!
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amrita
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«Reply #12 on: October 14, 2005, 06:02:51 AM »
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shukriya ghayal ji...again wonderful shayari!!  :D

khanton pe paun rakh ke hi humne chalna sikha,
kisi aur ka sahara na tha jab humne sambalna sikha!



kadmon par apne aitbaar hota,toh kaanton par chalna na hota
agar sambhalna aata hota, toh tera sahara manga na hota
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«Reply #13 on: October 14, 2005, 02:32:56 PM »
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Kabhi kabhi ki Mulaqatein rehgayi
Aadhi adhoori Baatein rehgayi
Mashook thi jo kabhi Teri
 kisi aur ki Amanat ban kar rehgayi..


aap sa
aap sab ka koi jabab nahi bahoo hi achha likhte ho

dard e dil kab aakhon se baya hota hai
gum ke aasoon me kab dhua hota hai
dukh to dil ke usi kone me hoti hai
bewafa sanam ka niwas jahan hota hai
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