Apna bana na sake

by ashusaxe007 on October 15, 2012, 03:52:27 PM
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खुद को उनका कर के भी हम
उनको अपना बना ना सके
 
रोते तो हैं अब भी लेकिन
आँसू अपने बहा ना सके
 
रूठे वो हैं ऐसे के हम
वफ़ा भी अपनी जाता ना सके
 
खो चुके हैं कहीं हम ऐसे
के खुद को भी बता ना सके
 
खुद को उनका कर के भी हम
आँसू उनके मिटा ना सके
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«Reply #1 on: October 15, 2012, 03:54:32 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoob ashu jee
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«Reply #2 on: October 15, 2012, 03:56:28 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: October 15, 2012, 05:41:00 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: October 15, 2012, 05:47:33 PM »
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very nice..........  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: October 15, 2012, 11:09:19 PM »
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Quote from: ashusaxe007 on October 15, 2012, 03:52:27 PM
खुद को उनका कर के भी हम
उनको अपना बना ना सके
 
रोते तो हैं अब भी लेकिन
आँसू अपने बहा ना सके
 
रूठे वो हैं ऐसे के हम
वफ़ा भी अपनी जाता ना सके
 
खो चुके हैं कहीं हम ऐसे
के खुद को भी बता ना सके
 
खुद को उनका कर के भी हम
आँसू उनके मिटा ना सके
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«Reply #7 on: October 16, 2012, 03:28:59 AM »
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nice ashu ji
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«Reply #8 on: October 16, 2012, 05:02:35 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #9 on: October 16, 2012, 06:53:41 PM »
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aap sabhi ki hausla afzai ke liye shukriya
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