Apna To Rishta Chaahat Se Raha,.

by Jaanasheen on June 27, 2010, 09:09:19 PM
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Ki Unse Shikayat Nahi, Gila Magar Kismat Se Raha,.
Ye Mera Naseeb Tha, Ke Faasla Unki Mohabbat Se Raha,.

Main Maangta Raha Har Duaa Mein Unhe, Haath Uthaaye,.
Rab To Mera Raheem Tha, Mera Hi Bair Ibadat Se Raha,.

Ab To Yahi Pehchaan Hai, Ke Main Uska Aashiq Tha,.
Umr Bhar Mujhe Sadma, Meri Is Haalat Se Raha,.

Sukoon-Chain, Nahi Tha Mukkaddar "Azeem Ka,.
Isliye Main Bhi Door Zara Raahat Se Raha,.

Ab Zamaana Kahe Bewafa, Ye Bhi Manzoor Hai,.
Rab Jaanta Hai Mera To Rishta Sadaa, Chaahat Se Raha,.

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«Reply #1 on: June 27, 2010, 09:15:08 PM »
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Behad dill choone wali nazm...maza agaya..dil choo lia apne..shayad na dikhe lavzon main mere ke kitni pasand ayi hai mager truly, i loved.... Applause Likte rahiyega Dost...
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«Reply #2 on: June 27, 2010, 09:17:30 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Azeem ji... bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: June 27, 2010, 09:44:05 PM »
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well done
Ki Unse Shikayat Nahi, Gila Magar Kismat Se Raha,.
Ye Mera Naseeb Tha, Ke Faasla Unki Mohabbat Se Raha,.

Main Maangta Raha Har Duaa Mein Unhe, Haath Uthaaye,.
Rab To Mera Raheem Tha, Mera Hi Bair Ibadat Se Raha,.

Ab To Yahi Pehchaan Hai, Ke Main Uska Aashiq Tha,.
Umr Bhar Mujhe Sadma, Meri Is Haalat Se Raha,.

Sukoon-Chain, Nahi Tha Mukkaddar "Azeem Ka,.
Isliye Main Bhi Door Zara Raahat Se Raha,.

Ab Zamaana Kahe Bewafa, Ye Bhi Manzoor Hai,.
Rab Jaanta Hai Mera To Rishta Sadaa, Chaahat Se Raha,.

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«Reply #4 on: June 27, 2010, 11:37:53 PM »
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YOON HI DE DIYA DIL JO MANGA KISI NE
KALANDRANA RAVISH THI,AADAT SE RAHA

BEHAD KHOOBSOORAT ALFAZON SE AARA HAI YE PESHKASH.BAHUT KHOOB!
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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2010, 04:23:12 AM »
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Wah Wah Wah Ji Wah... Subhanallah... Behad Khoobsurat...
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«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2010, 08:37:01 AM »
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Behad dill choone wali nazm...maza agaya..dil choo lia apne..shayad na dikhe lavzon main mere ke kitni pasand ayi hai mager truly, i loved.... Applause Likte rahiyega Dost...

Shukriya Raheem,.
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«Reply #7 on: June 28, 2010, 09:48:47 AM »
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Bahut khoob Chote Bhai
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«Reply #8 on: June 28, 2010, 04:19:54 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Azeem Bhai..

Lajawaab peshkash!!!!

Bahut Hi Gehre Jazbaat.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: June 29, 2010, 05:00:19 AM »
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bahoot khoob Azeem bhai,bahut umda paishkash wah wah...daad qubool karein janab..Azeem bhai badi inkesaari ke saath yeh kehna chahta hoon ,agar 4th shair 5th ki jagah aur 5th shair 4th ki jagah hota to shayed aur bhi behatr hota..ek mukhlisana rae thi bus aur kuch nahi...maaf kijie ga..sukon chain ...wala shair bahot qareeb raha dil ke.
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«Reply #10 on: June 29, 2010, 10:25:22 AM »
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pata hai aisa lag raha hai ke bas..............mai bayan nahi kar sakti ....................sach me aap grat hai
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