----- /// Apni Muskaan Bachake Rakhna /// ----- Klaskar

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na mil paayega tujhe dhundke humsa koi paagal sarfira aashiq kahin,
tu kisi hosh waale samajhdaar ke liye apni aashiqui bachake rakhna,

hum to wo aashiq hain jo aashiqui ke naam pe sirf aashiqui karte hain,
na pasand ho tujhe hum to jo ho pasand uske liye khudko bachake rakhna,

maangte rahe har lamha us rab se ki tu meri mohabbat bachake rakhna,
na suni usne meri fariyaad to kahaa usse tu meri arthi sajake rakhna,

jis bewafaa ko hum apni jaane tamanna jaane wafaa samajh baithe the,
kaha usse humne tu mere baad apne khushiyon ka sansaar sajake rakhna,

meri laash me bahane ke liye apni aansuon ke do boond bachake rakhna,
aur meri maut ke baad muskuraane ke liye apni muskaan bachake rakhna...


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«Reply #1 on: June 27, 2010, 10:37:49 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on June 27, 2010, 09:50:13 PM



na mil paayega tujhe dhundke humsa koi paagal sarfira aashiq kahin,
tu kisi hosh waale samajhdaar ke liye apni aashiqui bachake rakhna,

hum to wo aashiq hain jo aashiqui ke naam pe sirf aashiqui karte hain,
na pasand ho tujhe hum to jo ho pasand uske liye khudko bachake rakhna,

maangte rahe har lamha us rab se ki tu meri mohabbat bachake rakhna,
na suni usne meri fariyaad to kahaa usse tu meri arthi sajake rakhna,

jis bewafaa ko hum apni jaane tamanna jaane wafaa samajh baithe the,
kaha usse humne tu mere baad apne khushiyon ka sansaar sajake rakhna,

meri laash me bahane ke liye apni aansuon ke do boond bachake rakhna,
aur meri maut ke baad muskuraane ke liye apni muskaan bachake rakhna...


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«Reply #2 on: June 27, 2010, 10:50:12 PM »
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Applause Applause Lagta hai kisi pe behad gussa hai apko...hmm bahaut khubsoorat...dil ki baat likh dali apne..Dost...Bahaut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: June 28, 2010, 09:47:24 AM »
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Bahut khoob Kapil
Ba.da aanand aayaa pa.dh kar
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«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2010, 04:58:31 PM »
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  Realy Nice one Kapil ji, Waise Rahim ji sahi keh rahe hain aapki baaki poems se bilkul alag ekdum angry young man type mood me poem likhi hai is baar aapne. Waise to puri poem achhi hi hai par starting k 2 paras bahut achhe lage, Last k 3th and 5th one thode se depressing se lage but a realy good poem. Yun hi likhte rahein. Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: July 01, 2010, 12:44:44 AM »
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Thanx a lot...!!!

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«Reply #6 on: July 01, 2010, 12:45:37 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai... nahi aisa nahi hai ki main gusse me likha hai... ye to bas yunhi likh daala ...!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on June 27, 2010, 10:50:12 PM
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«Reply #7 on: July 01, 2010, 12:46:08 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

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Bahut khoob Kapil
Ba.da aanand aayaa pa.dh kar
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«Reply #8 on: July 01, 2010, 05:00:50 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Tamanna ji... aur main angry young man nahi angry old man hoon... kabhi kabhi angry bhi hona chahiye.... sehat ke liye achcha rehta hai.... Usual Smile

Quote from: tamanna.pt on June 28, 2010, 04:58:31 PM
  Realy Nice one Kapil ji, Waise Rahim ji sahi keh rahe hain aapki baaki poems se bilkul alag ekdum angry young man type mood me poem likhi hai is baar aapne. Waise to puri poem achhi hi hai par starting k 2 paras bahut achhe lage, Last k 3th and 5th one thode se depressing se lage but a realy good poem. Yun hi likhte rahein. Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: July 20, 2010, 05:18:30 AM »
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na mil paayega tujhe dhundke humsa koi paagal sarfira aashiq kahin,
tu kisi hosh waale samajhdaar ke liye apni aashiqui bachake rakhna,

hum to wo aashiq hain jo aashiqui ke naam pe sirf aashiqui karte hain,
na pasand ho tujhe hum to jo ho pasand uske liye khudko bachake rakhna,

maangte rahe har lamha us rab se ki tu meri mohabbat bachake rakhna,
na suni usne meri fariyaad to kahaa usse tu meri arthi sajake rakhna,

jis bewafaa ko hum apni jaane tamanna jaane wafaa samajh baithe the,
kaha usse humne tu mere baad apne khushiyon ka sansaar sajake rakhna,

meri laash me bahane ke liye apni aansuon ke do boond bachake rakhna,
aur meri maut ke baad muskuraane ke liye apni muskaan bachake rakhna...


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bht hi pyara likha hai aapne ye kalaam Klaskar ji...
kuch kehna hai hume bhi....

Har lamha saja rakha tha humne fakat tere khayalon se
Har dhadkan suna rahi thi sabko har ek likha geet tera
Har subah sajti thi tere liye lekar man me pyaar tera
Har sham ki laalima me milte the hum saajan tumse
Chal pade the mahobbat k safar me tham k hum hath tera

Ek zara si  baat pe tum jane kyun kafa ho gaye
Tod diye bandhan sare kyun humse judaa ho gaye
Pucha tak nahin humse kyunkar wo kiya humne
Kyun kisi aur k liye tum humse rishta tod gaye

Logon ne jo kaha .sun ke bhi tum kuch na bole
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Aaj bhari sabha me tum kyun humko Bewafa keh gaye….!!!
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«Reply #10 on: July 20, 2010, 09:14:53 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji...!!!

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aur aapne bhi apne tadap ko shabdon me bakhoobi utaara hai.... bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne... ye lijiye jawaab haazir ahi...!!!

yeh sach nahi ki kisi aur ke liye humne tumhe chhoda hai,
wajah kuch aur hi thi jis kaaran humne ye rishta toda hai,
tanhaayi to tumhare rehte bhi thi aur tumhare bina bhi hai,
tumhaare bina na kisi se dil joda tha na abhi tak joda hai,

wo lamha yaad ajata hai to dard se tadap uthta hai ye dil,
jab humne tumhe dekha tha kisi gair ki baahon me us din,
kabhi socha bhi hai tumne kya haal huwa hoga us pal hamara,
meri jaan hi meri jaan ki dushman ban gayi thi jis din,

aadat buri hai tumhari ki pehle khud hi chot pahuchati ho,
fir usi chot pe tum apni maasumiyat ki malham lagati ho,
jo baat zaraa si hai tumhaare liye wo mere liye nahi hai,
kyun meri mohabbat ko tum bachpan ka koi khel samajhti ho,

kehti ho ki mere yaadon me doobke raaton ko neend nahi aati,
tumhare baare me soch soch kar main ek pal so hi nahi paati,
khush ho tum apne sansar me fir ye pyaar ka dikhaawa kaisa,
kyun nahi kehti sach ki ab tumhe hamari yaad hi nahi aati,

tumpe bharosa kya karein hum ab to khud pe aetbaar raha nahi,
jise chaaha tha kabhi jaan se badhkar wo bhi ab apna nahi,
kehna to bada asaan hai ki tumne humein bewafa kyun kaha,
tumhaare beraham dil ke liye hamare dard ko samajhna asaan nahi...

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«Reply #11 on: July 21, 2010, 03:41:51 AM »
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apne jo kaha Klaskar ji......uske liye mere pas shabd nahin hai....
ye soch kar hi tadap gai hun k aisa ho to kaisa ho..jawab dungi par kuch der baad...
aapne itni saadgi se apna dard yahan bayan kiya hai k ............shayad kuch bhi kahun kum hoga wo.....
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«Reply #12 on: July 21, 2010, 08:48:56 AM »
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Kasak ji aap apna waqt lijiye aur jab jawab likh paayen tab post kar dijiyega... humein intzaar rahega aapke jawaab ka...!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 21, 2010, 03:41:51 AM
apne jo kaha Klaskar ji......uske liye mere pas shabd nahin hai....
ye soch kar hi tadap gai hun k aisa ho to kaisa ho..jawab dungi par kuch der baad...
aapne itni saadgi se apna dard yahan bayan kiya hai k ............shayad kuch bhi kahun kum hoga wo.....
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achha likha hai bhai bahut achha... Intezar !
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«Reply #14 on: October 17, 2010, 10:49:16 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Intezar bhai...!!!

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achha likha hai bhai bahut achha... Intezar !
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