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`` Apni Wafao Ka `` Apni Wafao Ka Uu Inaam Mila He Muje Mahbub Se Bewafai Ka Iljaam Mila He Muje
Ab Kis Se Kahe Aur Kyu Kahe Kuch Bhi Hum Bin Mange Hi Apna Ye Daam Mila He Muje
Aarzu Thi Mohhabat Ke Chote Se Ashiyane Ki Ab To Apna Dil Hi Viraan Mila He Muje
Sajaya Tha Ghar Apna Uski Tasviro Se Aaj Bas Bikhra Hua Samaan Mila He Muje
Karte The Gurur Apne Ishq Ki Bulandi Ka Aaj Bas Tuta Hua Gumaan Mila He Muje
Jiske Kadmo Ki Ahat Hum Sun Lete The Kabhi Wo Hi Aaj Ban Kar Anjaan Mila He Muje
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Anshumali
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«Reply #1 on: January 19, 2011, 02:33:41 PM » |
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`` Apni Wafao Ka `` Apni Wafao Ka Uu Inaam Mila He Muje Mahbub Se Bewafai Ka Iljaam Mila He Muje
Ab Kis Se Kahe Aur Kyu Kahe Kuch Bhi Hum Bin Mange Hi Apna Ye Daam Mila He Muje
Aarzu Thi Mohhabat Ke Chote Se Ashiyane Ki Ab To Apna Dil Hi Viraan Mila He Muje
Sajaya Tha Ghar Apna Uski Tasviro Se Aaj Bas Bikhra Hua Samaan Mila He Muje
Karte The Gurur Apne Ishq Ki Bulandi Ka Aaj Bas Tuta Hua Gumaan Mila He Muje
Jiske Kadmo Ki Ahat Hum Sun Lete The Kabhi Wo Hi Aaj Ban Kar Anjaan Mila He Muje
Very Impressive Creation ... ! Tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... ! aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... ! duaaon ke saath ... !
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nirala
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«Reply #2 on: January 19, 2011, 02:41:31 PM » |
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lajawaab hai ji. lekin -- " rah rah ke ek sawaal mila hai mujhe teri tadapti ruh ka ek aala ehsaas mila hai mujhe kis kaam ki ab ye zindgi yar kuch aisa hi ab jawaab mila hai mujhe " aapke likhne ka andaaz ek Flow deta hai -- keep it up -- " thanx "
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Matrix Guy
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«Reply #3 on: January 19, 2011, 02:43:28 PM » |
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bahot bahot shukriya naresh ji ......apne waqt diya aur saraha uske liye shukrgujar hu.........ese hi encourage karte rahe
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Matrix Guy
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«Reply #4 on: January 19, 2011, 02:44:47 PM » |
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lajawaab hai ji. lekin -- " rah rah ke ek sawaal mila hai mujhe teri tadapti ruh ka ek aala ehsaas mila hai mujhe kis kaam ki ab ye zindgi yar kuch aisa hi ab jawaab mila hai mujhe " aapke likhne ka andaaz ek Flow deta hai -- keep it up -- " thanx "
dear nirala ji aur apki nirali n sweet batee........well apki baat ka ek hijawab he mere paas....wo ye ki "zindagi se yahi gila he muje nirala tu bahot der se mila he muje"
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nirala
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«Reply #5 on: January 19, 2011, 02:53:57 PM » |
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hahaha aapki baate bhi nirali ho rhi ab-- wo kahte hain na -- jab aankh khule tabhi nasta kar lo yar! der aye durast aye chalo dhunde ab apna apna pyar aapki baat padh ke achha wala feelin coming. thanx
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Matrix Guy
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«Reply #6 on: January 19, 2011, 02:59:51 PM » |
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sab apki hi sobat ka asar he janab....
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«Reply #7 on: January 19, 2011, 07:08:35 PM » |
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Kya baat hai Utkarsh jee.. bahaut bahaut khubsoorat likha hai.. Khoob.. daad.. Khush rahiye..!
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Intezar
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«Reply #8 on: January 19, 2011, 07:53:55 PM » |
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kya baat hai Matrix ji bahut khoob bahut badhiya hai ji...
tere gham ke siwa aur kya mila hai mujhe jab bhi milaa tera ilzaam mila hai mujhe behte hai aansu har pal tujhe numaya karke aur har katre me tera naam mila hai mujhe... !
Intezar !
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #9 on: January 19, 2011, 08:39:56 PM » |
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Nice creation MG Ji
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marhoom bahayaat
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«Reply #10 on: January 19, 2011, 08:43:03 PM » |
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`` Apni Wafao Ka `` Apni Wafao Ka Uu Inaam Mila He Muje Mahbub Se Bewafai Ka Iljaam Mila He Muje
Ab Kis Se Kahe Aur Kyu Kahe Kuch Bhi Hum Bin Mange Hi Apna Ye Daam Mila He Muje
Aarzu Thi Mohhabat Ke Chote Se Ashiyane Ki Ab To Apna Dil Hi Viraan Mila He Muje
Sajaya Tha Ghar Apna Uski Tasviro Se Aaj Bas Bikhra Hua Samaan Mila He Muje
Karte The Gurur Apne Ishq Ki Bulandi Ka Aaj Bas Tuta Hua Gumaan Mila He Muje
Jiske Kadmo Ki Ahat Hum Sun Lete The Kabhi Wo Hi Aaj Ban Kar Anjaan Mila He Muje
bahut khoob bhai
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sbechain
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«Reply #11 on: January 20, 2011, 05:50:09 AM » |
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Matrix Guy
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«Reply #12 on: January 20, 2011, 08:31:24 AM » |
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bahot bahot shukriya aap sabhi ka .........
aap logo ka encouragement milta he to kuch lkihne ki koshish kar leta hu......once again thx a lot to u all respected members...
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killbill
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«Reply #13 on: January 20, 2011, 08:45:50 AM » |
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wah Matrix ji-- kamaal ka creation hai. aapko padhna bahut bhata hai dil ko. janaab aise hi mast mast likhte rahiye. *** wafa ke badle ilzaam ka dastoor purana hai bewafai ka ilzaam hi nakaam mohabbat ka nazraana hai *** sukriya khus rahen
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«Reply #14 on: January 21, 2011, 09:11:41 AM » |
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wah ..keh nahi sakta sirf likha ja sakta hai bhai is kalaam ki tareef me mujhse~
sunaii dete he aaj bhi unke bole wo pyar bhare labz mujhe reh reh kar jab cheekhte ansuu ankhon se girte hain~
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