badlaa

by cool neha on October 18, 2013, 01:55:51 PM
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Tumhein Maloom Bhi Hai Ke Main Tanha Jee Nahi Sakti
Meri Aadat Badalne Tak Mere Sath Reh Jao…..!!!    sad7 sad7

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BADLAA

tu sath chhod gaya toh tujhe kya laga...
main tujhe chhod dungi..
tu muh mod gaya toh tujhe kya laga...
main tera chehra bhool jaungi..?
neha vo hasti hai jo apne dil ki shehzadi hai..
jise dil me basa le use kabhi jane nahi deti..
aur jise nazro se gira de use kabhi uthne nahi deti..
badla lungi tujhse har ek ek baat ka..
tune dhokha diya mujhe toh main bhi dungi tujhe dhokha..
fark itna hoga ki is dhokhe me bhi..
main hi roungi..
jab jab hoga tu udaas..
tere gam ko tujhse chheen lungi..
agar nam hui teri aankhein jo kabhi..
toh main tere ashkon ko bhi pee lungi..
tu bhool gaya ho sab kuchh pr main na bhulungi..
jab tak saansein hai sharir me..
tujhse pyar karna na bhulungi..
teri tarah nahi hun yaara...
jo kisi ke saamne jhuk jaun..ki
zara dukh kya aaye jeevan me..
main dhukhi ho jaun..
mere dil me chahe ho kitne dard..
main hasti rahungi unke liye..
jo mujhe dekh ke jeete hain...
yaad rakhna...har baat ka badla lungi tujhse...
tere dukho ko...
tere aansu ko...
teri pareshaniyon ko..
sab ko jisse tu udaas hai..
sab ko chheen lungi...
teri maut aayi saamne bhi toh..
vaada hai tujhse use bhi dhokha de jaungi..
tujhe kuchh hua usse pahle main mar jaungi...
badla toh main tujhse le kar rahungi...
shayad isi se tujhe kuchh samajh aa jaaye
shayad tujhe teri galti ka ehsaas ho jaaye...


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Time Passes..
Memories Fade..
Feelings Change..
People Leave..
But Hearts Never Forget..
Whatever Relation You Build Up In This World, The Only Thing Remains At Last Is The Loneliness 
With Lot’s & Lot’s Of Memories…!!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 18, 2013, 02:29:42 PM »
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kyaa baat kyaa baat
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«Reply #2 on: October 18, 2013, 02:42:45 PM »
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kyaa baat kyaa baat
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«Reply #3 on: October 18, 2013, 03:04:36 PM »
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waahh bhaut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: October 18, 2013, 03:21:57 PM »
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Its nice poem.  Kaash wo sunn sakta.
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«Reply #5 on: October 18, 2013, 03:23:20 PM »
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Its nice poem.  Kaash wo sunn sakta.


usne sun li ...but i m still having the same fear ki kahi phir se akela na chhod de...
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«Reply #6 on: October 18, 2013, 04:16:18 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 18, 2013, 05:21:35 PM »
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hi Neha,

tumhaare poetry ki sabse acchi baat hoti hai uske pehle likhaa tumhaara sher..

Tumhein Maloom Bhi Hai Ke Main Tanha Jee Nahi Sakti
Meri Aadat Badalne Tak Mere Sath Reh Jao…..!!!

is sher ne dil jeet liyaa hamaara...

ab uske baad chalte hain tumhaari poetry ki tarf to sach kahun mujhe yaqeen hi nahi hotaa koi itnii kam umr me itna acchaa kaise likh sakta hai... beautifuoly expressed, superbbb thoughts and words... likhti raho khush raho

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«Reply #8 on: October 18, 2013, 07:09:28 PM »
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hi Neha,

tumhaare poetry ki sabse acchi baat hoti hai uske pehle likhaa tumhaara sher..

Tumhein Maloom Bhi Hai Ke Main Tanha Jee Nahi Sakti
Meri Aadat Badalne Tak Mere Sath Reh Jao…..!!!

is sher ne dil jeet liyaa hamaara...

ab uske baad chalte hain tumhaari poetry ki tarf to sach kahun mujhe yaqeen hi nahi hotaa koi itnii kam umr me itna acchaa kaise likh sakta hai... beautifuoly expressed, superbbb thoughts and words... likhti raho khush raho

sidra

thnkss a lot dear!!!

baat yeh hai ki jitni lyf dekhi hai,samjhi hai, jo feel kiya hai...unhi ko shabdon me utarne ki koshish karti hu..
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«Reply #9 on: October 18, 2013, 10:11:51 PM »
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waaaaaaaaah neha ji.. bahut hi pyaara likha hai aapne.. dheron dheron daaaaaad...
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«Reply #10 on: October 19, 2013, 03:01:56 AM »
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Nice one.
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«Reply #12 on: October 21, 2013, 07:35:56 PM »
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Waaaah bahut khoob cool neha ji is umr men shayari ke ye tewar....aur soch ....kamaal hai...keep it up all the best....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #13 on: October 21, 2013, 09:24:46 PM »
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bahot achey, bahot khoooob, bas daaad hi daad  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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