bahoot roye hai hum

by Pooja on June 11, 2007, 08:10:32 PM
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na rone ka soch kar, kitna roye hai hum
bhool jayege tujhe kah- kah kar, bahoot roye hai hum

kyun yaad kare tujhko, yahi socha kiye hum
yahi kahte-kahte, teri yaad main her baar bahoot roye hai hum

ek bhi chees teri kyun rakhein pass hum
yahi kahte hue, her teri ek chees ko seene se laga kar roye hai hum

ab na jayege kabhi apni milan ke jagah per hum
bas ek akhiri baar kah kar, her roj wahan ja kar roye hai hum

na rone ka soch kar, kitna roye hai hum
bhool jayege tujhe kah kah kar, bahoot roye hai hum
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«Reply #1 on: June 11, 2007, 08:58:09 PM »
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Pooja

Too good sis =D>

Kya jazbaat hain...kya dard hai sad5

Sach mein bahut roye hain hum :cry:

Aaj kal tum phir se likhne ke mood mein ho !

Keep going :arrow:
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«Reply #2 on: June 12, 2007, 05:33:54 AM »
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M'am aapp bohaat acha likhte ho

Mamu.. kasam se tumhari har ek baat sach thi !!!


ro ro kar unke aage hum aapne jazbaat batate hain
sungdil woh ban kar,humara majak udate hain

kabhi khud karte hain Ishq ke naam se fareb humse
kabhi khud hi Payar  soch kar hum dhoka khaatein hain

haste huye lub,kabhi aorda deta hain nakab chehre par
kabhi nam akhon ko hum khushi ke ansu batate hain...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: June 12, 2007, 10:02:18 AM »
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Bhanje

Wow ! superb ! excellent ! =D>

Bade chupe rustam nikle tum to :wink: :D

Great job !

Keep going :arrow:
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«Reply #4 on: June 12, 2007, 04:35:52 PM »
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nahi mamu jaan... bas aaise hi Pooja ki poem ne emotional kar diya tha. kuch purani baat yaad aa gayi so dil ki baat likh di...!!!

u know that I m not crazy tongue3

btw..Thanks ki aapko pasand aayi :D :D
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«Reply #5 on: June 12, 2007, 06:05:11 PM »
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Hey Pooja........good one.....

Lab chup rehte hain, dil bhi mera gumsum hua sa hai,
Jaane kyu  jehen mein saikadon yaadein samayi hain...
Dhadkane ruki ruki, saansein madhyam madhyam,
Dil ki bat sabhi mere aankhon se nikal aayi hain....
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«Reply #6 on: June 12, 2007, 06:48:51 PM »
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Too good Pooja sis....love to read ur stuff

Yun to aankhon se paani hum barsaate nahi
magar tukjhe yaad kar yeh aanson bhi palkon mein band reh paate nahi

teri har baat pe, har pal dil udaasi  bayan karta hai
yeh jaante hue bhi ki kabhi na mil payenge
fir bhi teri yaad mein yeh dil aahein bharta hai

nadaan hai isse hum kaise samjhayein
jo rah-e-ishq mein saath chod gaye hain
unhein mana kar kaise layein
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«Reply #7 on: June 13, 2007, 07:48:12 AM »
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na rone ka soch kar, kitna roye hai hum
bhool jayege tujhe kah- kah kar, bahoot roye hai hum

kyun yaad kare tujhko, yahi socha kiye hum
yahi kahte-kahte, teri yaad main her baar bahoot roye hai hum

ek bhi chees teri kyun rakhein pass hum
yahi kahte hue, her teri ek chees ko seene se laga kar roye hai hum

ab na jayege kabhi apni milan ke jagah per hum
bas ek akhiri baar kah kar, her roj wahan ja kar roye hai hum

na rone ka soch kar, kitna roye hai hum
bhool jayege tujhe kah kah kar, bahoot roye hai hum


Soooooooooooooooooooo nice poooooooooooooja ji
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«Reply #8 on: June 13, 2007, 02:51:35 PM »
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M'am aapp bohaat acha likhte ho

Mamu.. kasam se tumhari har ek baat sach thi !!!


ro ro kar unke aage hum aapne jazbaat batate hain
sungdil woh ban kar,humara majak udate hain

kabhi khud karte hain Ishq ke naam se fareb humse
kabhi khud hi Payar  soch kar hum dhoka khaatein hain

haste huye lub,kabhi aorda deta hain nakab chehre par
kabhi nam akhon ko hum khushi ke ansu batate hain...!!!



Bahoot hi acha likha hai Vipan ji!!
First two lines bahoot hi dil ko chu gai...

Kahna chaha jab bhi humne apne zazbato ko
Wo samjhe bhavuk hai hum, kahte rahe, choro in bato ko

Karte rahe dhoka umarbhar badi chalaki se
Hume kahte rahe, badalo tum apne in zazbato ko

Thak kar jab hum kahne lage, raste ho rahe hai juda
Kahte hai wo, mar jayege tum bin, kuch to samjhu unke zazbato ko!!!
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«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2007, 02:55:16 PM »
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Hey Pooja........good one.....

Lab chup rehte hain, dil bhi mera gumsum hua sa hai,
Jaane kyu  jehen mein saikadon yaadein samayi hain...
Dhadkane ruki ruki, saansein madhyam madhyam,
Dil ki bat sabhi mere aankhon se nikal aayi hain....


Good one Creator ji!! Bahoot hi simple words mai gahri baat likh gaye hai app.. last line dil ko chu gai!!

Karte hai pyar wo bhi, karte hai pyar hum bhi
Phir bhi juda raahein, her baat per takraar hai
Anhkon mai numi, dil mai ek gubaar hai
Yandon mai jakham, din-raat gumsaar hai!!
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«Reply #10 on: June 13, 2007, 06:20:07 PM »
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Good one Creator ji!! Bahoot hi simple words mai gahri baat likh gaye hai app.. last line dil ko chu gai!!

Karte hai pyar wo bhi, karte hai pyar hum bhi
Phir bhi juda raahein, her baat per takraar hai
Anhkon mai numi, dil mai ek gubaar hai
Yandon mai jakham, din-raat gumsaar hai!!


Thanks a lot pooja.....

Kabhi roya kiye hai hum toh kabhi muskuraye hain,
Muhabbat ki ye yaadein hame kitna sataye hain,
Tumhari raah dekhu aur kabhi bhoolna chahun,
Muhabbat mein jaane kaise ye mukan aaye hain...
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«Reply #11 on: June 26, 2007, 06:06:34 PM »
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wah kaya baat kahi hai... Good one Amit!!
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«Reply #12 on: June 27, 2007, 06:06:55 AM »
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na rone ka soch kar, kitna roye hai hum
bhool jayege tujhe kah- kah kar, bahoot roye hai hum

kyun yaad kare tujhko, yahi socha kiye hum
yahi kahte-kahte, teri yaad main her baar bahoot roye hai hum

ek bhi chees teri kyun rakhein pass hum
yahi kahte hue, her teri ek chees ko seene se laga kar roye hai hum

ab na jayege kabhi apni milan ke jagah per hum
bas ek akhiri baar kah kar, her roj wahan ja kar roye hai hum

na rone ka soch kar, kitna roye hai hum
"bhool jayege tujhe kah kah kar, bahoot roye hai hum


"bhoot roye hai ham" bhoot bhoo achaa likha hai

netra...
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«Reply #13 on: June 28, 2007, 05:08:45 PM »
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wah kaya baat kahi hai... Good one Amit!!


Thanks a lot Pooja....Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: January 16, 2008, 09:28:58 PM »
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her pal rahe yaadon mai
pal pal kare baatein khayalo main
ashqo mai beh kar bhi sath rahte ho
kabhi to batao ki tum kaise ho...
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