Bankar ghazal ik nai naveli lafzon me bah jaate hain!

by shara63 on January 04, 2013, 07:16:02 AM
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   Dard-e-dil, aaNkhoN ke aaNsu jab kabhi mil jaate haiN
   Banke ghazal ik nai naveli, lafzoN me bah jaate haiN

   Bemuravvat apne bane toh zaar-o-zaar roya ye dil
   chhodi duniya jinki khaatir, begane kyuN ban jaate haiN
   
   Neem-shaoor mann ki yaadeN, beendhti haiN jism-o-jaan ko
   Tareek-o-tanhaa raatoN me aakar khanjar se dhaNs jaate haiN

   YaadeN hi aksar phool ban kar naghmoN mein saj jaati haiN
   dard-e-chhalawa, kasak thagi ki, lafzoN ka jaal banaate haiN

   BandhanoN me uljha sa dil darta hai ik hirnee ki maanind
   sahmi si us jaaN ki aaNheN naale se yuN ban jaate haiN

   Ghul jaae jisme dard saara mil jaae kaash aisa zahar
   baahar kuchh itna shorr utthe, mit jaae andar sab qahar

   Phir raheN na aaNheN, baheN na  aaNsu, baaqi ho lafzoN ki kal-kal
   Banke jazbaatoN ki dhaara, bahtee jaae ek nai-naveli ghazal  !!  .......'ainy'
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«Reply #1 on: January 04, 2013, 07:29:14 AM »
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wah wah wah kya baat hai shara jee umda peshkash daaad qubool kareN.
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«Reply #2 on: January 04, 2013, 08:10:32 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: January 04, 2013, 08:13:30 AM »
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wah wah
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Padhne aur Daad dene ke liye bahut bahut shukria Aarish sb!
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«Reply #5 on: January 04, 2013, 08:38:25 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: January 04, 2013, 08:38:37 AM »
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Shukria Heer ji!
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«Reply #7 on: January 04, 2013, 08:39:33 AM »
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nand ji aapka behad shukria!
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«Reply #8 on: January 04, 2013, 09:21:04 AM »
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jaadu kahun yaa main nashaa kahun
tumhaari lekhni ki kyaa taarif karun
padh letaa hoon koi ghazal tumhaari
lagtaa hai bas main jhhoomtaa rahun

sach me Ainy ji, kuch aisaa hi asar hotaa hai aapkaa likha huwaa padh ke... aur is rachna ki taarif ko main shabdon me nahi baandh saktaa... jitni ki jaaye, kam hogi... isliye.... iski taarif me bas.....

Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!
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«Reply #9 on: January 04, 2013, 09:23:42 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut khoob
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«Reply #10 on: January 04, 2013, 10:02:40 AM »
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Hriday ji, itni taareef ki toh main qaabil bhi nahi hoon ...ye aapka badappan hai ..jo is qadar hausla baksh alfaaz me kalaam ke saath saath mujhe izzat bakhshee hai...iske liye maien aapka tahe dil se shukria ada karti hoon!
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«Reply #11 on: January 04, 2013, 10:14:49 AM »
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waah waah.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: January 04, 2013, 10:15:52 AM »
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suman ji, aapka tahe dil se shukria !
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«Reply #13 on: January 04, 2013, 10:21:11 AM »
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nishi ji, aapka bahut shukria!
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«Reply #14 on: January 04, 2013, 11:09:21 AM »
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Sharaa Jee Aadaab!


Behad umdaa aur khoob ahsaasaat bayaaN kiye hai aapne... bade hi
gehre aur umdaa lafzoN meiN aik khoob kalaam kahi hai jee ..

Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..


Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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