BaRi Hi Shaaq Thi Dil Par Judaayi

by Ghulam Haider on April 21, 2010, 09:51:00 AM
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BaRi Hi Shaaq Thi Dil Par Judaayi.
Mujhe Aksar Tumhari Yaad Aayi.

Zara Sa Door Tha Bhoola Nahin Tha,
Na Ho Payi Yahan Tak Jo Rasaayi.

Mujhe Ihsaas Hai Beete Dinon Ka,
Main Sharminda Hon Khud Se Intihaayi.

Main Qaasir Tha Ye Main Bhi Jaanta Hon,
Magar Kehna Na Is Ko Be Wafaayi.

Na Jaane Kis Taraf Main Jaa Raha Tha,
Yahan Ulfat Tumhari Khench Laayi.

Main Kya Hon Kaun Hon Sab Jaante Hain,
Meri Soorat Se Ho Naa-Aashnaayi.

Nahin Achchha Karon Main Apni Baaten,
Nahin Achchhi Ziyaadah Khud Numaayi.

Bhali Baaten To Bas Haider Wohi Hain,
Ke Jin Se Ho Sake Sab Ki Bhalaayi.
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«Reply #1 on: April 21, 2010, 09:59:09 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Haider Bhai..

Bahut Hi Zabardast Peshkash Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: April 21, 2010, 10:06:58 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on April 21, 2010, 09:59:09 AM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Haider Bhai..

Bahut Hi Zabardast Peshkash Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Zarrah Nawaazi Ke Liye Be-Had Mamnoon Hon Aap Ka "Khwaish" Sahib.
Kyonki A'rsa e Diraaz Se Haaziri Na De Saka Is Liye Kisi bhi Pesh-Kash Se Pehle O'zr-Khwahi Munaasib Samajhte Huye Ye Ghazal Pesh Ki Hai.
Nazar e Karam Farmaane Ke Liye Phir Se Aap Ka Shukiya Ada Karta Hon
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«Reply #3 on: April 21, 2010, 10:40:36 AM »
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Wah wah Haider Sb. bahut khoobsurat,purkashish aur taghazzul se bharpoor ghazal aapne kahi hai. Matle ka sher to lajawab hai. Bahot  shandaar. Marhaba. Apne do ashaar apki nazr kar raha hun:

Mulaqaaton se jab mahroom honge
Hamaare dil bahot maghmoom honge
Kabhi socha na tha aisa bhi hoga
Jo haakim the wahi mahkoom honge
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«Reply #4 on: April 21, 2010, 10:47:55 AM »
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haider dost kamaal kar diya hai
is khoobsurat andaaz main dil k zakhmo kii numaish kasam se mazaa aa gaya

riyaaz bhai aapne bhi khoob baat kahii hai

aap dono k saath kucch likh raha hoon pasand aaye toh bande ko daad haazir ho

KABHI JO TU SAMJHEGA MERI MOHABBAT K MAAYNE
TOH JAANEGA YEH ZINDGI KITNI VIRAAN THI
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«Reply #5 on: April 21, 2010, 10:52:09 AM »
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Bahot khoob Saahil ji, bahot achha likha hai aapne.
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«Reply #6 on: April 21, 2010, 11:06:21 AM »
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bahut ache ghulam haider ji...umda likha hai
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«Reply #7 on: April 21, 2010, 11:24:14 AM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on April 21, 2010, 10:40:36 AM
Wah wah Haider Sb. bahut khoobsurat,purkashish aur taghazzul se bharpoor ghazal aapne kahi hai. Matle ka sher to lajawab hai. Bahot  shandaar. Marhaba. Apne do ashaar apki nazr kar raha hun:

Mulaqaaton se jab mahroom honge
Hamaare dil bahot maghmoom honge
Kabhi socha na tha aisa bhi hoga
Jo haakim the wahi mahkoom honge




Pasand Karne Ke Liye Aap Ka Tah e Dil Se Shukr Guzaar Hon. Ummeed Hai Ke Isi Tarah Aap Apni Qeemti Aaraa Se Nawaazte Rahnge.
Aap Ne Jo Asha'ar Pesh Kiye Hain hobot hi Dil Nasheen Hain.
Dil Aur Duniya Donon Ki Baat Aap Ne Mukhtasar Se Bayaan Mein Khoobsoorti Aur Pukhtagi Ke Saath Pesh Ki Hai.
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«Reply #8 on: April 21, 2010, 11:27:10 AM »
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Quote from: samnoj on April 21, 2010, 11:06:21 AM
bahut ache ghulam haider ji...umda likha hai
Aap Ki Nawaazish Aur Karam Hai Jo Aap Ne Meri Ghazal Par Apne Haseen Khayalat Ka Ikhtisaar Se Izhaar Farmaya
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«Reply #9 on: April 21, 2010, 11:33:48 AM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on April 21, 2010, 10:40:36 AM
Wah wah Haider Sb. bahut khoobsurat,purkashish aur taghazzul se bharpoor ghazal aapne kahi hai. Matle ka sher to lajawab hai. Bahot  shandaar. Marhaba. Apne do ashaar apki nazr kar raha hun:

Mulaqaaton se jab mahroom honge
Hamaare dil bahot maghmoom honge
Kabhi socha na tha aisa bhi hoga
Jo haakim the wahi mahkoom honge




jis Daad O Tahseen Se Aap Ne Is Ma'mooli Si Kaavish ko Nawaza Hai Us Ke Liye Be Had Shukr Guzaar Hon aap Ka. Matla' bohot Hi Dil Nasheen Aur Dil Soz Hai. Saath hi Saath Doosre Misra' Mein Haalaat Ki Haqeeqat Ki Taraf Bohot Hi Lateef Andaaz Mein Isharah Kiya Hai. Aap Ke Donon She'r bohot Pasand Aaye Meri Taraf Se Bohot Si Daad Pesh Hai.
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«Reply #10 on: April 21, 2010, 11:44:19 AM »
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Bahot bahot shukriya Haider Sb. Bila shuba aap bahot behtreen likhte hain. Ummed hai aainda bhi aapni khubsurat takhleeqaat se hamein nawzte rahenge.
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«Reply #11 on: April 21, 2010, 01:49:33 PM »
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Bahut umda peshkash hai Haider Ji
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«Reply #12 on: April 21, 2010, 02:17:11 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 21, 2010, 01:49:33 PM
Bahut umda peshkash hai Haider Ji
Aapki Inayat Ka Shukriya Rajesh Ji
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«Reply #13 on: April 21, 2010, 04:52:50 PM »
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Badi shaandar ghazal sunaai hai Haider ji. Bhot achha likha hai. Congratulations.
Quote from: Ghulam Haider on April 21, 2010, 09:51:00 AM
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BaRi Hi Shaaq Thi Dil Par Judaayi.
Mujhe Aksar Tumhari Yaad Aayi.

Zara Sa Door Tha Bhoola Nahin Tha,
Na Ho Payi Yahan Tak Jo Rasaayi.

Mujhe Ihsaas Hai Beete Dinon Ka,
Main Sharminda Hon Khud Se Intihaayi.

Main Qaasir Tha Ye Main Bhi Jaanta Hon,
Magar Kehna Na Is Ko Be Wafaayi.

Na Jaane Kis Taraf Main Jaa Raha Tha,
Yahan Ulfat Tumhari Khench Laayi.

Main Kya Hon Kaun Hon Sab Jaante Hain,
Meri Soorat Se Ho Naa-Aashnaayi.

Nahin Achchha Karon Main Apni Baaten,
Nahin Achchhi Ziyaadah Khud Numaayi.

Bhali Baaten To Bas Haider Wohi Hain,
Ke Jin Se Ho Sake Sab Ki Bhalaayi.
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«Reply #14 on: April 21, 2010, 08:01:42 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on April 21, 2010, 02:56:52 PM
Bahut Hi Umda Peshkash Hai Haider Ji
Aagaz Se Lekar Anjam Tak Behtareen Ashaar Rahe
Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ghazal.....Mubaraq Ho
Yun Hi Mehfil Ki Raunaq Afzaii Karte Rahiyega

Aur Riyza Bhai Aapne Bhi Bahut Khub Farmaya


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~
Be Had Shukr Guzaar Hon Aap Ka. Aapne Meri Ghazal Ko Itni Dil Chaspi Se PaRha.Ummeed Rakhiye Aage Bhi Isi Tarah ke Aur Is Se Bhi Behtar Asha'ar PaRhne Ko Milte Rahenge.
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