"" bas ek shikayat ""

by nirala on January 27, 2011, 06:40:34 AM
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Nigahon se waar kare,labon sew muskuraye tu
bata isme maza kya hai

dard se tadpu mai, khusi se ithlaye tu
bata iski wajah kya hai

dhundle tasveeron me rahun mai, naye naye khel dikhaye tu
bata isme rakha kya hai

sheese sa tod kar dil mera, gair sang preet rachaye tu
bata isme wafa kya hai

raahen wafa ki meri ab sazaa kya hai
bata de itna aye dilbar mere
mohabbat me teri ab Raza kya hai
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«Reply #1 on: January 27, 2011, 07:15:41 AM »
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waahhhh wahhhh wahhhhh
kya baat kya baat kya baatttt
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«Reply #2 on: January 27, 2011, 07:17:14 AM »
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Maan gaye aap ko bahut umda rachna ..jai shree krishna
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«Reply #3 on: January 27, 2011, 07:19:37 AM »
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hahahaha---
aaj kya baat ki wah wahi ho gai---
Thanx K mam
and Kishan ji--
jai srekrishna Radhe radhe
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«Reply #4 on: January 27, 2011, 07:06:22 PM »
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Bahut Khub Nirala Ji
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«Reply #5 on: January 28, 2011, 06:14:33 AM »
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sukriya Rishi ji--
meri beja chijon ko bhi sarahne ka dhanyabaad.
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thanx$"
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«Reply #6 on: February 07, 2011, 08:49:21 AM »
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bahut khub kya baat kahi hai nirala ji kabile taarif Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: February 07, 2011, 08:54:34 AM »
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kamal ji apka dhanyabaad ji.
wo actually mai bhi ekaadh baar shikayt kar jaata hun bewajah Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: February 07, 2011, 08:55:18 AM »
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kamal ji apka dhanyabaad ji.
wo actually mai bhi ekaadh baar shikayt kar jaata hun bewajah Usual Smile
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thanx
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«Reply #9 on: February 07, 2011, 09:17:37 AM »
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Nirala ji ki neerali poem....mast shikaayat hai ji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Tujhe chhedne kee ye aadat puraani hai hamaari
Tujhse khushamad karane ki ye chal hai hamaari


Quote from: nirala on January 27, 2011, 06:40:34 AM
Nigahon se waar kare,labon sew muskuraye tu
bata isme maza kya hai

dard se tadpu mai, khusi se ithlaye tu
bata iski wajah kya hai

dhundle tasveeron me rahun mai, naye naye khel dikhaye tu
bata isme rakha kya hai

sheese sa tod kar dil mera, gair sang preet rachaye tu
bata isme wafa kya hai

raahen wafa ki meri ab sazaa kya hai
bata de itna aye dilbar mere
mohabbat me teri ab Raza kya hai
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«Reply #10 on: February 07, 2011, 09:23:00 AM »
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ye lo ab Koyal sahiba ki kuch lines ka jawaab to kamaal hai.
kaash aisa hi ho Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
Aakaash bro aapka bhi sukriya aur Koyal ji ka bhi
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thanx
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«Reply #11 on: February 07, 2011, 09:42:25 AM »
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wah Nir ji maza aagaya padh kar

jal kar raakh ho gaya dil meraa
dekh ab ismeiN bacha kya hai
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«Reply #12 on: February 07, 2011, 09:58:10 AM »
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wah  Tamanna ji kya baat kahi aapne
bahut khub
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«Reply #13 on: February 07, 2011, 10:14:16 AM »
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Abhi bhee ek chingaari baaki hai
Hawaa de jee utheay ga tera dil

Quote from: ek_tamanna on February 07, 2011, 09:42:25 AM
wah Nir ji maza aagaya padh kar

jal kar raakh ho gaya dil meraa
dekh ab ismeiN bacha kya hai
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«Reply #14 on: February 07, 2011, 10:16:17 AM »
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wah  Tamanna ji kya baat kahi aapne
bahut khub
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thanx
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