*Begaani si nazar* (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on July 05, 2006, 10:41:11 AM
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ranjana
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«Reply #15 on: July 10, 2006, 03:09:46 PM »
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Kya baat hai Vikas...Bahut khoob
Chaliye aap key sher ko hi poora karney ki koshish kartey hai.....

bichud kar rahon mey tumsey
apni mazil ko paane chale hum
reh gaye mazil talashte tanha.......

rakha dil key tukdo ko humney
jod kar paas paas to paaya,
har tukda ro raha tha tanha.....

tumsey dil ki baat abhi tak to,
kuch huii bhi naa thi aur,
is dil to chodh gaye tum tanha...

uthaya sir dua key liye humney,
khuda sey to paaya,
sitaron mey chand ro raha tha tanha...

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bahut khoob Shikha ......superbbbb hai yeh ........
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«Reply #16 on: July 11, 2006, 03:20:42 AM »
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Shukriya Ranju di.....[/b]
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«Reply #17 on: July 12, 2006, 02:00:06 PM »
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Very nice Gumnam ji....


Majboor humey is duniya ney kar diya...
merey sabr ka intehaa kuch is kadar liya...
Dil ko jala dala wafa key naam par mera,
aur phir Bewafa mera hi naam rakh diya....

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SHUKRIYA SHIKHA......AAPNE BAHUT ACHHA LIKHA......

CHAAND TO NIKLA HAI MAGAR PAR RAAT NA HAI PEHLE SI,
YE MULAKAAT TO MULAKAAT NA HAI PEHLE SI.
RANJ KUCHH KAM TO HUA TERE MILNE SE,
YE ALAG BAT HAI,YE BAAT NA HAI PEHLE SI.
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«Reply #18 on: August 09, 2006, 12:58:23 PM »
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Very nice Gumnam ji....


Majboor humey is duniya ney kar diya...
merey sabr ka intehaa kuch is kadar liya...
Dil ko jala dala wafa key naam par mera,
aur phir Bewafa mera hi naam rakh diya....

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SHUKRIYA SHIKHA......AAPNE BAHUT ACHHA LIKHA......

CHAAND TO NIKLA HAI MAGAR PAR RAAT NA HAI PEHLE SI,
YE MULAKAAT TO MULAKAAT NA HAI PEHLE SI.
RANJ KUCHH KAM TO HUA TERE MILNE SE,
YE ALAG BAT HAI,YE BAAT NA HAI PEHLE SI.




=D> =D> =D>

Gumnaam ji..... Bahut Khoob.....



Nigal gaya jinhey waqt ka samundar,
Taalashtey hai hum woh guzrey mukaam muhabbat mey....
Chand bhi roya dekh kar haal mera,
Hum bhi roye raat bhar ho kar nakaam muhabbat mey.....
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«Reply #19 on: August 10, 2006, 01:03:24 PM »
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Very nice Gumnam ji....


Majboor humey is duniya ney kar diya...
merey sabr ka intehaa kuch is kadar liya...
Dil ko jala dala wafa key naam par mera,
aur phir Bewafa mera hi naam rakh diya....

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SHUKRIYA SHIKHA......AAPNE BAHUT ACHHA LIKHA......

CHAAND TO NIKLA HAI MAGAR PAR RAAT NA HAI PEHLE SI,
YE MULAKAAT TO MULAKAAT NA HAI PEHLE SI.
RANJ KUCHH KAM TO HUA TERE MILNE SE,
YE ALAG BAT HAI,YE BAAT NA HAI PEHLE SI.




=D> =D> =D>

Gumnaam ji..... Bahut Khoob.....



Nigal gaya jinhey waqt ka samundar,
Taalashtey hai hum woh guzrey mukaam muhabbat mey....
Chand bhi roya dekh kar haal mera,
Hum bhi roye raat bhar ho kar nakaam muhabbat mey.....
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BAHUT KHUB SHIKHA JI....



LUTA GAYA HAI MUJHKO AJAB DILLAGI KE SAATH,
EK HAADSA HUA HAI MERI BEBASI KE SAATH.
MAIN KYON KISI SE USKI JAFA KA GILA KARU,
MAJBURIYA BAHUT HAI HAR EK AADMI KE SAATH...
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«Reply #20 on: August 14, 2006, 08:49:50 AM »
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WOW Shikha sach me aaj Dil me Dard hai...>Superb
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«Reply #21 on: August 23, 2006, 12:40:27 PM »
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Very nice Gumnam ji....


Majboor humey is duniya ney kar diya...
merey sabr ka intehaa kuch is kadar liya...
Dil ko jala dala wafa key naam par mera,
aur phir Bewafa mera hi naam rakh diya....

[/b]
SHUKRIYA SHIKHA......AAPNE BAHUT ACHHA LIKHA......

CHAAND TO NIKLA HAI MAGAR PAR RAAT NA HAI PEHLE SI,
YE MULAKAAT TO MULAKAAT NA HAI PEHLE SI.
RANJ KUCHH KAM TO HUA TERE MILNE SE,
YE ALAG BAT HAI,YE BAAT NA HAI PEHLE SI.




=D> =D> =D>

Gumnaam ji..... Bahut Khoob.....



Nigal gaya jinhey waqt ka samundar,
Taalashtey hai hum woh guzrey mukaam muhabbat mey....
Chand bhi roya dekh kar haal mera,
Hum bhi roye raat bhar ho kar nakaam muhabbat mey.....
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BAHUT KHUB SHIKHA JI....



LUTA GAYA HAI MUJHKO AJAB DILLAGI KE SAATH,
EK HAADSA HUA HAI MERI BEBASI KE SAATH.
MAIN KYON KISI SE USKI JAFA KA GILA KARU,
MAJBURIYA BAHUT HAI HAR EK AADMI KE SAATH...



Bahut khoob Gumnaam ji... Bahut achha likha hai...
Thanks Gaurav...

Yeh kaisa hadsaa hai meri zindagii ke saath,
Dil mey muhabbat hai magar aasuuon ke saath...
Dhadkan hai baaki dil mey abhie thamii thamii merey,
Jaan jaa rahi hai magar meri sisskiyon ke saath...
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«Reply #22 on: August 24, 2006, 02:36:42 PM »
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SHUKRIYA SHIKHA JI AUR BAHUT KHUB...


KAHI JARA SA ANDHERA BHI KAL KI RAAT NA THA,
GAWAAH KOI MAGAR ROSHNI KE SAATH NA THA.
MUJHE TO FIR BHI MUKADDAR PE RASHQ AATA HAI,
MERI TABAAHI MEIN HAR-CHAND TERA HAATH NA THA...
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«Reply #23 on: March 22, 2007, 02:09:40 PM »
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Nice one Gumnam ji.... =D>


Unki nazaron mey hum gunaahgaar hi sahii,
Unkii nazaron mey rahe, yeh baat kam nahin....
Woh dekhte hai humko aise begaano ki tarah,
Khair dekhte toh hai, bus ab koii gum nahin... Usual Smile
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«Reply #24 on: March 22, 2007, 02:53:57 PM »
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Beautiful Vikas... very nice lines...and Thanks once again...



Gum rehtey they meri nazar mey kuch is kadar sey tum
Aur rehtey they dil key haal sey hi bekhabar sey tum....
Phir Kaisey bichudh gaya Raasta tera meri manzilon sey
Kaisey bhool gaye ki ek waqt mey humsafar they hum…

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BAHOOT KHOOB Shikha!!

bichardte hai wo hi jo kabhi mila karte hai
na jaane kyun hum kismat se gilla karte hai
rahte agar sath to aor dukh hi milte
yah jante hue bhi, Ashqo ki barsaat karte hai!!
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«Reply #25 on: March 22, 2007, 02:56:11 PM »
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Kya baat hai Vikas...Bahut khoob
Chaliye aap key sher ko hi poora karney ki koshish kartey hai.....

bichud kar rahon mey tumsey
apni mazil ko paane chale hum
reh gaye mazil talashte tanha.......

rakha dil key tukdo ko humney
jod kar paas paas to paaya,
har tukda ro raha tha tanha.....

tumsey dil ki baat abhi tak to,
kuch huii bhi naa thi aur,
is dil to chodh gaye tum tanha...

uthaya sir dua key liye humney,
khuda sey to paaya,
sitaron mey chand ro raha tha tanha...

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wah kaya baat hai!!! 3rd pehra dil ko chu gaya!!

sochte hi rahe ki ek din sab samjh jaoge tum
socha  na tha zindagi se he goom ho jaoge tum
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«Reply #26 on: March 22, 2007, 02:57:25 PM »
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wah is thread main, her ek ne kamal ka likha hai!!! good job all!!
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«Reply #27 on: March 28, 2007, 12:12:04 PM »
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Ek aks ban gaye ho tum,
jo dil sey nikalta hi nahin..
yadon key kadmon pey chaltey,
ley jaatey ho tum mujhey wahan...
Khodti hu mein mitti mey khoye huey naam,
kuch ret'h key mehel jo banaye they humney...
Shayad dabey ho yahin kahin..
Ya samundar samay ka nigal gaya hai unhey...
Woh waqt jo beet chuka hai..
Kyon dil mey ek dard choddh gaya hai...
Kyon bhedta hai teer mujhey teri nazar ka,
woh nazar jis par mera ab haqq nahin..
Jo utthti nahin thi merey chehrey sey kabhie,
aur ab jhukh jaati hai merey naam sey bhi....

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 =D>  =D>  =D> Good one Shikha
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«Reply #28 on: April 01, 2007, 08:05:26 AM »
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 Pooja di and Talat....
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«Reply #29 on: April 01, 2007, 02:56:25 PM »
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very nice pooja...

socha to humne bhi na tha ki guum ho jayenge teri rahon se,
par tune bhi to kabhi naam mera pukara nahin,
intzaar to hum bhi karte rahe sanam tera har raste pe,
khade hain ab bhi vahin, jahan apna koi sahara nahin.... [/size]
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