behtarr hai fouad mar jaana mera

by Fouad on August 16, 2007, 08:07:31 AM
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jab chuounk gaya tha nishana mera
yaad aagaya dost purana mera

shouloun ko dey gaya zindagi si
madham si aag ko jalaana mera

ek ansoo baaki tha aankh main
kaam na aya koi bahana mera

khizaan ki kamsin dopaharoun main
pattoun main sog manana mera

terey dil ko dukha ker aaya khayal
behtarr hai   fouad mar jaana mera
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«Reply #1 on: August 16, 2007, 01:21:44 PM »
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Bahut accha likha hai aapne Fouad ji..
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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2007, 03:08:15 PM »
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Fouad

Bahut khoob !

The ending was superb ! =D>
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«Reply #3 on: August 17, 2007, 11:15:32 AM »
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waah . . . Fouad ji ....aap bahut zabardast likhte ho

Jaise Rajbir ji ne kaha endind bahut hi achi thi

chot per chot dil per khaaye hue
hont phir bhi hai muskuraye hue
mout ki waadiyon me baitha hu
zindaghi ki shama jalaye hue
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«Reply #4 on: August 17, 2007, 11:48:53 AM »
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Wow !

Sam bro too good =D> =D> =D>

Bahut achcha laga tumhara likhna !
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«Reply #5 on: August 17, 2007, 11:52:42 AM »
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shukriya Rajbir ji. .
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«Reply #6 on: August 18, 2007, 01:42:24 PM »
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Thanks dude........
 App bhi kuch kam acha nahi likhte....keep writing.
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