Bewaafa toH "ParwaaZ" tere hi sanam nilkle

by ParwaaZ on December 27, 2010, 06:52:43 PM
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Maine jise chaaha woH hi bade be-raham nikle
Aa bhi jaao sanam abke mera na dum nikle

Nikli bhi hoNgi duaaeN dil se bahot tere
Bad naseebi meri mere hi hisse kam nikle

Kia kaat luN jigar ko rahaat e dil ke liya
Woh Dard kahiN se to kahiN se yeH gham nikle

Dil ko jalayaa usne kabhi khud hi jal gaye
Jaane kaisi kaisi musibaatoN se hum nikle

Tuu ne jise samjha raqeeb woH fareb tha
Bewaafa toH ParwaaZ tere hi sanam nilkle
   

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«Reply #1 on: December 27, 2010, 07:07:40 PM »
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wah Prwaaz ji
bahut khub.
lekin mujhe 3ra para bahut bahut lajawaab laga.
damdaar superb line ji.
mast.
"kuch arz krta hu aapki peshkash pr::-
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dard utha seene me aankh meri bhar aaee
        tu ja betha gairon me ye kaisi preet nibhai
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thanx
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«Reply #2 on: December 27, 2010, 08:30:34 PM »
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Kya baat hai yaara..
Bahaut bahaut sunder..
Applause Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #3 on: December 27, 2010, 09:05:49 PM »
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Bohat khoob Parwaaz Bhai,

Bohat achche
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«Reply #4 on: December 28, 2010, 06:29:50 AM »
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wah ji wahhh

kya sundar bat kahi he khaskar

"wo dard kahin se kahinse ye gam nikle"

hazaron daad~

kuchh apne shadon me kahta hun galti maaf kijiyega~


kiya ikraar; meri ulfat ko wo samajh na sake chale gayee
unki khata nahi labz dil se hi kuchh kam nikle kuchh ashkon me reh gayee ~
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«Reply #5 on: December 28, 2010, 08:50:11 AM »
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Bahut khoob !!! Parwaaz jee!aap ke kalaam par kuchh likhne kaa saahas naheeN bas bahut khoob!
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«Reply #6 on: December 28, 2010, 10:03:56 AM »
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Thanks Niraala jee....

Aapne kalaam ke tisre para ko pasand farmaya aur
HouNsala afzai ki uske liye tahe dil e shukiyaa
Janab...

Aate rahiye.....
Khush O aabad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         




wah Prwaaz ji
bahut khub.
lekin mujhe 3ra para bahut bahut lajawaab laga.
damdaar superb line ji.
mast.
"kuch arz krta hu aapki peshkash pr::-
""
dard utha seene me aankh meri bhar aaee
        tu ja betha gairon me ye kaisi preet nibhai
""
thanx
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«Reply #7 on: December 28, 2010, 10:13:09 AM »
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Maine jise chaaha woH hi bade be-raham nikle
Aa bhi jaao sanam abke mera na dum nikle

Nikli bhi hoNgi duaaeN dil se bahot tere
Bad naseebi meri mere hi hisse kam nikle

Kia kaat luN jigar ko rahaat e dil ke liya
Woh Dard kahiN se to kahiN se yeH gham nikle

Dil ko jalayaa usne kabhi khud hi jal gaye
Jaane kaisi kaisi musibaatoN se hum nikle

Tuu ne jise samjha raqeeb woH fareb tha
Bewaafa toH ParwaaZ tere hi sanam nilkle
   




Bahut Bahut Khoob Parwaaz Ji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat peshkash Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: December 28, 2010, 10:15:52 AM »
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Aadaab Janab Shihab Sahab..!

Aapki mohobbat aur chaht hai jo bande ke sadhe
sidhe alfaaz bhi achche lagte hai aap logoN ko Usual Smile

Janab hum koi shayar nahi hai ... bus aapki tarha
hi sikhte rahte hai... Aap logoN se hi sikhte hai..
Humare likhe se aap kuch sikhe hume khushi hui par
kahiN galat na sikhiyeNga .... tongue3

Daad aur houNsla aafzai ke liye tahe dil se mashkoor
O mamnoon hai.....

Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye.....
Khush O aabad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile          



Bahut Hi Khub Janaab Parwaaz Saheb
Aapki Tarah Hume Tareef Karna To Nahi Aata
Bas Itna Kahenge Ki Aapko Parhke Humesha
Kuch Na Kuch Sikhne Ko Milta Hai Har Bara Ki Tarah
Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Peshkash Hai Janaab.

Hazaron Dad

Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~

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«Reply #9 on: December 28, 2010, 10:23:08 AM »
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bahut khoob Parwaaz sahab.
ehsaaso se bhar dia aapne to.
khus rahiye
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«Reply #10 on: December 28, 2010, 11:44:37 AM »
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Bahut khoob parwaaz ji...
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«Reply #11 on: December 28, 2010, 12:12:14 PM »
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Bahut KHub Parwaaz JI
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«Reply #12 on: January 13, 2011, 07:03:17 AM »
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wah parwaz ji wah bahut khoobsurat kriti.

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: January 13, 2011, 07:06:29 AM »
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wah parwazji bahut khub likha hai

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: February 18, 2011, 08:05:36 PM »
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Maine jise chaaha woH hi bade be-raham nikle
Aa bhi jaao sanam abke mera na dum nikle

Nikli bhi hoNgi duaaeN dil se bahot tere
Bad naseebi meri mere hi hisse kam nikle

Kia kaat luN jigar ko rahaat e dil ke liya
Woh Dard kahiN se to kahiN se yeH gham nikle

Dil ko jalayaa usne kabhi khud hi jal gaye
Jaane kaisi kaisi musibaatoN se hum nikle

Tuu ne jise samjha raqeeb woH fareb tha
Bewaafa toH ParwaaZ tere hi sanam nilkle
    



kya baat hai ... Sameer Ji !  bahut zabardast aur umdaa ghazal kahi hai aapne .. sabhi ashaar gehraai ke saath ... badhi soch se labrez dikhaai diye ... adaayegi aur bayaani me bhi purasar rahi ... aapki best ghazaloN me ek aur best ghazal shaamil ho gai ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul farmaayeN ... aise hi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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