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Maine jise chaaha woH hi bade be-raham nikle
Aa bhi jaao sanam abke mera na dum nikle
Nikli bhi hoNgi duaaeN dil se bahot tere
Bad naseebi meri mere hi hisse kam nikle
Kia kaat luN jigar ko rahaat e dil ke liya
Woh Dard kahiN se to kahiN se yeH gham nikle
Dil ko jalayaa usne kabhi khud hi jal gaye
Jaane kaisi kaisi musibaatoN se hum nikle
Tuu ne jise samjha raqeeb woH fareb tha
Bewaafa toH ParwaaZ tere hi sanam nilkle
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«Reply #1 on: December 27, 2010, 07:07:40 PM » |
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wah Prwaaz ji
bahut khub.
lekin mujhe 3ra para bahut bahut lajawaab laga.
damdaar superb line ji.
mast.
"kuch arz krta hu aapki peshkash pr::-
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dard utha seene me aankh meri bhar aaee
tu ja betha gairon me ye kaisi preet nibhai
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thanx
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«Reply #2 on: December 27, 2010, 08:30:34 PM » |
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Kya baat hai yaara.. Bahaut bahaut sunder..  Khush rahiye..! |
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«Reply #3 on: December 27, 2010, 09:05:49 PM » |
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Bohat khoob Parwaaz Bhai,
Bohat achche
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«Reply #4 on: December 28, 2010, 06:29:50 AM » |
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wah ji wahhh
kya sundar bat kahi he khaskar
"wo dard kahin se kahinse ye gam nikle"
hazaron daad~
kuchh apne shadon me kahta hun galti maaf kijiyega~
kiya ikraar; meri ulfat ko wo samajh na sake chale gayee
unki khata nahi labz dil se hi kuchh kam nikle kuchh ashkon me reh gayee ~
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«Reply #5 on: December 28, 2010, 08:50:11 AM » |
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Bahut khoob !!! Parwaaz jee!aap ke kalaam par kuchh likhne kaa saahas naheeN bas bahut khoob!
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«Reply #6 on: December 28, 2010, 10:03:56 AM » |
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Thanks Niraala jee....
Aapne kalaam ke tisre para ko pasand farmaya aur
HouNsala afzai ki uske liye tahe dil e shukiyaa
Janab...
Aate rahiye.....
Khush O aabad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez....  wah Prwaaz ji
bahut khub.
lekin mujhe 3ra para bahut bahut lajawaab laga.
damdaar superb line ji.
mast.
"kuch arz krta hu aapki peshkash pr::-
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dard utha seene me aankh meri bhar aaee
tu ja betha gairon me ye kaisi preet nibhai
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thanx
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«Reply #7 on: December 28, 2010, 10:13:09 AM » |
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«Reply #9 on: December 28, 2010, 10:23:08 AM » |
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bahut khoob Parwaaz sahab.
ehsaaso se bhar dia aapne to.
khus rahiye
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«Reply #10 on: December 28, 2010, 11:44:37 AM » |
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Bahut khoob parwaaz ji...
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«Reply #11 on: December 28, 2010, 12:12:14 PM » |
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Bahut KHub Parwaaz JI
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«Reply #14 on: February 18, 2011, 08:05:36 PM » |
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Maine jise chaaha woH hi bade be-raham nikle
Aa bhi jaao sanam abke mera na dum nikle
Nikli bhi hoNgi duaaeN dil se bahot tere
Bad naseebi meri mere hi hisse kam nikle
Kia kaat luN jigar ko rahaat e dil ke liya
Woh Dard kahiN se to kahiN se yeH gham nikle
Dil ko jalayaa usne kabhi khud hi jal gaye
Jaane kaisi kaisi musibaatoN se hum nikle
Tuu ne jise samjha raqeeb woH fareb tha
Bewaafa toH ParwaaZ tere hi sanam nilkle
kya baat hai ... Sameer Ji ! bahut zabardast aur umdaa ghazal kahi hai aapne .. sabhi ashaar gehraai ke saath ... badhi soch se labrez dikhaai diye ... adaayegi aur bayaani me bhi purasar rahi ... aapki best ghazaloN me ek aur best ghazal shaamil ho gai ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul farmaayeN ... aise hi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !
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