bewafa naam de gaye

by kaushikbhawna008 on May 29, 2008, 08:09:44 AM
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hamne to har dard chupaya tha
taaki unke chehre pe hasi barkarar rahe
par wo to dekho hamei jaate jaate
harjaai keh gaye

hamne to har kaliyaan unke naam kar diye the
par wo jaate jaate hamei kaaton ki saugat de gaye

hamne to baithe the sagar kinare kar rahe the intzaar maujon k aane ka
par jaate jaate wo hamein tufaano k hawale kar gaye

unpar koi b ungli na uthaye na kahe koi unki mohobbat ko bewafaai
isliye hamne to har ilzaam apne ser liye the

par wo na samajh paaye kya kiya tha hamne unki khatir
wo jaate jaate bewafaa hamein naam de gaye
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«Reply #1 on: June 01, 2008, 03:16:54 PM »
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hamne to har dard chupaya tha
taaki unke chehre pe hasi barkarar rahe
par wo to dekho hamei jaate jaate
harjaai keh gaye

hamne to har kaliyaan unke naam kar diye the
par wo jaate jaate hamei kaaton ki saugat de gaye

hamne to baithe the sagar kinare kar rahe the intzaar maujon k aane ka
par jaate jaate wo hamein tufaano k hawale kar gaye

unpar koi b ungli na uthaye na kahe koi unki mohobbat ko bewafaai
isliye hamne to har ilzaam apne ser liye the

par wo na samajh paaye kya kiya tha hamne unki khatir
wo jaate jaate bewafaa hamein naam de gaye

wow... yeh gazal bhi humne pada hai... author ka naam yaad nahi aa raha hai.
Nice sharing Bhawna jee
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«Reply #2 on: June 02, 2008, 05:14:41 AM »
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maaf kijiyega sonia ji ye kisi aur ki creation nahi ye creation hamari khud ki hai,,,,,,,,ho sakta hai ki aapne jo shayri padhi ho usse is shayri k shabd kuch milte julte ho par yakeenan ye creation hamari khud ki hai
baaki najm padhne k liye bohut bohut shukriya
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«Reply #3 on: June 03, 2008, 02:45:55 AM »
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maaf kijiyega sonia ji ye kisi aur ki creation nahi ye creation hamari khud ki hai,,,,,,,,ho sakta hai ki aapne jo shayri padhi ho usse is shayri k shabd kuch milte julte ho par yakeenan ye creation hamari khud ki hai
baaki najm padhne k liye bohut bohut shukriya


ooh.. hosakta hai dear bhawna.

Yeh aapka hai toh very nice creation jee.. Applause
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