Bewafaai pe waah waahi!!

by salma786 on April 16, 2009, 01:13:52 PM
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Wo dastaan sunane baithe hai mehfil me,
Is andaz-e-bayaan se mehfil ko maza de gaye,

Jis Dard ko apne samet kar rakha tha maine,
Unke labzo se yun nikli unhe kuredte chale gaye,

Chand pal jo bitaye the unki agosh me maine kabhi,
Sare pal meri khushiyon ke wo khushi se maar gaye,

Jo kiya karte the mohabbat ke dawe mujh se kabhi,
Aaj bade pyaar se daman ko mere kichad se bhar gaye,

Roshan thi meri zindegi bhi mohabbat ke chiraag se,
Chin kar roshni mujhe andhero me dhakel gaye,

Waah waahi luti mehfil se apne gam ko jata ke,
Kant kar gala mera wo bade pyaar se nikal gaye!
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«Reply #1 on: April 16, 2009, 01:44:34 PM »
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They way u expressed ur kalam is realy GUd. keep it up Salma!
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«Reply #2 on: April 16, 2009, 01:58:01 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on April 16, 2009, 01:44:34 PM
They way u expressed ur kalam is realy GUd. keep it up Salma!

The way u praise gives me strength to write more... Thanks lot dear Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: April 16, 2009, 02:30:55 PM »
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boaht bohat khoob Salma ji, bohat pyaara.
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«Reply #4 on: April 16, 2009, 02:34:13 PM »
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bahut acha likha h apne....jaise mere hi dil ki baat apne likh di ho.aise hi likhte rhiye.
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«Reply #5 on: April 16, 2009, 05:38:54 PM »
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Bohat khoob Salma....
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«Reply #6 on: April 17, 2009, 06:49:35 AM »
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Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on April 16, 2009, 02:30:55 PM
boaht bohat khoob Salma ji, bohat pyaara.
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Shukriya Saurabh ji!!
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«Reply #7 on: April 17, 2009, 07:24:49 AM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #8 on: April 17, 2009, 11:24:01 AM »
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Quote from: poppoetry on April 16, 2009, 02:34:13 PM
bahut acha likha h apne....jaise mere hi dil ki baat apne likh di ho.aise hi likhte rhiye.
Shukriya Popoetry ji!
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«Reply #9 on: April 17, 2009, 01:13:48 PM »
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Quote from: salma786 on April 16, 2009, 01:13:52 PM
Wo dastaan sunane baithe hai mehfil me,
Is andaz-e-bayaan se mehfil ko maza de gaye,

Jis Dard ko apne samet kar rakha tha maine,
Unke labzo se yun nikli unhe kuredte chale gaye,

Chand pal jo bitaye the unki agosh me maine kabhi,
Sare pal meri khushiyon ke wo khushi se maar gaye,

Jo kiya karte the mohabbat ke dawe mujh se kabhi,
Aaj bade pyaar se daman ko mere kichad se bhar gaye,

Roshan thi meri zindegi bhi mohabbat ke chiraag se,
Chin kar roshni mujhe andhero me dhakel gaye,

Waah waahi luti mehfil se apne gam ko jata ke,
Kant kar gala mera wo bade pyaar se nikal gaye!

Very Nice Salmaji  Applause Applause Applause

Mahaul pe ye kaisi ghata chaayi hai...
Mahfil me tujhe rusva karti huyi ye kiski bewafayi hai...

Tere dard ki sada pe royega vo bhi ek din sisak sisak ke...
Dard ke har ehsas pe mehsus karega,k tune kitni wafayen nibhayi hai..

~Pank~
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«Reply #10 on: April 18, 2009, 07:27:37 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 16, 2009, 05:38:54 PM
Bohat khoob Salma....

Thanks Sajid ji!!
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«Reply #11 on: April 19, 2009, 05:03:51 AM »
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Quote from: upyogkarta on April 17, 2009, 07:24:49 AM
wah wah

Shukriya!
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«Reply #12 on: April 19, 2009, 09:25:31 AM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on April 17, 2009, 01:13:48 PM
Very Nice Salmaji  Applause Applause Applause

Mahaul pe ye kaisi ghata chaayi hai...
Mahfil me tujhe rusva karti huyi ye kiski bewafayi hai...

Tere dard ki sada pe royega vo bhi ek din sisak sisak ke...
Dard ke har ehsas pe mehsus karega,k tune kitni wafayen nibhayi hai..

~Pank~


Shukriya Pank ji Usual Smile
Apne bhi acha likha!
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«Reply #13 on: April 19, 2009, 09:30:19 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on April 16, 2009, 01:13:52 PM
Wo dastaan sunane baithe hai mehfil me,
Is andaz-e-bayaan se mehfil ko maza de gaye,

Jis Dard ko apne samet kar rakha tha maine,
Unke labzo se yun nikli unhe kuredte chale gaye,

Chand pal jo bitaye the unki agosh me maine kabhi,
Sare pal meri khushiyon ke wo khushi se maar gaye,

Jo kiya karte the mohabbat ke dawe mujh se kabhi,
Aaj bade pyaar se daman ko mere kichad se bhar gaye,

Roshan thi meri zindegi bhi mohabbat ke chiraag se,
Chin kar roshni mujhe andhero me dhakel gaye,

Waah waahi luti mehfil se apne gam ko jata ke,
Kant kar gala mera wo bade pyaar se nikal gaye!


Bohot Khoob Salma, Yunhi likhte rehna  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #14 on: April 19, 2009, 11:38:11 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 19, 2009, 09:30:19 AM
Bohot Khoob Salma, Yunhi likhte rehna  icon_thumleft

Shukriya Talat sis Usual Smile
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