Bhawron Ka Har Kali Se.........KOYAL

by KOYAL46 on September 20, 2010, 02:30:50 PM
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Bhawron Ka Har Kali Se.........

Bhawron ka har kali se hota hai waada
Laut kar phir aauunga he pakka iraada

Duniya k gulshano me bhatak jaata hai wo
Waade jo kiye they sab bhul jaata hai wo

Nayee-nayi kaliyon k sang athkheliyon me
Ram-jaata hai usska jiya un saheliyon me

Hum karte rehte hain intezaar harjaai ka
Wo bhul ke humko ho gaya kisi paraayi ka

Chhedta hai ab bhi humko wo apna keh kar
Bulata hai aaj bhi mujhe "pyaari Koyal" keh kar

Jalaata hai dil ko mere wo nakli pyaar jata kar
Jaane kya samajhta hai WO khud ko heero bata kar

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«Reply #1 on: September 20, 2010, 05:20:54 PM »
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Bhawron Ka Har Kali Se.........

Bhawron ka har kali se hota hai waada
Laut kar phir aauunga he pakka iraada

Duniya k gulshano me bhatak jaata hai wo
Waade jo kiye they sab bhul jaata hai wo

Nayee-nayi kaliyon k sang athkheliyon me
Ram-jaata hai usska jiya un saheliyon me

Hum karte rehte hain intezaar harjaai ka
Wo bhul ke humko ho gaya kisi paraayi ka

Chhedta hai ab bhi humko wo apna keh kar
Bulata hai aaj bhi mujhe "pyaari Koyal" keh kar

Jalaata hai dil ko mere wo nakli pyaar jata kar
Jaane kya samajhta hai WO khud ko heero bata kar



Bahut khoob ... Koyal Ji ... nice creation ... dil se daad hazir hai ... likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath....
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«Reply #2 on: September 20, 2010, 05:46:54 PM »
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Koyal Jee aadaab!

Daad deN yaa kuch aur kaheN soch rahe haiN...
Kafi tikhi tikhi lagi aapki yeH creation...
Par aapne waqai achcha likha hai daad...

Likhati rahiye....
Khush rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez....... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #3 on: September 20, 2010, 10:41:32 PM »
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kya baat hai koyal ek alag hi andaaz main paskesh hai

Gud one .....
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«Reply #4 on: September 21, 2010, 12:59:06 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Koyal.. ek dum mastammm.....!!!
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«Reply #5 on: September 21, 2010, 07:07:03 AM »
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Aapka tahe dil se shukriya Anshumali ji.... icon_flower

Bahut khoob ... Koyal Ji ... nice creation ... dil se daad hazir hai ... likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath....
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«Reply #6 on: October 26, 2010, 06:29:52 PM »
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Wah Koyal bahna kya hi khoob poem likhi hai aapne. Mazaa aa gaya. Nice creation. Marhaba.
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«Reply #7 on: October 27, 2010, 04:47:15 AM »
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wowwwwwwwwww koyal rani mast likha hai ye tumne...bht bht mast re......
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«Reply #8 on: October 27, 2010, 11:06:22 AM »
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Aapka dhanyawaad Parwaaz bhai.....

Koyal Jee aadaab!

Daad deN yaa kuch aur kaheN soch rahe haiN...
Kafi tikhi tikhi lagi aapki yeH creation...
Par aapne waqai achcha likha hai daad...

Likhati rahiye....
Khush rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez....... Usual Smile         


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«Reply #9 on: October 27, 2010, 11:10:35 AM »
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koyaliya jiii...

jab koi kali khilti he
thoda mausam hasta he
thoda bahare gaati he
thodi jalti he chandni
thoda bhanvra geet sunata he
jab koi kali khilti he~
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«Reply #10 on: October 27, 2010, 11:15:27 AM »
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Hi Neel-di....thanks a lot.....

kya baat hai koyal ek alag hi andaaz main paskesh hai

Gud one .....
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«Reply #11 on: October 27, 2010, 11:41:43 AM »
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shukriya Hridayji........


Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Koyal.. ek dum mastammm.....!!!

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