Bhool nahi paoge.....

by KOYAL46 on March 31, 2010, 08:02:37 AM

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KOYAL46

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Khush-naseeb itni toh nahi mein ke
Tum mujhe kabhi dil se yaad karoge
Par itna vishwaas hai hume apne pe
K tum hume kabhi bhool bhi na paoge.....


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Re: Bhool nahi paoge.....

«Reply #1 on: March 31, 2010, 09:00:51 AM »

Wah bahut hi khoob Koyal ji lovely creation.excellent. icon_thumleft


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Re: Bhool nahi paoge.....

«Reply #2 on: March 31, 2010, 09:06:15 AM »

So Sweet...!!!

Quote from: KOYAL46 on March 31, 2010, 08:02:37 AM

Khush-naseeb itni toh nahi mein ke
Tum mujhe kabhi dil se yaad karoge
Par itna vishwaas hai hume apne pe
K tum hume kabhi bhool bhi na paoge.....


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cara

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Re: Bhool nahi paoge.....

«Reply #3 on: March 31, 2010, 09:42:20 AM »

Wah kya baat hai.....Koyal ji....

ham itna toh jaante hain aap hamen kabhi nahin apnaoge
par yeh bhi jaante hain aap hame kabhi nahin bhool paonge....


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madhuwesh

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Re: Bhool nahi paoge.....

«Reply #4 on: March 31, 2010, 09:53:22 AM »

Lovely lines Cara ji,bahut khoob icon_thumleft


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KOYAL46

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Re: Bhool nahi paoge.....

«Reply #5 on: March 31, 2010, 12:57:30 PM »

Shukriya Aakaash-ji......

Quote from: @kaash on March 31, 2010, 08:04:29 AM

waah bahut khoob Koyal ji Applause


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KOYAL46

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Re: Bhool nahi paoge.....

«Reply #6 on: March 31, 2010, 01:15:51 PM »

Thanks Madhu-di needed your encouragement as usual....

Quote from: madhuwesh on March 31, 2010, 09:00:51 AM

Wah bahut hi khoob Koyal ji lovely creation.excellent. icon_thumleft


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KOYAL46

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Re: Bhool nahi paoge.....

«Reply #7 on: March 31, 2010, 01:20:07 PM »

Thanks....

Quote from: klaskar on March 31, 2010, 09:06:15 AM

So Sweet...!!!


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KOYAL46

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Re: Bhool nahi paoge.....

«Reply #8 on: March 31, 2010, 01:31:21 PM »

Nice lines Cara-ji.....Sab jaante hain aap....

Quote from: cara on March 31, 2010, 09:42:20 AM

Wah kya baat hai.....Koyal ji....

ham itna toh jaante hain aap hamen kabhi nahin apnaoge
par yeh bhi jaante hain aap hame kabhi nahin bhool paonge....


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riyaz106

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Re: Bhool nahi paoge.....

«Reply #9 on: March 31, 2010, 06:14:24 PM »

Bahut achhi poem hai Koyal ji. Keep writing. Apna ek sher arz karta hun:

Neendo.n se baar baar main uthta hun chaunk kar
Yun teri yaad mujhko sataati hai aaj bhi

Quote from: KOYAL46 on March 31, 2010, 08:02:37 AM

Khush-naseeb itni toh nahi mein ke
Tum mujhe kabhi dil se yaad karoge
Par itna vishwaas hai hume apne pe
K tum hume kabhi bhool bhi na paoge.....


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KOYAL46

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Re: Bhool nahi paoge.....

«Reply #10 on: April 01, 2010, 06:52:03 AM »

Thanks Riyaz-bhai....nice sher by you also....

Quote from: riyaz106 on March 31, 2010, 06:14:24 PM

Bahut achhi poem hai Koyal ji. Keep writing. Apna ek sher arz karta hun:

Neendo.n se baar baar main uthta hun chaunk kar
Yun teri yaad mujhko sataati hai aaj bhi