bichhadte waqt.. "manjum"

by manjum on January 03, 2011, 07:40:58 AM
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Meri auqat unki nazaron main kuchh giri si hai.
bas islie to meri zindgi bikhari si hai.

Gham jo bad gaye had se to aansu aa gaye,
wo kahte hain ki teri ankh main kirkiri si hai.

ke iske baad shayad na usse mil paun,
ye mulaqat bhi usse aakhri si hai.

Bichhadte waqt wo mushkura raha tha bahut,
Mujhe laga ki uski aankh kuchh bhari si hai.

Teri har baat jaise dil ko chhalni karti hai,
Teri nigah mujh par kuchh nashtari si hai.

manju "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: January 03, 2011, 08:13:42 AM »
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bahut khubsurat dard bhara nagma manju ji..
last ke 2 lines me bhi agar 'teri' ki jagah 'uski' lagati to jaada sateek hota.
aap to dard ko lafz dene me ustaad ho.
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thanx
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bheege askh mere unko kirkiri si lagti hai
    shayd unki nigah ab mujhpar bemaani si hai
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thanx
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«Reply #2 on: January 03, 2011, 08:39:48 AM »
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Bahaut khoob Majnu Mann jee..
Aur Nirala jee..

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«Reply #3 on: January 03, 2011, 08:50:05 AM »
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thanks Rahimji..

Daad k lie shukriya rahimji hausla badate rahen.
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«Reply #4 on: January 03, 2011, 08:59:06 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Niralaji

thanks aapne sach kaha aapne 'teri' ki jahah 'uski' hona chahie tha..

hamare dard par wo mushkurate hain.
dekhie unko kitne sitam aate hain.
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«Reply #5 on: January 03, 2011, 11:15:58 AM »
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bahut khoob manju mann ji..
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«Reply #6 on: January 03, 2011, 11:22:05 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya brok..ji

aapki daad hausala badaegi pakka... shukriya
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«Reply #7 on: January 03, 2011, 11:59:39 AM »
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shukriya shihabji..
bahut bahut shukriya..
daad dete rahe....

khush rahen.
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«Reply #8 on: January 03, 2011, 06:56:26 PM »
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kitna gareeb e dil hoga woh sangdil sanam tera
     jo apne mehboob ko dard e zigar de muskurata hai
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thanx
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«Reply #9 on: January 04, 2011, 03:46:37 AM »
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wah niralaji...

mera mahboob hai wo usko yun bura na kaho.
bas yahi sach hai use dil se maine chaha hai.

thanks
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«Reply #10 on: January 04, 2011, 03:50:30 AM »
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apni chahat ka yun afsaana na karo
    beqadron se mohabbat kaisi
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thanx
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«Reply #11 on: January 04, 2011, 03:53:25 AM »
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hamne usko chaha aur to kuch nahin chaha.
ye aur baat hai usne hame nahin chaha.


thanks
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«Reply #12 on: January 04, 2011, 04:02:18 AM »
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iss chahat ka bhi kya kahna
    toot kar chaho jise wahi tod dete hain
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«Reply #13 on: January 04, 2011, 04:12:22 AM »
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dil tod dena uski fitrat hai.
sur usko chahte rahana hamari aadat hai..
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«Reply #14 on: January 04, 2011, 08:15:27 AM »
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Bahut Hi Khub Likha Hai Manjum Ji
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